Forum MVP: Fiesta Carol Re-Write

[CM_Saphar]

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Forum MVP: Fiesta Carol Re-Write

Get creative and re-write a classic holiday carol (provided below) using Fiesta themes, items, and lore. The best carol re-write will receive a Raccoon mount as a gift from CM Saphar and a Forum MVP forum badge.

Song to Re-Write:
Re-write this Holiday carol with Fiesta references and lyrics!

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve drummers drumming,
Eleven pipers piping,
Ten lords a-leaping,
Nine ladies dancing,
Eight maids a-milking,
Seven swans a-swimming,
Six geese a-laying,
Five golden rings,
Four calling birds,
Three French hens,
Two turtle doves,
And a partridge in a pear tree!

Rules:


1 submissions per person.
Must be appropriate for all ages
Does not break the terms of service (http://www.outspark.com/legal/)
Entry must be a manipulated version of the holiday carol provided above..
Entries are to be submitted in this thread.



Prizes:

Forum MVP badge
7-day raccoon mount gifted from CM_Saphar



Guidelines: Entries not limited to just one Outspark game. As with all events, the applicable Event Rules and Regulations (http://www.outspark.com/forums/showthread.php?t=13844) apply.

Submissions will be accepted until 10:00am (PDT) on Monday Dec. 22, 2008.

Outspark runs weekly MVP events every Monday. Be sure to check the Event Discussion forums for your favorite Outspark game every week to see the winners and the next event.

[MewMewLina]

On the twelfth day of xmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve newbies dying,
Eleven titles tying,
Ten men-a hunting,
Nine bugs halting,
Eight new rings,
Seven laughs,
Six level ups,
Five golden bugs,
Four guild members,
Three pet Kebings,
Two godly axes,
And a proposal the same day!

[Sam_Tyler]

I love stuff like this so I'm tossing my hat into it.


On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve gaming bugs,
Eleven Cash Shop items,
Ten forum people fighting,
Nine Elf Females dancing,
Eight players requesting,
Seven chests are dropping,
Six players whining,
Five fake reports,
Four Site Spammers spamming,
Three Game Leaders playing,
Two GMs online,
And all servers down on Christmas Eve!

[magicaldragon5469]

Sam...that is not what they ment...they want the CORRCT addition

[FatalLace]

aww we were doing this for the Magazine.. T.T oh well XD

[power_ness]

Sam...that is not what they ment...they want the CORRCT addition

what do you mean by that?
they give us the original, and we're supposed to edit the lyrics to make it fiesta related.
Thats exactly what sam did.

[xIOhenryOIx]

They do not want the CORRECT addition so please shh
They want you to re-write it with FIESTA REFERENCES
SO THT MEANS WOT SAM HAS DONE

[yugiman1]

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve Fighter`s fighting,
Eleven mages pking,
Ten archers poisoning,
Nine females getting married,
Eight clerics healing,
Seven bats killing noobs,
Six ice vivis freezing,
Five archons running,
Four high lvls helping,
Three peices of gems,
Two wairors tanking,
And a killer tree*!

*find these in sand hill
Did i do good?
Edit:you stole my thing power twelve fighters fighting -,-

[Sam_Tyler]

Sam...that is not what they ment...they want the CORRCT addition


Re-write this Holiday carol with Fiesta references and lyrics!


And what part of this is not correct in my mad lyric songwriting skills? :D

[HeroicAce]

Oh I am going to have to join this as well.
(will edit post with entry once i refine it to how i want it)
(first edit, i think this is it but i might refine it if that is allowed)

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve mages squishing,
Eleven Goblins chanting,
Ten Boars a-charging,
Nine Vivis Freezing,
Eight Slimes a-hopping,
Seven Wolfs a-hungry,
Six Imps a-bashing
Five Honey~ings,
Four Ghost Knights,
Three Heart Trumpies,
Two Mini Dragons,
And a GM in a loin cloth!

*I'm quite happy with this, please tell me what you think*
(2nd edit)*try putting it to the music. I just did to see if it was any good, and I'd like your opinions*

[SweetLavender]

sounds fun ^^ I shall get to it ;o

[yugiman1]

I just made myn up in 2 minutes :) that was good 2 me *prays to win*

[CM_Saphar]

Wait so we post our entries here? Out in the open? Where people can steal our ideas, not in a PM to you?

I'd just like to get my facts straight before I write up mine, since I can't email people.
(I'll edit this with my submission if that is the case)

Everyone's entries will be out in the open and will display in the order they were posted, so if someone decides to rip off someone else it will be fairly obvious.

[HeroicAce]

Aw i just noticed power's 10 and my 8 are similar. I guess i will change it so they arent so close if that is allowed. I didnt mean to copy you power, i saw your entry after i had edited mine in. Sorry bout that.

[jjmuse]

On the 12th day of Christmas my true love gave to me
Twelve mini pets
Eleven short swords
Ten uruga scrolls
Nine jars of honey
Eight red petals
Seven strength potions
Six hp stones
Five GHOST KNIGHT RINGS
Four new quests
Three set armors
Two new skills
AND A CASHA BLADE FOR US ALLLLLLLL

[fireace12]

On the twelth day of christmas my true love gave to me,
Twelve helgas charging,
Eleven Maras choking,
Ten slimes~a~squishing,
Nine robos chasing,
Eight mobs on me,
Seven crabs~a~pinching,
Six quests gone bad,
FIVE GM'S HUNTING ME!!!!,
Four angry wifes,
Three wolfs clawing,
Two bad guild wars,
AND A KING SLIME EATING ME!!!!!!




(i did actually get eatin by a king slime once xD)

[YoshimaruOrona]

On the twelfth day of Christ-mas
My wif-ey gift-ed me...

Twelve spammers spamming
Eleven mushies housing
Ten pets a-floating
Nine pk-ers gloating
Eight beggars begging
Seven glitches glitching
Six leechers leeching
FIVE GOLDEN LUMPS~
Four class-es
Three main towns
Two Uru rings
AND A NECK-LACE OF EL-DY!



Author's notes:
~11 --> Reference to resting/vending in mushroom houses
~4 --> Cleric, fighter, mage, archer (classes)
~3 --> Roumen, Eldy, Uruga (towns)

Good luck to all, and thanks OS for a sweet forum contest. ^^

[saelee1488]

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve target sparkcash,
Eleven xir for enchanting,
Ten lightning crusader,
Nine dancing zombie,
Eight cleric to buff me,
Seven golden bugs,
Six magic staffs,
Five fighting mage,
Four golden bars,
Three fried turkey legs,
Two wedding application,
And a aniversity ring in a pear tree!

2 hour

[power_ness]

Aw i just noticed power's 10 and my 8 are similar. I guess i will change it so they arent so close if that is allowed. I didnt mean to copy you power, i saw your entry after i had edited mine in. Sorry bout that.

lol np, I kinda guess I reserved the post, then made it up after. and I didn't even see yugi's we made it about the same minute, his was edited saying I copied 5 minutes after I edited the song into my post.... original was 6 minutes before my eidt though, but I didn't see it, spent about 20 minutes on the song in wordpad before I edited it in....

you stole my thing power twelve fighters fighting -,-

... soz, I didnt look though, I posted the original post, then made it up without reloading window.... then just edited. Sorry, does this count against us saphar? xD I'll remake it if I must.

[grummin]

Ah, what the hey. Only thing knowingly, deliberately, and blatantly swiped is the basic idea, stolen from the Bob Rivers sendup "The Twelve Pains of Christmas." Despite looks, it's not intended as negative- but rather a humorous snicker at the random nuisance factors. :)

The Twelfth thing in Isya
That's such a pain to me:
Twelve guilds a-warring
Eleven vendors shroom-killed
Ten shouters - "buff plz"
Nine beggars begging
Eight Movers training
Seven Prock Zones shooting
Six aggroed Ratmen
Five KQs failed
Four Lixes wasted
Three swords "poof"ed
Two lagging deaths
And finding a buff for me-eee-eee

[power_ness]

Ah, what the hey. Only thing knowingly, deliberately, and blatantly swiped is the basic idea, stolen from the Bob Rivers sendup "The Twelve Pains of Christmas." Despite looks, it's not intended as negative- but rather a humorous snicker at the random nuisance factors. :)

The Twelfth thing in Isya
That's such a pain to me:
Twelve guilds a-warring
Eleven vendors shroom-killed
Ten shouters - "buff plz"
Nine beggars begging
Eight Movers training
Seven Prock Zones shooting
Six aggroed Ratmen
Five KQs failed
Four Lixes wasted
Three swords "poof"ed
Two lagging deaths
And finding a buff for me-eee-eee

haha awesome, so far, in my book, you win.

btw the thumbnail of full song is uploaded onto my post on first page, just click.

[whyevenbother]

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my GM gave to me
Twelve noobies leveling,
Eleven couples marrying,
Ten robo's pwning,
Nine maps d/c-ing,
Eight mini dragons,
Seven dead players,
Six random spammers,
Five pow-er levelers,
Four "ligh" servers,
Three lagging towns,
Two Ksers,
And a house in the shape of a tree!

I hope it works with the tune =)
and I hope you guys got the "ligh" joke hehe

[grummin]

Four "ligh" servers,

and I hope you guys got the "ligh" joke hehe

Got it? I sprayed my monitor with Mountain Dew laughing! On that joke alone, I bow to your obvious superiority. :D

[N-lightning]

I am gonna give this my best shot. :cool:

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve archers arching,
Eleven percent of grinding,
Ten good green drops,
Nine Helgas on rampage,
Eight PvP kqs,
Seven awesome events,
Six newbies to plvl,
Five gold for me,
Four spammers carroling,
Three Dan~go mushies,
Two godly +9s,
And a Ninja hiding under my Christ~mas Tree!


Merry Christmas all!!!

[IcyPhoenix]

On the twelfth day of a Helga Raid, my raid leader said to me
Twelve groups a-running,
Eleven seconds before dying,
Ten Hell Guardians flying,
Nine players down,
Eight clerics a-reviving,
Seven fighters a-tanking,
Six archers a-lying,
Five Ka-llop re-spawns,
Four people shouting,
Three are gold-bots,
Two seconds left,
And Hel-ga wipes out the raid party~!

[whyevenbother]

Got it? I sprayed my monitor with Mountain Dew laughing! On that joke alone, I bow to your obvious superiority. :D

aww thanks, that was the first one i came up with, and changed the rest as I went, but i'm glad someone enjoyed it :D it makes it worth it lol...sry about the screen though hehe

[lukeeko]

On the 12th day of Christmas my true love killed for me:
12 Crabs a pinching
11 bats a flapping
10 Procks a spitting
9 flying pinkies
8 scary bosses
7 creepy spiders
6 Jewel Grave Robbers
5 Go-old Slimes
4 Were bear fighters
3 Ratman
2 Mutant Zombies
and a mini dragon in K Q

[jpn2610]

On the twelfth day of Christmas
My true love gave to me....
Twelve annoying spammers,
Eleven squishy mages,
Ten bosses dying,
Nine people shouting,
Eight bad guild wars,
Seven of Gold Slimes,
Six wedding parties,
Five PvP kqs,
Four arguments,
Three killing fighters,
Two healing clerics,
And an archer running from people!

[.Honor]

remade my poem into a picture :p it's on the next page

[Inorruk]

Oh, I wanna give this a try... but i wanna turn it into the 12 days of Helga Raids :D

On The 12th Day Of Raiding, Helga Gave To Me

Twelve Nova's a-dropping
Eleven Archer's Dotting
Ten Clerics Rezzing
Nine Fighters Mocking
Seven Pulled Kallaps
Six Dead Parties
Five Blue Shields!!!!!!
Four Runs At Helga
Three Failed Attempts
Two Hellgate Drops
And Bragging Rights For Apoleen =D

Hope Everyone Likes It! And Happy Holidays :)

[yeebson]

On the twelfth day of winter ,
my friend saw something really strange;
Twelve Harkans Killing
Eleven Vampire Bats Hiding
Ten King Calls Running
Nine Prisoners Crying
Eight Weakened Ogres Smashing
Seven Boys Good Looking
Six Girls Dancing
Five Items Breaking
Four Xirs Waiting
Three Members of "Khazmodan" Fighting
Two Admins of "Khazmodan" Kicking Members
And One Master of Khazmodan Smiling :)

[zombeex3]

I love stuff like this so I'm tossing my hat into it.


On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve gaming bugs,
Eleven Cash Shop items,
Ten forum people fighting,
Nine Elf Females dancing,
Eight players requesting,
Seven chests are dropping,
Six players whining,
Five fake reports,
Four Site Spammers spamming,
Three Game Leaders playing,
Two GMs online,
And all servers down on Christmas Eve!


ROFL XD nice one

[Soock_soock]

So far for me GRummin WIN for me ;D

[LordMisha]

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve drummers drumming,
Eleven pipers piping,
Ten lords a-leaping,
Nine ladies dancing,
Eight maids a-milking,
Seven swans a-swimming,
Six geese a-laying,
Five golden rings,
Four calling birds,
Three French hens,
Two turtle doves,
And a partridge in a pear tree!

Happy Holidays!!!

[LordMisha]

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
you come and tell me a story
about fiesta grate warriors
kings and lords that are happy
chirstmas come now
Twelve drummers drumming,
Eleven pipers piping,
Ten lords a-leaping,
Nine ladies dancing,
Eight maids a-milking,
Seven swans a-swimming,
Six geese a-laying,
Five golden rings,
Four calling birds,
Three French hens,
Two turtle doves,
And a partridge in a pear tree!
Good luck and Happy Holidays!

[leo78]

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve fighter's grinding
Eleven slime dying
Ten GMs giving gifts
Nine cleric buffing
Eight people turning into Warriors
Seven noobs leveling
Six Secret Santas
Five Sandy Claus
Four people fighting
Three people giving gifts
Two guilds fighting
and a couple getting married


!!!Happy Christmas!!!

[dumbdu]

Twelve Santa Claus
Eleven dead people
Ten Thomas Turkey
Nine Pagasus
Eight Donkeys
Seven hobbys
Six GMs
Five HighClerics
Four Mages
Three Fighter
Two Archers
And one person wish he could GMs


Happy Christmas

[Naomi89]

http://i33.tinypic.com/2zj96qv.png


Merry Christmas and Good Luck to all ^^

[Gaia213]

On the twelfth day of christmas,
my not true love gave to me
Twelve random gifts
Eleven noobs that needed helping lifts
Ten racoons that were pink and did so stink
Nine mini versions of Maras ship that were about to sink
Eight GM's that I should not have chased
Seven green boots but not even once laced
Six potions of antitoxin
Five kebbings and they were all boxin
Four rings in whitch there were carved different things
Three fighter items that I sold for 5 gold
Two blowkisses that made me fall in love
And a confession that she was married.


Well, marry christmas everyone!Well...maybe not so marry for me...I'll go cry and write songs about tragedic love...*sniff*...Although...That Nina girl is kind of cute..

[denund]

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve harkans harking,
Eleven raccoons running,
Ten mages fearing,
Nine mushrooms resting,
Eight guilds a-warring,
Seven spammers spamming,
Six KQ's in progress,
Five thousand SparkCash, :D
Four gender changes,
Three dunce hats,
Two tiger suits,
And one successful Helgaa Raidd.

[rahur]

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve zombies fighting,
Eleven miners mining,
Ten dancers dancing,
Nine Phinos falling,
Eight pinkys flying,
Seven green weapon,
Six newbies talking,
Five Vivi pets,
Four boars a-hunting,
Three pirates killing,
Two wedding invites,
And a apple from a tree!

[archetypexe]

on the 12th day of christmas my true love gave to me:
12 hours gaming
11 fighters slicing
10 kebing droppings
9 monsters lured
8 turkey riders
7 clerics buffing
6 mushroom houses
+5 spr ring!
4 copper lumps
3 plain toadstools
2 hp stones
and a mara pirate kingdom quest!

Happy holidays to all of Fiesta!

[ikimoto]

Post deleted.

I just got told it can only be about Fiesta and SoS.

Mine was about Blackshot so scoot.

[power_ness]

Three killing fighters,
Two healing clerics,
And an archer running from people!

Eight mini dragons,
Seven healing clerics,
Six random spammers,

Don't like all these copiers lol, look on first page 3rd post, I had the healing clerics first :D

Also I noticed a ton of the songs here, no offence, don't match the rhythm of the actual song, which is somewhat annoying... love the 'ligh' joke btw bother

And a Ninja hiding under my Christ~mas Tree![/I]

Ninja's go with fiesta how again?

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
you come and tell me a story
about fiesta grate warriors
kings and lords that are happy
chirstmas come now
Twelve drummers drumming,
Eleven pipers piping,
Ten lords a-leaping,
Nine ladies dancing,
Eight maids a-milking,
Seven swans a-swimming,
Six geese a-laying,
Five golden rings,
Four calling birds,
Three French hens,
Two turtle doves,
And a partridge in a pear tree!
Good luck and Happy Holidays!
We're supposed to edit the actual things we got.... not add stuff in.

Also, can we get a grammar teacher here? :D the spelling is somewhat bad on page 4 I see two posts with multiple grammatical errors

On the twelfth day of christmas,
my not true love gave to me
Twelve random gifts
Eleven noobs that needed helping lifts
Ten racoons that were pink and did so stink
Nine mini versions of Maras ship that were about to sink
Eight GM's that I should not have chased
Seven green boots but not even once laced
Six potions of antitoxin
Five kebbings and they were all boxin
Four rings in whitch there were carved different things
Three fighter items that I sold for 5 gold
Two blowkisses that made me fall in love
And a confession that she was married.


Well, marry christmas everyone!Well...maybe not so marry for me...I'll go cry and write songs about tragedic love...*sniff*...Although...That Nina girl is kind of cute..
An example of the bad rhythm.

Let's just call this constructive critism, since that's what it's intended as, so noone feel bad.

[semajthewise]

this looks like fun so here's my shot :)



On the twelveth day of Christmas my true love gave to me,
Twelve wearbears growling
eleven lumps of copper
ten spiders spinning
nine upgrades breaking
eight little phino's
seven cash shop goodies
six vendors selling
five M D riiings
four shouting newbs
three guild wars
two speedy boogies
and a new raccoon rider for meee

[sinful_delicious]

Here's the wonderful Magi's lyrics :o

On the twelveth day of Christmas my true love gave to me,
Twelve Warriors Warring
Eleven Enchanters chanting
Ten Dark Crystals
Nine Kingdom Quests
Eight Clerics Reviving
Seven Scouts a-scouting
Six Roumen's Eggs
Five Gold Coinns
Four Marriages
Three Divorces
Two Mara Pirates
and a computer game called Fiesta

[KLutZoo11]

ok im bored so ima try it out:

On the twelfth day of Christmas Grinding In Abyss,
12 green fighters,
11 dead mages,
10 hundred sp burned,
9 percent til lvl-up,
8 fallen mobs,
7 minutes of buff left,
6 de-buffs,
5 Critical Hits!,
4 party members,
3 thousand hp,
2 cleric buffs and
1 Kiting Archer Pwning Mobs!

Merry Christmas to All and a Green n' Grey New Years! =P

[whyevenbother]

Don't like all these copiers lol, look on first page 3rd post, I had the healing clerics first :D

Also I noticed a ton of the songs here, no offence, don't match the rhythm of the actual song, which is somewhat annoying... love the 'ligh' joke btw bother



Ninja's go with fiesta how again?


We're supposed to edit the actual things we got.... not add stuff in.

Also, can we get a grammar teacher here? :D the spelling is somewhat bad on page 4 I see two posts with multiple grammatical errors


An example of the bad rhythm.

Let's just call this constructive critism, since that's what it's intended as, so noone feel bad.

Oh, I'm sorry, I didn't know someone had already said healing clerics (though im sure it common to come by, i mean what else do clerics do lol) but yeah, I changed mine anyways because I wasn't intentionally copying (I didn't even know I was:p) But thanks for liking my servers joke :D

[.Honor]

:eek: I completely forgot about being able to use photoshop. Thank you Naomi!!

http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/8199/12dayskp1.png

[Sockrawteez]

i always love saber work

[jimmy_death]

well here my song DX i hope you like it ^^.


On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve Trees a-Stomping,
Eleven Robos a-killing,
Ten King Kongs a-leaping,
Nine ratmen dancing,
Eight Cleirc a-healing,
Seven Fighters a-killing,
Six Dragons a-laying,
Five golden bats,
Four calling Honeyings,
Three French Ogres,
Two Gordons Masters,
And a Helga on a GM!

[mysty2]

here is my'n

on the 12 day of christmas my ture love gave to me
12archers running
11noob whining
10newbie running for 11 slimes
9fighters a-killing
8clerics a-healing
7enchanters enchanting
6warlocks a-waring
5wizmages a-wizing
4necromancer a-soummoning
3mages squishy being spam kill
2 archers a-kiting
and a warrior portecting me

[keiiii]

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my party gave to me
Twelve archons aching ,
Eleven tortured trumpies,
Ten slimes a-shrieking,
Nine magic mages,
Eight gates a-guarded,
Seven heals a-helping,
Six bats a-bashing,
Five Roumen rings,
Four of us died,
Three guild wars,
Two of us revived,
And experience all for me!

No harm in trying right? xP

[huntess]

Woot! I'm adding a couple that aren't acceptable just to share them with everyone.

~* Entry *~

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve wedding invitations,
Eleven T3 buffies,
Ten annoying spam bots,
Nine offers on a hammer,
Eight moles to go,
Seven KQ fails,
Six enhancement fails,
Five people pwning,
Four whispers begging money,
Three bugged quests,
Two maps distorted,
And a nub stalking you every day!


~* Extra Cheer *~

To O Holy Night: O Holy Shrine

O Holy Shrine
The guardians are pwning
It is a place of ultimate X P

In yonder corner room
The noobs are going to die
Come rev them
O mighty tanking cleric

Fall on the ground...
and shout for a cleric to rev you!
O Holy Shi...rine >.<
____________________

To Jingle Bells: GM wars

Dashing through Isya
On a wooden horse mover
O'er the maps we go
Aggroing all the way

Notices from GMs ring
Making PCs laugh
Oh what fun it is to war
The GMs on Fiesta!

O GM wars! GM wars!
I'll respawn in Elderine
O what fun it is to war
The GMs on Fiesta!

[princess_vivianne]

Just wanted to do this for fun :) Enjoy!

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
Outspark gave to me
Twelve Warriors warring,
Eleven Mages witching,
Ten Scouts a-hunting,
Nine Clerics healing,
Eight n00bs kill stealing,
Seven archons clucking,
Six Orcs a-clubbing,
Five gold spammers in jaaaaiiill,
Four guilds at war,
Three closed threads,
Two players banned,
And a maintenance on the next day!

[xkiromx13]

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
Isya awoken me
Twelve archers hunting,
Eleven goblins mobbing,
Ten wars a going,
Nine slimes dieing,
Eight robos going,
Seven archers hunting,
Six spiders fighting,
Five party members,
Four people selling,
Three proposes ready,
Two GMs grinding,
And a Helga giving a jolly christmas eve!

[haseo451]

On the tweith day of christmas
my true love gave to me
twelve spiders spawning eleven shields are shielding
ten fairies flying
nine flying staffs
eight talking signs
seven kindoms quests
six slowing slimes
Five golden coins!!!!
Four ripping zombies
three little noobies two loving couples
and a weekly mvp!!!!!

[haseo451]

i wanna make a propow carol XD
but when i send it the pro pow entry wouldn't count so yeah :P

[power_ness]

Oh, I'm sorry, I didn't know someone had already said healing clerics (though im sure it common to come by, i mean what else do clerics do lol) but yeah, I changed mine anyways because I wasn't intentionally copying (I didn't even know I was:p) But thanks for liking my servers joke :D

haha, btw you don't play as a cleric do you? thinking all they do is heal; they fight, they revive, they buff, they support. If you played as one you would realize this lol.

[villaloboos]

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
Dakkon gave to me
Twelve spiders web-ing,
Eleven fighters kicking,
Ten boogys leaping,
Nine harpys smoking,
Eight raids failing,
Seven fear'd ghost's,
Six greenkies stinking,
Five freezing ice's,
Four cooked nix,
Three job news,
Two purple mobs,
And a Hug in a box!

[haseo451]

On the Tweith day of propow
MyGM gave to me
Twelve perfect indys
eleven thunders thundering
Ten awsome snowboards
Nine tricks unleashed
Eight players winning
Seven tricks failed
six only rooms
Five Goldenboards!!!
Four pairs of jackets
Three pairs of pants
Two ice cream cones
And a trick at the trick tree!!!!

[power_ness]

Eight Cleirc a-healing,
8clerics a-healing
Nine Clerics healing,

What's up with the healing clerics? I had it first, just because it's common doesn't mean you can use it... make something original.

The following have already been mentioned, I'm just showing how many people took this into their lyrics...

Eight clerics healing,
Two healing clerics,

Eight mini dragons,
Seven healing clerics,
Six random spammers,

note how often people put clerics around 7-9, more often on 8 but still.

[.Honor]

what's up with everyone going from twelve to one? geeeeeeeeez!~ :p

[Chouachee]

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve different pets,
Eleven Zombie Kings,
Ten Robos killing,
Nine SP potion,
Eight poison zombies,
Seven slimes owning,
Six players yelling,
Five healing clerics,
Four dead mage,
Three Uruga scrolls,
Two hardcore tankers,
And a buff at the town called Elderine

<img src="http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/13/l_7ec1a904417748b2891a46d670af7f67.jpg" />
<BR> Choua
<BR> Fighter lvl 44 Cleric lvl 41
<BR> Teva
<BR> Blackjack ( guild )

[alicina]

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
Fiesta gave to me
Twelve people shouting,
Eleven fighters tanking,
Ten friends summoning,
Nine people leveling,
Eight silver a-trading,
Seven people enchanting,
Six potions a-making,
Five KQ Rings,
Four diffrent classes,
Three new skills,
Two PvP's,
And Christmas on the same day!

[whyevenbother]

haha, btw you don't play as a cleric do you? thinking all they do is heal; they fight, they revive, they buff, they support. If you played as one you would realize this lol.

I do play a cleric actually lol, my main, and yah clerics r mega awesome =) but their first skill (i think) is healing and it just improves for 60 levels, lol, sorry i didn't mean to offend.

[spasticrainbows]

=o

After twelve hours of maintenance, Outspark gave to me...
Twelve great new glitches
Eleven failed KQs
Ten Helga raids
Nine poisoned arrows
Eight scary guild wars
Seven spawn killers
Six raccoon mounts
Five angry clerics
Four godly weapons
Three gold spammers
Two buffed fighters
And a pretty little squishy just for me!

:D

[jpn2610]

Don't like all these copiers lol, look on first page 3rd post, I had the healing clerics first :D

Also I noticed a ton of the songs here, no offence, don't match the rhythm of the actual song, which is somewhat annoying... love the 'ligh' joke btw bother



Ninja's go with fiesta how again?


We're supposed to edit the actual things we got.... not add stuff in.

Also, can we get a grammar teacher here? :D the spelling is somewhat bad on page 4 I see two posts with multiple grammatical errors


An example of the bad rhythm.

Let's just call this constructive critism, since that's what it's intended as, so noone feel bad.

Please.......don't complain about other peoples poems and turn some of them into embarassment. It's hurtful D:

[seriena]

On the twelth day of Christmas
my true-love gave to me,
twelve slimes-a-sleeping,
eleven mushies mushing,
ten wolves-a-woofing,
nine clerics healing,
eight mages blasting,
seven knights defending,
six fighters striking,
five marriage rings!
four bats-a-flappin'
three archers shooting,
two guilds-a-warring
and a mini dragon coming for me! :O


http://icys-domain.tripod.com/sitebuildercontent/sitebuilderpictures/.pond/chibi-itachi.jpg.w300h375.jpg

*looks at eyes* @.@

Teeta
Level 43 mage

Royia
Level 26 cleric

~Epith~

[alicina]

=o

After twelve hours of maintenance, Outspark gave to me...
Twelve great new glitches
Eleven failed KQs
Ten Helga raids
Nine poisoned arrows
Eight scary guild wars
Seven spawn killers
Six raccoon mounts
Five angry clerics
Four godly weapons
Three gold spammers
Two buffed fighters
And a pretty little squishy just for me!

:D

HAHAHA!! This made me laugh, haha, twelve hours of maintenance??? Hahaha, eleven failed KQ's? HAHAHAHA!! Om3, I adore yours rainbow! <3 :D

[sk8r_dude]

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
twelve merchants selling
eleven jerks ksing
ten noobs a-asking
nine sparkcash giftcards
eight spammers banned
seven +9 axes
six Teir 4 scrolls
five godly greens
four santa outfits
three powerlevels
two mounts running
and a wedding application and a ring

[sk8r_dude]

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
twelve merchants selling
eleven jerks ksing
ten noobs a-asking
nine sparkcash giftcards
eight spammers banned
seven +9 axes
six Teir 4 scrolls
five godly greens
four santa outfits
three powerlevels
two mounts running
and a wedding application and a ring
i was thinking of doing 5 gold for spending... w/e

[beede]

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve archers shooting,
Eleven mages casting,
Ten clerics healing,
Nine fighters slashing,
Eight scrolls for reading,
Seven potions for drinking,
Six stones for enhancing,
Five godly drops,
Four cash shop gifts,
Three rare finds,
Two marriage pets,
And a plus nine on my whole inventory!

[bloodyrose2]

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve Fighters Dieing,
Eleven Clerics reving,
Ten Newbs running,
Nine lvl 80's chasing,
Eight GM's Laughing,
Seven players Leaving,
Six fighters stunning,
Five new members,
Four diiferent players
Three robo wins
Two godly weps
And a kill off MD
-------------------------------------------------------------
:D
Teva
Fihgter-37
Cleric-13
Mage-20

[lovedarenotspeak]

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my fiesta gave to me
Twelve treasure chests,
Eleven robos killing,
Ten newbies running,
Nine phinos smacking,
Eight horses flying,
Seven pets a-jumping,
Six swords a-breaking,
Five H P boosts,
Four soul dusts,
Three learning skills,
Two epic quests,
And a wedding pet fo-or you!


Yay, me lol. that is the most random thing in the world but it works :D and i tried. can't fault me for that one.

[slowzrhoh]

On the twelfth day of Christmas
i went on fiesta and this is what i've seen......
twelve people shopping
eleven scrolls are selling
ten clerics buffing
nine people asking
eight fighters fighting
seven mobs are coming
six mages running
five is alllll thats left!!!
four clerics died
three shouting rev
two potions left
and another two hour long waaaaaiiiiit

Happy Holidays Everyone =P

[mommy1972]

On the tewlfth day of Christmas
my GM'S gave to meee
twelve robos fighting
eleven honeyings bouncing
ten ghost a-floating
nine characters dancing
eight trees a-walking
seven slimes a-spawning
six bats a-flying
five characters fighting
four yelling "Buff Me!"
three bosses killing
two GMS hosting
and a big pile of chest for you & meeeeee!



Server: Epith
Character: PiperHalliwell
Class: Cleric
Level: 62
Guild: TheCrusaders

[nickole_14]

lol cool !!!!!!! XD

[xnowack]

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve drummers drumming,
Eleven pipers piping,
Ten lords a-leaping,
Nine ladies dancing,
Eight maids a-milking,
Seven swans a-swimming,
Six geese a-laying,
Five golden rings,
Four calling birds,
Three French hens,
Two turtle doves,
And a partridge in a pear tree!

[weeli94]

This is to compliment on fiesta's beauty, mobs etc..

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
the scenery was great,
12 pinkies dancing,
dancing with the honeying,
11 happy slimes,
smiling like a mime,
10 archers dancing,
dancing with the clerics,
9 fighters and mages,
showing their shiny weapons,
8 great players,
helping the new players,
7 phinoflies twirling,
round and around the phinoes,
6 archons running,
running through fields,
5 golden ores,
shining on the floor,
4 imps jumping,
jumping like a kid,
3 robo waking,
waking in time for christmas,
2 players dating,
holding hands in sand beach,
and 1 Christmas stocking chocolate for everyone~

<3 hohoho, merry christmas to one and all and a happy new year XD

Enjoy!

[weeli94]

wonder if it's ok to be THAT long....oh well, just enjoy it <3 I dont care if I lose

[power_ness]

As I said, constructive criticism, and the healing clerics are getting annoying just found 5 people who, just after I repeated it used it... look from my post on page 7 to the end. Make the clerics do something else geez.

[weeli94]

As I said, constructive criticism, and the healing clerics are getting annoying just found 5 people who, just after I repeated it used it... look from my post on page 7 to the end. Make the clerics do something else geez.

10 archers dancing,
dancing with the clerics

oh, my bad, should've put them healing instead of dancing...

[.Honor]

Okay, a suggestion. If you don't want the others copying you choose some more uncommon wording. I know you have more imagination than "clerics healing" so instead of attacking everyone else for using it change your own to something more creative.

In fact, since it's proven to be a common thought, do you reaaaaally think you're gonna win the creative contest with that? :)

[Sockrawteez]

Okay, a suggestion. If you don't want the others copying you choose some more uncommon wording. I know you have more imagination than "clerics healing" so instead of attacking everyone else for using it change your own to something more creative.

In fact, since it's proven to be a common thought, do you think you're reaaaally gonna win the creative contest with that? :)

im not so much sirprized as SABER is the one stating this..as NOONE THOUGHT OF IT, i mean wth LOL, use joo heads peoplez

[.Honor]

I know, I must be a genius!

but everyone was thinking the same thing I was just the person to say it :p

[josejose345]

On the twelfth day of christmas,
my true love gave to me,
Twelve Clerics singing,
Eleven fighters Dancing,
Ten Archers killing,
Nine Mages running,
Eight noobz dying,
Seven clerics reviving,
Six birds a singing,
Five Golden Friends,
Four gm's shouting,
Three Christmas trees,
Two santa hats,
And a skinny Santa Clause!

[power_ness]

oh, my bad, should've put them healing instead of dancing...

I wasn't talking about you, there were 5 others, and I can't really edit it after I start out, unless I remake it all, maybe I will :D

Give me a little, by tomorrow I'll have complete new version up.

[hatterM]

On the 12 day of christmas my game friend sent to me
12 hundred potions
11 kebings floating
10 KQs filling
9 event prizes
8 thousand sparkcash
7 pumpkin puddings
6 epic quests
5 brand new bows
4 servers full
3 beastly parties
2 guild invitations
and a prize for my awesome outspark song

[hatterM]

like my last verse?

[hatterM]

On the 12 day of christmas my game friend sent to me
12 hundred potions
11 kebings floating
10 KQs filling
9 event prizes
8 thousand sparkcash
7 pumpkin puddings
6 epic quests
5 brand new bows
4 servers full
3 beastly parties
2 guild invitations
and a new MMORPG
i think that is a better ending

[Jade.Archer]

Hum, I guess i'll give it a shot! :D

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve bots busking,
Eleven fighters skating,
Ten nubs a-singing,
Nine nixes napping,
Eight greenkies grinning,
Seven sylphs a-sweeping,
Six slimes a-sleeping,
Five End stat rings,
Four angry goblins,
Three king crabs,
Two squishy mages,
And a Helgait Ki-ing Helga to get slaughtered by!

=] <3

[axyz_starsong]

Well, why not!

On the twelfth day of Christmas on FIESTA's MMORPG, I got:
Twelve nubs a-grindin',
Eleven Vivis Icein',
Ten Hobs a-creeping,
Nine Mages Chanting,
Eight archers Kiteing,
Seven Fighters a-stunning,
Six HighClerics a-praying,
Five Mini Dragon rings,
Four classes to choose from,
Three enhancing stones,
Two Mages in love,
And an upcoming mission to the Crystal Tree!

Based on limited knowledge of upcoming quests and my love for Rasha *blushes*

[josejose345]

On the twelfth day of christmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve clerics Healing,
Eleven fighters Tanking,
Ten archers shooting,
Nine mages running,
Eight noobs dying,
Seven Clerics reviving,
Six tiger suits
Five Golden friends,
Four Gm's shouting,
Three yellow gift boxes,
Two santa hats,
And a santa doll

[jpn2610]

As I said, constructive criticism, and the healing clerics are getting annoying just found 5 people who, just after I repeated it used it... look from my post on page 7 to the end. Make the clerics do something else geez.

Well why do you complain about other people's poems? He just said dancing and you said not to repeat healing and you still complain about it =.= I'm talking about the first one.

[Arishia-chan]

here's mine then^^

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
Fiesta gave to me
Twelve weapons breaking,
Eleven trumpies chasing,
Ten pinkies dying,
Nine hours of grinding,
Eight raccoons running,
Seven GMs laughing,
Six dragons flying,
Five roumen rings!
Four level-ups,
Three bad swords,
Two Mara dead,
And Robo love to see me gone...

hope it goes well with the tune..

[123boys]

On the twelfth day of Christmas
Fiesta gave to me:
Twelve Guild war wins
Eleven Pots for healing
Ten Spark Cash Dollars
Nine Kingdom Quests
Eight Fancy Titles
Seven Party Invites
Six Events to die in
Five Gold to spend
Four Failed Enhancements
Three Wedding D/C's
Two Production Skills
and One Brand New Guild

[Kitty-lu]

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
I got a noob trade request for
Twelve spoiled mushrooms,
Eleven red apples,
Ten old soul dust,
Nine though meat,
anotherr Eight friend requests,
Seven buffing begs,
Six party requests,
I found Five torn leather,
Four kill stealers,
Three mounting bugs,
Two buffing whispers,
And got no rez in my Kingdom Quest!

I don't know the song so i hope it fits :S but had fun doing it ^^.

[power_ness]

Well why do you complain about other people's poems? He just said dancing and you said not to repeat healing and you still complain about it =.= I'm talking about the first one.

I'm just shutting up now... I said, I wasn't talking about his.

Anyway I'm giving up on it, too many use it, just gonna delete old and make new.

[xkiromx13]

you have to admit my last line says and a helga giving a jolly christmas eve! that is good especially for helga lol

[SoccerBash1627]

Rawr!

On the Twelfth Day of Christmas my baby gave to me;
Twelve Mini Rudolphs,
Eleven Chocolate Stockings,
Ten Candy Canes,
Nine Angel Bells,
Eight Star Pieces,
Seven Swirly Glasses,
Six Slime Heads,
Five Santa Hats,
Four Scarlet Candles,
Three Elven Hats,
Two Cotton Balls,
And a Shining Ring of Elderine.

Incorporated the Christmas Quests ♥ This literately took 5 minutes lmao.
Merry Christmas!

[princesspeepesr]

bla bla bla

[martina_x]

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
My true love gave to me,
Twelve Players Mineing,
Eleven Phinos Smileing,
Ten Imps a-Leaping,
Nine Quests Begining,
Eight Skills a-Buying,
Seven Guilds a-Trying,
Six Members a-Danceing,
Five Scrolls Returning,
Four Clerics Buffing,
Three Lix Enchanteing,
Two Players Fighting,
And a level up for me!

[martina_x]

As I said, constructive criticism, and the healing clerics are getting annoying just found 5 people who, just after I repeated it used it... look from my post on page 7 to the end. Make the clerics do something else geez.

umm power ness,
not trying t be rude but..
you dont own the clercs and other people
have a freedom or speach and they can write
whatever they think will make them win so please
don't freak out over this becouse its not about winning,
its about being appart of it and haveing fun doing it and
being in the holiday spirit.
so ya,
and thanks (:

[martina_x]

.Honor ,
i agree with you tottaly on this

[michael_pascoal]

On the twelth day of Chirstmas my true love gave to me:
12 pink racoons,
11 pet kebings,
10 exp cards,
9 sensei suits,
8 beauty shop coupons,
7 party invites,
6 pairs of boots,
5 silver rings!
4 honeyings,
3 turkey legs,
2 necklaces,
and a beautiful hobby mount!

[crystal-starlight]

yay i wanna play my fiesta person is Moonlight_Love

on the twelfth day of christmas
my true love gave to me
twelve clerics healing
eleven mages casting
ten archers shooting
nine fighters stabbing
eight slimes sliming
seven boars dying
six mini pets dancing
five golden bugs
four bats killing
three happy players
two happy marriages
and a huge fiesta party blast!!!

[KikiKitsune]

^^;; Not very good, but here's a try~

On the twelfth day of Fiestmas,
my friends-list gave to me
Twelve Honeyings humming,
Eleven players playing,
Ten swords a-slaying,
Nine mushrooms resting,
Eight mobs a-mobbing,
Seven Hobs a-picking,
Six Slimes a-spawning,
Five cute Kebings,
Four treasure chests,
Three pink Procks,
Two Shining rings,
And a surprise in my inventory! :3

[nathanpainter]

SO much Fail In this thread is almost hurts me.

[devin_nicolai]

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
the GM's gave to me
Twelve vendors vending,
Eleven tankers tanking,
Ten swords a-slash'in,
Nine techno dances,
Eight manas a-burning,
Seven guilds a-warr'in,
Six mobs a-dieing,
Five roumen rings,
Four stupid nubs,
Three second lag,
Two new servers,
And a spammer in roumen!

[power_ness]

SO much Fail In this thread is almost hurts me.

agreement ftw.

[gofiguregurl]

Ignore This post.. Wrong Forum Name >>'.... (one moment)

[Lakkit]

Alright, This was a last minute thing for me. Also, I would like you to know that i did not read any earlier submissions from others players. I did this in the car this evening. So If any seem the same in any way I Apologize.

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve Mage's novas,
Eleven Fighter's whirlwind,
Ten smiths a-smithing,
Nine Archer's kiting,
Eight Guards a-guarding,
Seven Moles a-diggin',
Six Guilds a-warrin',
Five gold cursed knights,
Four Cleric heals,
Three Red imps,
Two Goblin swords,
And an angry mini dragon!

As I said.. I did this in a matter of minutes sitting in the Car.. Lol criticize it all you want : P

(Sorry for the post above , You may delete if needed GM's. My Mistake.

[tomoyo_shaina]

=] Im gonna give this a shot!!


On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve grave wolves howling,
Eleven newbies starting,
Ten bats a-flying,
Nine players capping,
Eight new HawkArchers,
Seven party invites,
Six new set-items,
Five Zombie Kings,
Four finished quests,
Three K-Qs,
Two new costumes,
And one hundred dollars worth of Sparkcash!

XP this is the first time ive attempted anything like this, and its better than i expected =]

[fernbramble1]

On The Twelfth Day Of Christmas,
Healer Avon Gave To Me,
Twelve Trumpys Talking
Eleven Elven Trees
Ten Tomb Fox's Taunting,
Nine Navar Hunters,
Eight Enchanter's Enhancing,
Seven Slimes Stealing,
Six Stonie's Singing,
Five MD Rings,
Four Fighter Swords,
Three Turkey Mounts,
Two Tankers Tanking,
And A Mini Dragon Sitting On My Knee!!!


:)
I thought this was a good one that i have made up, hope you all like it!!!
:)

[da_blue_wiz1]

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
God gave to me
Twelve Gamemasters,
Eleven players laughing,
Ten noobs begging,
Nine ladies Pleading,
Eight chickens,
Seven Bacon Sandwich,
Six Mass Murders running,
Five bootles of mascara,
Four Gold Rings,
Three thousend sparkcash,
Two Thousand Gems,
And followed a marage!
(no offence to anyone) =D

[power_ness]

Alright, This was a last minute thing for me. Also, I would like you to know that i did not read any earlier submissions from others players. I did this in the car this evening. So If any seem the same in any way I Apologize.

On the twelfth day of Christmas,
my true love gave to me
Twelve Mage's novas,
Eleven Fighter's whirlwind,
Ten smiths a-smithing,
Nine Archer's kiting,
Eight Guards a-guarding,
Seven Moles a-diggin',
Six Guilds a-warrin',
Five gold cursed knights,
Four Cleric heals,
Three Red imps,
Two Goblin swords,
And an angry mini dragon!

As I said.. I did this in a matter of minutes sitting in the Car.. Lol criticize it all you want : P

(Sorry for the post above , You may delete if needed GM's. My Mistake.
The only criticism I have is rhythm, it could be alot better, you added aton of syllables, other than that not bad, the kiting has been used, as has the cleric heals. Nice job.

[CM_Saphar]

Congratulations to YoshimaruOrona, this week's Forum MVP! Be sure to check out their great re-written carol here: http://www.outspark.com/forums/showpost.php?p=1429294&postcount=17

YoshimaruOrona will receive a Forum MVP badge and a Raccoon mount gift from me! :)

Stay in the festive holiday spirit and check out this week's Forum MVP event (http://www.outspark.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1448079) for another chance to win!

[Lakkit]

The only criticism I have is rhythm, it could be alot better, you added aton of syllables, other than that not bad, the kiting has been used, as has the cleric heals. Nice job.

I did this in 10 minutes >>' ....... Eh.... Got anything better to do than be mean? ._.