the story of isya that was ruled by creatures

[animedud43]

2,000 years ago i was born my parents got killed by the creatures called the killagee which was a flesh creature. AS i grow up i met my master named sgt killmao she had many great powers who trained me well. once several more years pasted a great war started the creatures of isya vs the elves since humans hadnt exist until 1,890 years later. the army was ruled by the genral ghimono he qwas a great warroir i was in a battle with 50,00 ekves vs 120,890 creatures we fought so great they lost in 2 days. we kept fighting and fighting. after the battle my master was betrayign all of us. their was a plot to create humans thats right humans were supposed to be evil until we stopped it. after 4 months we had to face a god named teva's twin named rasiveif he was evil more evil then anyhting he controled everything. we died excpt me whih i drew my bow and shot him and fell dead................ 980 years later.............. as the war eneded i reached the citadeal where she was as i saw in the halls was humans................ i saw many of them in tanks........ then it all went blakc........................ soon i saw her the most evil thing who was with her was my dear future love............ bryon........ she snet him at me and at least i knocked him out in time then booom she hit me with her bow she wnet howu like that....... THE END
but for the next one it will be bigger and better see u soon at the conclusoin

[emma_]

Very fast moving story ^^ , Might want to do a spell check and uhh, yeah, a little short ^^

[animedud43]

srry emma my comp is a little small keys that u need to hit them better than i do

[animedud43]

and sides i havent ended it thats how far i got

[erick-]

Next time you write a story, make it coherent and well-written. When you make a story, you should make it so awesome that you can be proud of it. Could anyone be proud of this one? I think not!


srry emma my comp is a little small keys that u need to hit them better than i do

Then work on your spelling, grammar, and typing! They could all use some work, I believe.


and sides i havent ended it thats how far i got

Please do not double-post. Just in case you did not know, though, if you first forget to add something to your post, you can edit your post later to accomplish the same thing.
I am only making the job of a CL a little easier, so do not take offense from what I say.

[mikeandamina]

Please, when your dealing with L.A go for grammar, spelling, puncuation. And this is important>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>PARAGRAPH.