The Sorcerer's SS + Poem Thread - DO NOT REPLY

[behhinu]

Hello hello!

This thread is for my Contestants Screen Shots and Poems, please do not reply to this thread, if you would like to comment please comment on the main thread which can be found here (http://outspark.com/forums/showthread.php?t=130077) thanks.

*~*~* List of users to submit *~*~*

viciousrawr
Shaden
THr3eS01di3Rs
KyttiKatt
LadyLandford
xIOhenryOIx
EvenSmarterChild
devin_nicolai
xlonethreat
BlinggBlingg

These users are automatically disqualified since they did not post their Poem + Screen Shot in the time given.






behhinu

[behhinu]

*Reserved for viciousrawr Poem and Screen Shot*

[behhinu]

*Reserved for Shaden Poem and Screen Shot*

[behhinu]

*Reserved for THr3eS01di3Rs Poem and Screen Shot*

[behhinu]

*Reserved for Cha0sTribe Poem and Screen Shot*

My entry
Hopefully my fancy picture will cover my lame poem lmao XD

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/2141/corpsekillingmaiden2cs8.jpg


Corpse Killing Maiden
~ A Witch’s Memoir ~

Hold me and lick my bloody fingers,
With those pathetic faces, call me a Savior of Men,
Let the Bell of Elderine tolls hard till it sunders,
The witch from Hell is here, and don’t forget to say Amen.

So live in fear for a little longer, hopeless folks...

Moonlight Tomb shall be trembled,
All the unmarked graves shall be plundered,
All the dead ones shall be painfully rumbled,
For I, the Corpse Killing Maiden has arrived with hatred.

Hold me and caress my crimson hair,
With those bitter tongues, call me your Lady,
Let the Goddess of Isya frowns upon my affair,
Yet with her blessing hands, she offers shiny gems feebly.

Even so, let the soul harvesting festival begins!

To hear those alluring and sweet sounds again,
Decayed bones and rotten limbs crackled by the rosen flame,
It was a beautiful song, yet my heart was crying in vain.

To see those soulless bodies shivering in pain,
Swollen hearts and dark blood froze slowly in rhyme,
It was a magnificent view, yet it was a hurtful memory to gain.

So hold me again and kiss my murdering hands,
With those dried tears, call me your Saint.

Even if you ask why, simply it is because…
I am the Corpse Killing Maiden.

In the end, human’s hearts are just fickle things…

[behhinu]

*Reserved for KyttiKatt Poem and Screen Shot*

[behhinu]

*Reserved for Yoshikidd7 Poem and Screen Shot*

well im still only 70 but ive played in gm kq on my bros toon, here is my poem lol its not that great : ( i dunt think i can get the perfect screenie, maybe if there is a boss even soon ill see what i can do lol)


Boo! yelled Gordon Master
OH No! what a disaster!
i have forgoton my pots
stay in these safe spots
massive damage, i have died in kq
the screen changes it's hue
time to win! lets get up!
we meet again gordon master,
Harder, Better Faster,
STRONGER,
at last we have defeated him, he wont bother us any longer
now what did i receive?... until we meet again GM, untill we meet again...

http://i35.tinypic.com/2mo303q.png

[behhinu]

*Reserved for FatalLace Poem and Screen Shot*

here's my entry... lol... i used an old screenshot from back in July. The screenie was taken during a Fight-A-Boss Event, using the "hide mode" really gives you that me-against-the-world type of feeling.


http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg190/dharatakamiya/screenshots/PoetryContestcopy.png

[behhinu]

*Reserved for LadyLandford Poem and Screen Shot*

[behhinu]

*Reserved for xIOhenryOIx Poem and Screen Shot*

[behhinu]

*Reserved for EvenSmarterChild Poem and Screen Shot*

[behhinu]

*Reserved for .Honor Poem and Screen Shot*

Here we go, just finished ^-^. A line or two has some hidden sentimental value but I think the rest is easy to understand. Please enjoy!

http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/8043/screenshot050rp3.jpg

"A Dawning Sky on a Starry Night"
- To the Person I love

There once was a poem breathed soft in my ear
One of a night, with a sky so clear
A sparkling dream, a distant sight
A dawning sky on a starry night

A silhouette on the golden moon
Shimmering, hanging, like a precious dubloon
A painting on a canvas taken flight
Moving slowly, shining bright

The dancing in the grass from the chilling breeze
Pensive whispering of the peaceful trees
The time is fixed. The mood is right.
A warm, loving hand, holding tight

Wind chimes sing sweetly from afar
Like the silver smooth velvet inside a car
The heavens are fair, a heart that's white
Protecting from harm, winning the fight

A wish on a star, a promise still kept
The thought in my mind of how long I slept
The sky is black, but as time might
Dawn will come with a ray of light.

[behhinu]

*Reserved for devin_nicolai Poem and Screen Shot*

[behhinu]

*Reserved for xlonethreat Poem and Screen Shot*

[behhinu]

*Reserved for crypto0222 Poem and Screen Shot*

Peace and Serenity
Love and Loss

http://i34.tinypic.com/2wpp407.jpg

For the love of life,
And this clash of blades
I sit in this sea,
of thoughts of glee
Thinking of she,
who made me love
But for the fall of life
where all peace is distraught
just when i thought,
I Loss'd of you
I remember the peace
and serenity
and love
and loss
and all think i have no fear
untill
this
blade
finds
my
heart.

~Fin~


When i wrote this poem i was going through some love issues and thought this fits well with the game, in a way that the marrage has been introduced and this is a cool place in the game (Forest Of Mist). you need to remember this is both Ye Olde Englishe Poetrye and New English Poetry and is the thought of my mind during this episodical event of my life.

[behhinu]

*Reserved for heartlostangel Poem and Screen Shot*

http://i218.photobucket.com/albums/cc273/Heartlostangel/poem1.jpg

The Abyss~
MistressKiba
Epith


Alone but not lonely,
I work through the night,
Pledged to keep those I love
Alive, 'tis only right

The abyss can be scary,
Not for those faint of heart,
Assasins come from everywhere
To begin an upstart

I watch other brave souls,
Fade to their death,
Promising revenge
With their last breath

Potions, scrolls and weapons,
Enhanced or bought plain,
Bring salvation and death to all
One and the same

Forever here rests many of those,
Whom we will all miss,
The archer, fighter, cleric or mage
Who thought they could take the abyss...



Lol, ended up rhyming a bit after all :) Enjoy :) I first had the poem in the pic but it disappeared between uploading and here somewhere, hehe.

[behhinu]

*Reserved for mavricgabriel Poem and Screen Shot*


A Fiesta poem

There is a land called Isya
Where the brave and true resides.
A place blessed by goddess Teva,
With happiness, prosperity and pride.
You can roam the land with freedom and peace
Up to your heart's content
To hills, to seasides on hobbies we go
We shop, we grind, we vend.

Although I say this with great heed and warning
Open your eyes and see,
Monsters of all sizes also resides
Reeking havoc and mayhem with glee.
But never fret my good friend,
Goddess Teva always has an answer.
Four champions from her golden wings
Shall keep you from harm and danger.

The brave and strong Fighter,
His sword will lead the way.
The cunningly stealth Archer,
With poisons of different array.
The wise & powerful Mage,
With powers of all the elements.
All cared by the holy Cleric,
With great healing experience.

And so my friends I leave you now with message from the heart
Parting is such sweet sorrow, and now we must part.
But never be sad, nor cry nor gloom for we will meet again.
Come home, Online, hurry now….
FIESTA FOR THE WIN!!!

http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb43/mavricgabriel/final.png
-a crappy poem by mavricgabriel – Bijou server

[behhinu]

*Reserved for devonasoulblade Poem and Screen Shot*

Lost love
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/3375/poeamyf3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

here we go my poem hope you like it. my first event :p

[behhinu]

*Reserved for BlinggBlingg Poem and Screen Shot*

[behhinu]

*Reserved for gigee_bunny Poem and Screen Shot*

Here is the poem Gigee wrote for
the Dreamgirls of Fiesta!
I hope everyone listens from Apoline,
Bijou, Epith and Teva.

To the minds of two female characters
came a brand new fresh idea
as they were roaming around Elderine
comtemplating and schemin’

Let’s create a brand new guild
Only for the ladies
Although the leader’s level
isn’t in the Eighties.

But Gigee along with Protectora,
MistressKiba & DarkGodess,
Velonica & her other guild
mates have all remained modest

As each and every member
moved on, friendships were created,
while pride in the Dreamgirls
was always undebated.

Only one goal in each of
their minds as they grew:
Respect for each other and
to Fiesta: be loyal and true!

In Fiesta, there are guild wars,
marriages, newbies and divorces,
GM’s, GL’s, CL’s, CM’s,
CSR’s and all other supporters.

Through it all: the events, Kingdom Quests,
costumes, mounts and new pets,
I simply know that Fiesta rises
above all the rest!

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq289/Gigee_Boyd/screenshot021-1.jpg

[behhinu]

*Reserved for kawaiichibineko Poem and Screen Shot*

My Sweet home

On moon lite nights i travel there
That place where the monsters can be found
With Bats and spiders everywhere
My night of fun will be bound
Wild Imps and Zombie Kings
Lay slain upon the ground
For in the darkness of my tome
Their screams are all that sound

Darken skies with moon filled nights
I watch the ghoul go by
Flicks of ghost and floating lights
Every wonder how staffs could fly?
In ageless graveyards they'll come to you
before the night is done
The graveyard wolves will come for you
so they can have some fun

But in this death filled place
where darkest and mayhem rule
with lights that float up in to space
and circle round the moon
there is such beauty and such grace
where spirits sing their haunting tune
But this is the place that I call home
My sweet Moonlight Tome

http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr52/kawaiitalamoon/moonrun.gif?t=1228530174

My final Kathlean Hawkarcher Teva

[behhinu]

*reserved for Sarah_c*

Lost love
I never stop to realize
How lonely I would be
I never thought the day would come
That I will set free.

Your voice was never sweeter
Than the day you said “goodbye”
But the memory of that is fading away.

You never looked so wonderful
As the day you walked away
I used to say, "<33"
But the memory of that is fading away.

No matter how much I try
I can't forget you darling
You'll never know how much it hurts

If I knew then what I know now
You’d still be kissing me
But instead there's someone else's lips
Where mine used to be

Perhaps I am not that attractive
Because I have a pumpkin looking face
But I can’t care much more
Because an angel is coming to get me home.
Back to the heaven side—Uruga.
I shall vanish with my memory
But on this piece of rock
And set free to the heaven.

Remember,
Art does not lie.

^^

Here are the 2 Screen Shots
http://i367.photobucket.com/albums/oo111/sarah_queen_c/screenshot010.jpg

and

http://i367.photobucket.com/albums/oo111/sarah_queen_c/screenshot013.jpg

Thx!
TC

[behhinu]

[EDIT]

Removed gigee_bunny from the submission list because she posted her poem today.
Removed sarah_c from the submission list because she sent me a PM with her Poem + Screen Shot.

Please do not replay to this thread.

[behhinu]

Here is the Page where you can find all the Poems and Screen Shots, any comments please leave them here, also in a week I will announce the 10 runner ups.

[crypto0222]

wow these poems are amazing... im starting to doubt my poetry now...

i shouldn't have posted first and looked at the competition first.....

[DF001]

He asked not to replay >.>

[crypto0222]

Here is the Page where you can find all the Poems and Screen Shots, any comments please leave them here, also in a week I will announce the 10 runner ups.

ahem, learn to read =3
hehe im only joking, i think

[heartlostangel]

Okay, Hi. I've been at the hospital w/ my boyfried who has blood clots in his lungs, and I thought I check and see what's going on. I am quite surprised to find my name on the disquailified list because I never posted my poem, however, my poem and screenie are already posted in this thread, and the other, they were posted way before the 16th. It's the poem about the abyss. I signed the screenie w/ my IGN, MistressKiba, but the post was made under my OS name if you look in the proper column. I'm confuzzled, do I still have a shot or not? Thanks for an answer, this contest has been a lot of fun, so far anyways ;D

Yea, just to let you know, my poem appears on page ten of the original thread and the time stamp on it is 12-03-2008, 12:59 PM. XD Thanks!

[Celtic_Princess]

Okay, Hi. I've been at the hospital w/ my boyfried who has blood clots in his lungs, and I thought I check and see what's going on. I am quite surprised to find my name on the disquailified list because I never posted my poem, however, my poem and screenie are already posted in this thread, and the other, they were posted way before the 16th. It's the poem about the abyss. I signed the screenie w/ my IGN, MistressKiba, but the post was made under my OS name if you look in the proper column. I'm confuzzled, do I still have a shot or not? Thanks for an answer, this contest has been a lot of fun, so far anyways ;D

Yea, just to let you know, my poem appears on page ten of the original thread and the time stamp on it is 12-03-2008, 12:59 PM. XD Thanks!


I'm sorry to hear about your boyfriends condition, I hope everything turns out alright.

I looked in my own response notebook (I've written an analysis for everyone at this point I just need to send it) and I have you in there...so I'd consider you still in. It was a simple mistake ^^ I'll PM Behinnu to make sure he sees that he missed one :)

[crypto0222]

when will we know the results?its been 1 week since the deadline has been met.

=P

[behhinu]

when will we know the results?its been 1 week since the deadline has been met.

=P

sinful_delicious is confirming something aboiut the results because there is a tie between 2 people :P

[gigibunny]

sinful_delicious is confirming something aboiut the results because there is a tie between 2 people :P

Best of luck to everyone!!! This was a fun contest!!! :D and I cannot wait for results either :)

[crypto0222]

aagh im so exited :P and i wonder who tied?

[gigibunny]

aagh im so exited :P and i wonder who tied?

No idea but I liked your screenshot...peaceful :D

[crypto0222]

hehe thanks =3, i liked your poem... although a little sexist but good all the way and a cool screenshot with the hearts above your head

[gigibunny]

I hope we hear an answer soon for it would be such a Christmas present to the winner, don't ya think?? :D

^^

[crypto0222]

hehe that would be a great christmas present :P

[behhinu]

And hhhheeerrrreeeeeeeee we are going to announce the 3 participants that passed! and here theyyyy aarreeeeeeee!!!

FatalLace
mavricgabriel
.Honor

Those were the TOP 3!

Cha0sTribe
heartslostangel
gigee_bunny
kawaiichibineko

From those 4 participants left only 2 more can pass!

who will it be?

2 participants from the list

Cha0sTribe
heartslostangel
gigee_bunny
kawaiichibineko

has to post why should they pass to the Top 4 and 5! after that the judges will judge who should pass or not!

Cha0sTribe, heartslostangel, gigee_bunny, kawaiichibineko has to post this in 4 days! from now! (24/12/2008) to be able to pass to the top 5!

[gigibunny]

I cannot post why I think I should move on.... I am sure I am taking this a different way but in my opinion, you are asking me to say why I think I am better than the other three....being as generous as I am, I honestly can say I am not....

So if this causes me to be withdrawn for not saying why I am better than someone else, so be it.

This poetry contest has been fun and I really enjoyed writing it and doing the screenie. I, however, think that I cannot move on further because we all did our best in the entire event.

My poem didn't make the top 3 and that is fine with me :) for I mainly did it to have fun-which I did...

So thank you overall for giving me the chance to participate and sorry if I cannot do the rest in order to advance. :)

But, again, I never really have thought the same as others and I love being generous, kind and so forth. The contest was to show all of our abilities which congrats to everyone who participated! This thread shows that we all had the talent to not only post something, but have the courage to do so. And that is a good enough reward for me!!! :D

Thank you once again for allowing me to participate and make it this far.

[behhinu]

gigibunny, I think you must have miss understood IT'S NOT why are you better then the others, BUT why you should pass to the Top 4 or 5! :D

You might need to re-consider.

[heartlostangel]

Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays Everyone!

Hmmm. Why should i pass? As my dear Gigibunny pointed out, definitely not because any one poem is better than another. They are all wonderful and I wish everyone could win a prize. As for schemantics, my poem goes well with my screenshot, the overall theme matches very well, for I am proud of the results after spending 3 days taking various screenshots in order to get just the right one XD. I used completely proper english, and a spell checker(though I'm sure everyone did too). My poem also relates to Fiesta in general, and was written specifically for the contest, instead of changing some words around from a previously written poem I have that would of fit very well into my theme. The abyss is a very intidimating place to new players as well as those not as high lvl as others, yet I've put it out there with a slightly different take, and a bit humorously, in my opinion, at least, lol. I've thoroughly enjoyed participating and although I've been having a really bad month in real life, this contest has let me blow of some steam and have a goal to accomplish. Thanks so much for considering me for the next round!

[behhinu]

No problem heartlostangel good luck !!

[kawaiichibineko]

I worked really hard on my poem to allow the reader to see and feel what i do when I'm in Moonlight Tomb. I wrote 5 different poems to start with and then had my sister choose the one she liked the most then I ended up changing in like 25 times. I took a day's worth of video to find the perfect screen shot but it still wasn't right I want people the see the the beauty and Tranquility of Moonlight Tomb. how the skies off set colors give a prefect background to the luminescent glowing balls of light that flow like souls through the night sky. I know we all worked hard but I can help but wish to carry on and see if a can win because poetry is one of my few passion that I still can do even if it is sometimes hard. It's something that has always been with me. thank you.

[Cha0sTribe]

First, thank you for reading my poem and putting me on the list.


As for answering the OP question "Why you should pass to the top 4 or 5", I think the simplest answer is my poem is different and unexpected to read.

In my opinion, a poem is a language of gestures, thus it allows people to impress not only positives feelings (happy, love, honor, etc), but a negative feelings (sad, anger, disgust, etc).

For that, I decided to take a bold action by choosing a different path for my poem. A path that which lead the readers to the "dark side" of the story. I wanted the readers feel surprised, conflicted and yet getting attached to the story.

Back on my poem, it's a my own Fiesta story in Dark Version. I was thinking, WHAT IF:

- Elderine Town was never a happy place to live with. It's always under sieged by demons and monsters, thus letting Elderine under the brink of destruction. The newest threat was from the undead armies from the Moonlight Tomb.

- People of Isya had never befriend with mages. They considered mages as evil witches who practicing dark arts. They believed magics and sorcery are Taboo, and associated with evils and demons. Mages, who are proud and strongest race, considered human as weak, pathetic and inconsiderate race. As the result, it left a strong hatred between the human and the mages.

Finally, I hope people will fully enjoy reading my poem. It has its own way to tell its story. Like I said in my last line of the poem; In the end, human's hearts are just fickle things.

Thank you again, and Merry Christmas to all.

Note: Lately, I've been watching a dark anime about hunting demons and evil spirits, so yeah I think you can guess where are those my inspiration came from =p.

[gigibunny]

Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays Everyone!

Hmmm. Why should i pass? As my dear Gigibunny pointed out, definitely not because any one poem is better than another. They are all wonderful and I wish everyone could win a prize. As for schemantics, my poem goes well with my screenshot, the overall theme matches very well, for I am proud of the results after spending 3 days taking various screenshots in order to get just the right one XD. I used completely proper english, and a spell checker(though I'm sure everyone did too). My poem also relates to Fiesta in general, and was written specifically for the contest, instead of changing some words around from a previously written poem I have that would of fit very well into my theme. The abyss is a very intidimating place to new players as well as those not as high lvl as others, yet I've put it out there with a slightly different take, and a bit humorously, in my opinion, at least, lol. I've thoroughly enjoyed participating and although I've been having a really bad month in real life, this contest has let me blow of some steam and have a goal to accomplish. Thanks so much for considering me for the next round!

All the poems are great and I do wish everyone could win! It takes a lot of courage to do this: we are displaying on a contest that, looking through the threads, has had a lot of response.

I also have gotten lots of attention on the poem I wrote about Fiesta and my guild: the Dreamgirls. As fun as this contest has been, I am still going to ask to not advance to the next round. I wrote what I did for my guild and whom I stand for today. The work and effort that went into it was fun to do but alas, they are very important to me. I will always be willing to take the heat (good or bad) and thus this simplest poem was a small gratitude for them. I have been called seixst and other wonderful names for starting out with a girls only guild.

I have not complained and thus pushed on. But as for a contest, that as fun as it was to enter and participate in, I believe this is where I would like to end. It has been fun and I wish the best of luck to the other top three and the three that want to advance.

I, humbly, am asking to be -- hmm what is the word? -- withdrawn from it.

I believe all the other poems are far better than mine and if people look at me badly for withdrawing, then so be it. But I believe that I have done the best I could against awesome competition.

Thank you for allowing me to participate.

[behhinu]

Pleasure was all mine Gigee ^^ thanks for participating and still keeping updates with the contest.

[behhinu]

I know you waited for long and long! but I am going to have the WINNER's name in 2 days!

Good luck! ^^

[FatalLace]

sorcerer-

thanks again for hosting this contest, it was a lot of fun =)

eagerly anticipating the results... my archer was so young in that screenie xD

happy new year to u

~Fatal

[behhinu]

Thanks FatalLace appriciated.

Winner will be announced later on TODAY!

[heartlostangel]

Hehe did I miss it?
<3

[Adrichiang]

Hehe did I miss it?
<3

Hmm... I do not see a list of winners on the OP or most recent postings in this thread by the sponsor. Perhaps he have no decided on a winner yet or you just private messaged the winners instead?

I may suggest you PM the sponsor for more detailed info ^^.

[Celtic_Princess]

Hmm... I do not see a list of winners on the OP or most recent postings in this thread by the sponsor. Perhaps he have no decided on a winner yet or you just private messaged the winners instead?

I may suggest you PM the sponsor for more detailed info ^^.

O.o I agree with Ah_Rin, as a judge I know I submitted my final vote several days ago...so at this point I would suggest PMing behinnu for more information.

[russuboy]

Yay!! well done behhinu

[behhinu]

Had some IRL issues guys to deal with I am sorry and as the both judges voted the winner is...

Ummm...

*coughs* and the winnneerrrr iiisss..

*drinks water* and the winner is...

*sniffs* and the winner for this year contest is....

*asks to the judge "Am I looking ok?" ....

Hahahahaha

And the winner for this contest issssssssssssssssssss

!!!!!CHAOSTRIBE!!!!!

Welldone to all the contestants that participated in this contgest and thanks for the judges who made a great job.

Thanks all from the heart.

[Cha0sTribe]

Wow, Thanks! That was unexpected :)

Again, thank you behhinu and all the judges for choosing my poem, I'm really appreciate it.

So, it means I can choose ANY 2 items, correct? I don't really remember already =p.