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autarchaurzel
11-12-2008, 09:06 AM
leave your comments on my story here please, its a work in progress so i'll change it if you have any good suggestions and be as nice or critical as you want XD
MissBoo
11-12-2008, 09:13 AM
write moore.. but dont leave me waiting for 40 mins :P <33
tis good hunny.. funneh :P your a noob :P
12blood123
11-12-2008, 10:09 AM
XD hey Aurzel its Ayya.. i like the story and i was woundering if there is gonna be a second part XD
autarchaurzel
11-12-2008, 12:51 PM
of course there is, i'll add more tomorrow and then either a weekly or twice monthly addition
darthnish
11-17-2008, 09:57 PM
more please, and thank you caboose ^^
dragonfly_83
11-18-2008, 09:38 AM
Cant wait till next chapter! Keep up the good work Aurz <(^_^)>
darthnish
11-21-2008, 05:58 AM
when ish the next one coming out? i like the n00bie aurzel very much ^^
jaxman13
11-21-2008, 07:30 AM
great writing and i liked the story~
i cant wait to here aurzel's first KQ story:D
keep it up- hope aurzel doesnt lvl faster than me though:p
autarchaurzel
11-21-2008, 12:44 PM
i'm looking forward to the slime kq myself, already planning out how it'll go, and everyone tune in tomorrow for chapter 4 ^^ maybe even chapter 5 on sunday if i can finish it off in time
jaxman13
11-21-2008, 07:51 PM
OMG i luved chapter 4!!!
its so fun to see how similar the story is to the game:D
i would luve if u keep the pace up- reeding a chapter a day of the story is so fun
autarchaurzel
11-23-2008, 03:36 PM
sorry, no way i could do a chapter a day, i do have school you know XD
i'm aiming for 1 a week, or if i'm particularly inspired, twice a week
i'd intended to post another chapter now but i didnt get a chance to get it typed up, sometime this week it'll be up
jaxman13
11-24-2008, 05:47 PM
allrite~:)
im just so eager...chapter 5 was good as well (me wants chapter 6 to see who or what the thing is) :D If its a bored imp,then aurzels prolly screwed less he can resight thos heal spells real fast^^
autarchaurzel
11-24-2008, 10:20 PM
wouldnt you like to know ;)
it'll be up by thursday/friday
henriksson83
11-29-2008, 03:15 AM
Omg i thought u were gonna die!! Dont scare me like that :S Was worth the extra day of waiting though :D
jaxman13
11-30-2008, 09:16 PM
gj as always~
autarchaurzel
11-30-2008, 10:29 PM
thanks and as a little teaser, the king slime kq chapter is soon ;)
darthnish
12-03-2008, 11:04 PM
hmm caboose has been to quiet, wonder what he;s upto ;P?
zephan_wrathverge
12-03-2008, 11:46 PM
nice i like it good work
darthnish
12-06-2008, 12:52 AM
gah ebil caboose >.> give us the kq chapter D:
autarchaurzel
12-06-2008, 01:09 AM
all in good time my dear tex ;)
liqeur
12-12-2008, 11:47 PM
cute noobly aurzel :)
you've been making your fans wait too long for the slime KQ chapter!
also... *waiting for my appearance* so make it snappy!
<3
autarchaurzel
12-13-2008, 12:38 AM
and the kq chapters (thats right chapters) begin, stay tuned for part 3 of the trilogy kq chapters, sunday XD
autarchaurzel
01-08-2009, 09:26 AM
thank you anyone who's still reading this for waiting so patiently ... yeah right >.> ... over the christmas holidays, chapters 11 and 12 are waiting for you, lemme know what you think ^^
darthnish
01-12-2009, 05:47 AM
oh god finally caboose i thought young aurzey had sunk into the depths of the thread abyss o.0, good chapter ^^
DF001
01-12-2009, 06:03 AM
why do you call him caboose
autarchaurzel
01-12-2009, 06:09 AM
see same reason i call her tex, from red vs blue
... *gets killed by navar* thanks a lot gaara >.>
darthnish
01-12-2009, 02:46 PM
why do you call him caboose
cause he is caboosey
DF001
01-12-2009, 02:50 PM
still, why T.T
darthnish
01-12-2009, 03:15 PM
i donno zapi i just like callin him caboose :3
autarchaurzel
01-13-2009, 03:55 AM
wow talk about derailing a topic, dude either comment on my story or stop it >.<
DF001
01-13-2009, 04:40 AM
Well, to be honest, the stories are kinda..walls of text.
darthnish
01-13-2009, 04:44 AM
Well, to be honest, the stories are kinda..walls of text.
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i like it :3
autarchaurzel
01-13-2009, 10:39 AM
what do you want a picture book? >.>
i'll have you know there are many people who actually like the story
autarchaurzel
01-30-2009, 01:20 AM
as an apology for not getting last weekend's chapter in, i posted them both now and made them nice and long, enjoy :p
darthnish
01-30-2009, 05:05 AM
another great read, well done caboose.
autarchaurzel
02-01-2009, 02:28 AM
thanks, and i hope you were all very confused by that last chapter ;)
autarchaurzel
02-20-2009, 02:50 PM
sorry i havent posted in a while but mock exams coming up and all that
but here's 2 & 1/2 chapters for you to enjoy
more coming soon
henriksson83
02-20-2009, 04:03 PM
Ty ty ty :D
autarchaurzel
03-18-2009, 11:22 AM
after a brief break *cough* exams *cough* and a minor round of wrestling with writer's block >.>
Aurzel's Adventures is back up and running with 2 new awesome chapters and a third one to come either today or tomorrow :P
autarchaurzel
05-07-2009, 03:19 PM
Aurzel's Adventures is back in an epic new chapter with the promise of at least 2 more chapters to come :P
liqeur
05-10-2009, 11:45 AM
sa-weet! they're back! ^^
monkt
05-28-2009, 03:09 PM
Woot woot, come to think of it, I didn't kno i was Aurzey's good friend ^.^
(i haven't played for a very long time so i guess i'm a nub) v.v
<---Narayuth 7x o.-
Naraveth 4x
Apoline ftw!
monkt
05-28-2009, 03:14 PM
Hmm, Hey Aurzey, i'm a comic book maker which i draw pretty well, if it's alright... can i make a comic book about ur story? :O
Naraveth 4x
Apoline ftw!
autarchaurzel
06-06-2009, 09:55 AM
NARA OMG!!!!!
and yeah of course you can if you want :D
autarchaurzel
06-06-2009, 10:18 AM
i would have posted this latest chapter sooner but i hit a block part of the way through and took a while to push through it
liqeur
06-14-2009, 09:39 AM
Oooh shadow realm! I must be dumber than story-Aurz 'cause I'm confused!! Write more so I can be un-confused ^__^
monkt
06-19-2009, 04:12 PM
Btw Aurzey, Gratz on becoming lvl 8x, N... hi there fireflint^^; howz it goin girl? o.o
Oh n Aurzey i wanna give back the 100s when i plvled u, i think i don't even deserve it v.v....
Naraveth 4x
Apoline ftw!
autarchaurzel
06-19-2009, 05:15 PM
dont be silly, besides i gots lots of moneys keep it
and fire what's confusing? so i know what to focus on if there's ever another exposition
liqeur
06-19-2009, 10:24 PM
what else is shadow realm used for? are you talking about job change? lol? O_o
monkt
06-20-2009, 01:37 AM
f-fireflint ignored Wolfie? *whines* i see how joo r >.> still stubborn as eva?~ XD
N Aurzey i got 2 pg. of ur story comic finished :) just need to make a couple more =_=
Naraveth 4x
Apoline ftw!
liqeur
06-23-2009, 11:02 PM
who did i ignore? O,o
monkt
06-30-2009, 05:30 PM
Joo ignored meh~~
AURZEY!! i finished one chapter about ur adventure but.. i forgot how to put it on show.. i ish useless x.x
liqeur
06-30-2009, 09:39 PM
Nuuu! I didn't! I said hi x(
Aurz... NEW CHAPTER PLZ!
autarchaurzel
07-15-2009, 06:36 AM
what else is shadow realm used for? are you talking about job change? lol? O_o
hmm good idea, but job change is an instance dungeon so it's not the same
and the shadow realm doesnt exist ... as far as i know ... i just like how it sounds and how it explains the monster respawn as well as certain other plot related parts of the story :P
monkt
07-20-2009, 01:53 PM
Cweepy~ o.o
Aurzey Aurzey, new chapter plox D:
*gives puppy eyes*
autarchaurzel
07-31-2009, 06:40 PM
sorry but i has little drive to write atm, though i must admit the support those few of you that do read it give is very touching
T3h_SyN
08-18-2009, 08:03 PM
sorry but i has little drive to write atm, though i must admit the support those few of you that do read it give is very touching
Okay... You need to write something or I'm going to forget how your story went.
autarchaurzel
02-07-2010, 04:06 PM
you all thought this was gone but it's back with 2 new absolutely awesome chapters