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diffyyaj
12-22-2008, 05:24 PM
This story tells about Hemel's world and it begins with the birth of Hemel.
If you haven't read the first story go to this link: http://www.outspark.com/forums/showthread.php?t=122867&highlight=hemel



Ch.1

“Telo meet your new brother, Hemel.”
“Mom, how come he has blue hair?” Question Telo. “Father has brown hair and I have black hair like yours.”
“Hemel fate is bounded to a very special job in Elderine.”
“What do you mean by ‘special’ job?”
“Hemel is going to be a guardian angel, someone who watches over a human. Anyone can choose what job they want in Elderine but, guardian angel is a given position.”
Hemel was five years old when he started his guardian angel classes. His mother; helped him dress in his blue and white school outfit and Telo escorted him to his school. They walked in a garden full of rose bushes and cherry trees. At the end of the garden, appeared the school. It is huge, made of white-silvery stone and had a watch tower on top of the roof. The watch tower had green jewels and rubies embedded in the outside walls. Hemel entered the school, through a huge opening with one statue on each side; the statue had a curved blue jay bird with a long strand of ribbon flying around it. Hemel assigned room was number twelve. He walked this narrow hallway with contemporary paintings on the walls; at the end of the hallway he reached an opening. In the center of the opening stand a fountain filled with fishes.
Hemel found his classroom and enters the room full of blue haired children like him.
“Hello, class I’m Ms. Neko. As you all know, you guys are chosen to be guardian angels. Being a guardian angel is a very important task. A guardian angel task is to utterly protect a human being life. Humans live in the middle world, which make their world both accessible for us and Helga’s world. Helga as we all know, exist below the human’s world. Helga was born in Elderine as a guardian angel but he refuses to protect the human he was assigned to and he enjoyed the evil actions that a human being did. Helga was banished by archangel Roumen because Helga killed many angels along his way on awaking the heavens. Helga present exist in the humen world. . . We'll talk of that in our next class session”
After school, Telo and Hemel walk home together.
“Ms.Neko my teacher was telling us about this powerful archangel named Roumen and he could do a lot of neat stuff with his shiny sword. Telo you’re an archangel, you should have a sword with you!”
“I don’t have a sword yet.”
“What you mean? My teacher was saying how archangel summon their sword.”
Telo didn’t reply back.

diffyyaj
12-22-2008, 05:25 PM
Ch.2

“What are you doing, Matthew?” Questioned Telo.
“Quiet!” Replied Matthew in a low raspy voice.
Telo bend down and peak through the dented hole of the bush with Matthew. There stand Two archangels, twenty feet distantly away from one of the other. The one in the far left was bald, his muscle gigantic, and his skin tan. The other archangel to the right had long silvery hair and his body seem meatless. Their hands illuminated purple light, then they charged towards each other at the same speed, and timely meet each other at the middle. . .The left archangel hands now grip a two handed sword; the right archangel holds a axe, the axe is heavy but he hold it without any struggle.
The left archangel leaped into the air and gathering gravity to strengthen his two handed sword. The one angel with the overly huge axe, took one step back and somersault with the axe. The axe timely meet the chest of the opponent, slicing across deeply through his flesh. The sliver haired angel left the two handed wielded sword injured man alone in the blood stain grass. Then, there came a lady to aid the tan angel.
“Awesome! Matthew said with his eyes widely open. Let’s become archangel, so we can fight like them!”
“Yeah, let’s enroll to the archangel academy!” Telo said excitingly.
The two boys rushed to their houses, open their parent room doors, and their words sounded like yiddish to their parents. Their parents manage to calm them down; they took a deep breath and explained to their parents about they wanting to become archangels.
They enrolled and attended every single day of archangel academy. There came a day where they learned how to release their inner strength. The inner strength is where they release a weapon from their hands. Archangel need weapons to defend themselves from Helga and his raid of monsters. Every archangel energy releases differently and so there are many different forum of weapons. Telo got the first step down by his hand glowing but it abruptly stop, By the end of the day everyone in the class could release a weapon but Telo could not.
The bell rang, everyone left; his teacher Mr. Calvick came up to him.
“Telo, you will release your weapon!” He gave a pat on Telo shoulder. “Get along home now.”

diffyyaj
12-22-2008, 05:26 PM
reserveeeee

diffyyaj
12-22-2008, 05:27 PM
ch.3 under developments XD

diffyyaj
12-22-2008, 05:27 PM
blahabalfsfasaffgsgdf

diffyyaj
12-22-2008, 05:28 PM
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee o.o

diffyyaj
12-22-2008, 05:29 PM
ch.sixsixsix

diffyyaj
12-22-2008, 05:30 PM
i can't believe its buttteerrr

diffyyaj
12-22-2008, 05:31 PM
rofl im healing a full pty atm.

diffyyaj
12-22-2008, 05:32 PM
i really dun noe how many chapters there going to be D:

killerof_joy
12-22-2008, 05:33 PM
Hemel <3

Story!

diffyyaj
12-30-2008, 05:07 PM
chapterrrr two ish up~!