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Deviot_Aviot
08-19-2008, 03:14 AM
ok, i was browsing my faviote site for reading fanfics the other day under the Fate/Stay Night Section when i came across a great piece of art!

It was titled "Miracle" and is a Fate/Stay Night x berserker crossover...
It has several chapters and each one of the is Awesome!! especially the one where Gilgamesh x Guts + Archer and Berserker x Guts...

I've extracted a bit from the earlier parts of the series and edited it a bit to fit in as a sos fanfic. It was originally Archer x Guts with Emiya watching...

Althought not one of the fabulous parts but i guess this would do as a slight teaser ;)

If you want the link to the full-story as written by the writer "Grunt" in the fanfic site, (its free) pm me

Disclaimer: i do not own this story...i've only edited a bit on the names and the weopens...and maybe much on the ending...

Enjoy~
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He can't help it.

The blacksmith of ess can't help it...

It's impossible for him to look away from this battle.

Every time he tries to avert his gaze his eyes move as if possessing a will of their own.

His own body forces him to watch this match between the one villian he recognizes as Alastor and another man he didn't know.

He can not look away, but neither can he bear to look at them anymore.

For the cursed sword wielded by the Warrior attracts him.

If his body tells him to watch than his entire being tells him to get as far away from that big slab of iron that man wields. He knows that as sure as the sun will rise again in the morning, if he watches this battle just a little bit longer, he will understand it. Understand the thoughts that brought forth its making. Understand the history that made the sword what it is today.

The thought of forging this sword makes him ill.

His stomach churns at the very idea of creating that thing. He doesn't want that. Giving shape to this sword through his own body is something he simply can not do. To forge something so blatantly cursed, his minds screams at the hatred needed to forge this weapon.

After all only hate could burn hot enough to melt the demonic blood this weapon is made of. That is all there is to the blade that could kill even the mightiest of the fantastic creatures in a single blow. Hate and Blood. Blood and Hate.

Yet

Some dark part, deep inside his soul tells him gleefully, one day, he will have a use for that cursed blade and he knows that too. He wants to protest, to deny that possibility, but that voice will not allow such self-delusion.

One day, he will re-forge this sword, make it exactly like what he saw today. He will drink deeply from its hatred and swing it with all the rage he has within himself.

That is what his body tells him, because this body was made for creating swords. That is the only truth behind that statement.

So he burns it into his memory, this sword that screams for blood and death every time it cuts through the cold air.

He watches even when he knows it will damn his soul to do so.

This man swings that blade so easily, swings it as if it were but an extension of his arm.

Too fast for a blade so thick.

Too strong for a sword so heavy.

Too skillful for something so dirty.

Even with his limited skills he can see the difference between the assassin and his black-armored opponent.


One has acquired the skill to fight even Game Masters. A dance-like movement, graceful, yet a hidden rage lurks behind those gentle moves. And the longer the fight lasts the hotter that rage burns, as if it was being drawn out by the mere presence of his enemy. It is those movements that he understands. Within his mind the Assassin can see himself doing them even before actually moving his body. Its only natural. Those moves fit him perfectly, as if they had only waited for him to discover them.

The other one simply holds his blade, his stance reveals nothing, yet they all know that his skill is beyond the Assassin.

When it comes to swords that black-armored warrior is just that good. It is a simply truth.

For anyone else that giant blade would be a hindrance at best, a fatal weakness at worst.

To the Warrior it seems like it is the most perfect weapon he has ever used.

It is crude, cumbersome and far too big as far as swords go.

But the power it holds is as undeniable as is its thirst for blood. The reach it grants him serves him well and to him who can wield that sword with one hand alone, its weight is more of a comfort than a hindrance.

Sword and Swordsman. Power and Skill.

It is a deadly combination.

Deadly for even the most powerful of Assassins.

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Confronted with such a relentless onslaught of attacks the Assassin gives ground.

But he does not falter. His beautiful twin blades have been shattered once already.

That taught him the folly of blocking that mans strikes.

So he dodges.

He parries.

But he does not block anymore. It would be too wasteful to have his blades broken again.

He draws his opponent in. His skill might not be able to reach the Warrior but there is something he can see. With those eyes schooled by battle after battle he can see it.

The road to victory.

That single path that only appears once in a battle.

He can see it, taste it and most importantly follow it.

Now all he needs to do is to force his enemy unto that road. Just one step, that is all that man needs to take on this road and it will be over. From then onwards the only viable outcome is his complete victory.

That is his ability honed by combat, by waiting the true moment his opponent shows weakness, which is when he’ll strike in a fatal and critical blow.

He smiles, cynical as always.

Victory is not assured, but that has never stopped him before.

He can not stop it.

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Dev: I need to cut the part here because of the word limit >< but i will post the other part below~

Deviot_Aviot
08-19-2008, 03:15 AM
Here's the second part... :cool:


Disclaimer: I do not own this story, and this is only 18% of the original awesome story
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The warrior’s face twists into a frightening smirk as he realizes something.

That man, his opponent, he possesses something that makes him enjoy this battle more than he would have expected.

The assassin’s strikes lack strength, but his speed is beyond his own. This battle makes his heart beat so fast. Every time his sword slashes through the space his enemy occupied mere seconds ago his grin grows.

He is planning something. The red-clad assassin hides it well but to someone that lived his entire life with the sword in his hand it becomes painfully obvious. He is planning something, to create an opening, to deliver an attack that will kill him in one blow. To take care of him once and for all.

His scars start to ache from his grin. He can not help it. This guy, above anyone else, he wants to cut him down. To drive his sword into that body and splatter his blood on the stairs of this forsaken magician’s convent.

His attacks come faster and faster, the twin blade that is no bigger than a dagger becomes a dark blur. Yet, each of those strikes the Warrior successfully parries, and strikes back. The three blades that engage against each other in combat soon moves faster for the blacksmith to anticipate its path. It could easily cleave him apart. Yet, the blacksmith watches, at a safe distance, unseen to neither the Assassin nor the Warrior, As much as they do not wish to be seen.

The assassin’s smirk explains it all when he finally sees his chance.

The instant the warrior’s momentum forces him to show his back to his opponent the warrior also realizes the assassin’s plan.

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Its not even a second, not enough time to mount a counter attack and one of the assassin’s twin blades find his target “Blind Side!”

The warrior’s face grimaced in pain as poison flows through his body, paralyzing him for a moment. A few seconds. A few precious seconds. The first part of his plan achieved, the assassin jumps back.

Even before he lands another set of blades manifests at his hands, the moment his second foot touches the ground he has a complete set of twin blades once again.

The Warrior’s eyes widen as he realized that this is one fatal strike he could not avoid, with the poison of blindside still coursing through his body. But he still smiles.

As the assassin collects enough force for the strike he is about to land the warrior braced himself.

“Elite Item Sweeper!!”


With a terrifying roar the battle ends.

The following explosion swallows the black swordsman, hides him from view, as if granting a last act of mercy by hiding the loser of this battle from view.

The Assassin has won, no human could survive such a blow.

The sound of metal upon stone proves all expectations wrong.

The strike that should have killed the warrior has only bought the assassin a short break from battle.

The dust settles, revealing an empty staircase.

The dark sword that descends from above gives no warning and only a frantic dodge saves the Assassin from dying on the spot.

The ground protests at the abuse even as the sword splits it open as it were soft earth.

For a second the assassin contemplates about continuing this battle.

The black Warrior comes at him again, this time the sword can not be seen anymore. The gigantic lump of iron moves too fast for even the famed eyes of the assassin. A howl echoes through the night, he can not say if it comes from his enemy or some kind of animal.

Gathering all his strength, the Assassin turns and runs.

Alastor forced to run. How the mighty falls.

“Extract!!” The assassin disappears from view, only milliseconds away from the cursed blade swung by the warrior.

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This battle is over. The horrifying grimace of the warrior proved that. Alastor's
blade had hit true, he was sure of that. And Yet the warrior still stood, yet he still fought on, his strength and stamina glowed in his body in a way that the blacksmith had never thought possible in a human being.

Until now.

In a shaken way the blacksmith slowly backed away from where he stood, for worry of alerting the warrior that he was there, and after gaining a fair distance, he broke off into a sprint, the image of the Cursed blade in his mind.

Yes, he thought. He will definitely forge a blade exactly like that. No matter what it takes.

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Back in the safety of the shadows the assassin contemplates all that had happened.

He has seen a lot, but this unnerves even him.

Alastor, the supposely King of Darkness, is unnerved...

How preposterous.

It is something that can not be denied however, the boy he knew years ago, the man he fought before handing himself over to the dark lord and the swordsman, all three of them, they are the same.

Three different sides of the same coin. A shudder runs down his spine at that thought.

Why is it so easy for the young and honest childhood friend to change into the beast with that evil sword, cutting apart his enemies? Why do his clothes change so easily to red and his hair to white and goes all the way from their village to oppose him years ago, outside the Dark Lord's fort? And why had his friend, now turn himself over and indulge in the Evil that he himself had opposed Alastor into indulged in long ago?

It is impossible.

It must be impossible.

It scares him, because, as someone who knew the beast before he was a beast he can not deny the truth he already knows.

Tylar...He still calls himself warrior, Alastor snorts at the thought, he would have made a perfect monster he thought. But one thing is for sure, it is beyond him to kill it. The beast that Tylar Tramis had evolved to would not die tonight.

So he retreats for now.

As he runs through the woods he can hear its howl of fury, the sound of iron cleaving a part stone and wood.

There is no reason to gamble with his life anymore tonight. His prey already escaped.

They will fight again, he is sure of it.

And next time he will not hold back.

Because when fighting against that black swordsman, holding back may just cost him his life.



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Rofl..what do you think?

Deviot_Aviot
08-23-2008, 08:02 AM
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