Serothia
03-16-2009, 08:34 AM
Hello, fellow Solstice-ians! I am back after a long wait. I have been occupied with school, and one thing led to another, and I ended up being away from Solstice for a long time. I also noticed that the quality of my fan fic is very, VERY bad. So, I decided to remake it. I SWEAR that this will be MUCH better than the original. Well, let's get started!
The Story of a Solo Neo
I dodged another blow. I rolled to the side and tightened my grip around my dagger.
"Bring it on, stupid animal!" I yelled as I ran to the rabbit. It's eyes widened. I stabbed it with my dagger.Crimson blood leaked out.
" YYYEEEEEEAAARRRGGGHHH!" the Rabbit screeched. I chuckled as I saw a number 47 above it. I moved in again.
Cut. Slash. Stab. All of these attacks, powered by a strong dagger- thanks to a buff from a random, generic Acolyte- cut into the rabbit's skin. Soon, it's fur was covered in red, liquid blood. The rabbit fell to the ground, lifeless. In a few seconds, it disappeared, a bottle of Aloe and an Apple appearing in it's place.
I dusted my pants, and wiped my bloody dagger on a hankerchief I pulled out of my robes. I huffed in victory and picked up the spoils of war, and put them in a special part of my robes called the "Inventory".
Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Yurochi. I am a level 26 Neopythe. I achieved this level of power from countless battles with friend and foe, grinding in fields and novice Labrynths, etc, etc. I had come across this particular plane of battle from the Teleporter. She moved me to Essene via her magic powers, and I restocked my supplies there. I then ran to this special training area at which I am at now.
I ran up to a random Slime, and attacked it. It turned to me in surprise and bewilderment. I chuckled, and said "Bring it on, Jello-man-thingy!"
The Slime ran- well, sloshed- to me as fast as I could. It shot a Slime projectile at me. I rolled to the left, and attacked it on the side. A chunk of it's slimy exoskeleton fell on the ground. It turned to me, and shot another Slime bullet. This one hit me, and I fell to the ground.
I touched the wound. The acidic slime left a smoking hole in my robes, and blood flowed out of the burn on my chest. I bit my lip, trying to supress the pain. A single drop of blood fell where my teeth cut into my lip.
I jumped up, and ran back to the Slime. It hissed at me, and I glared in response. It tried to throw another bullet at me, but I knocked it back with my dagger. It simply clutched back onto the Slime. I gripped my dagger harder. Running up to it, I started casting my strongest spell.
"THREATEN!"
The slime fell, sizzling from where my energy enhanced slice had cut into it's wiggly slime. The cut had sliced off at least three quarters of it's slime body, and the rest were badly burned. I stood, breathing ragged from my wound and the toll the spell took on me.
The slime disinegrated, leaving behind an HP potion. I picked up the potion and drank it. I felt my wound close up. I contemplated drinking another one of my potions to stop the soreness around it, but decided against it.
'Better to save my potions...'
I sat down and pulled out some bandages from my Inventory. Opening my robe, I wrapped them around my chest, making sure the wound didn't get an infection. I pulled my robes back on and stood, ready to 'PWN' some more random generic monsters. Just before I was about to go...
I was hit in the back with two huge slime bullets...
To Be Continued...
Well? How was it? I'm sorry if it isn't very long or good, but I think it is a HUGE improvement from the original. There might be spelling mistakes, if so I'm sorry. If you liked this (or not.. :( ), please give me feedback on this. I will try to get chapter 2 up as soon as I can, although I am only allowed on my computer on weekends... (I'm on now because there is no school today! :D )
The Story of a Solo Neo
I dodged another blow. I rolled to the side and tightened my grip around my dagger.
"Bring it on, stupid animal!" I yelled as I ran to the rabbit. It's eyes widened. I stabbed it with my dagger.Crimson blood leaked out.
" YYYEEEEEEAAARRRGGGHHH!" the Rabbit screeched. I chuckled as I saw a number 47 above it. I moved in again.
Cut. Slash. Stab. All of these attacks, powered by a strong dagger- thanks to a buff from a random, generic Acolyte- cut into the rabbit's skin. Soon, it's fur was covered in red, liquid blood. The rabbit fell to the ground, lifeless. In a few seconds, it disappeared, a bottle of Aloe and an Apple appearing in it's place.
I dusted my pants, and wiped my bloody dagger on a hankerchief I pulled out of my robes. I huffed in victory and picked up the spoils of war, and put them in a special part of my robes called the "Inventory".
Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Yurochi. I am a level 26 Neopythe. I achieved this level of power from countless battles with friend and foe, grinding in fields and novice Labrynths, etc, etc. I had come across this particular plane of battle from the Teleporter. She moved me to Essene via her magic powers, and I restocked my supplies there. I then ran to this special training area at which I am at now.
I ran up to a random Slime, and attacked it. It turned to me in surprise and bewilderment. I chuckled, and said "Bring it on, Jello-man-thingy!"
The Slime ran- well, sloshed- to me as fast as I could. It shot a Slime projectile at me. I rolled to the left, and attacked it on the side. A chunk of it's slimy exoskeleton fell on the ground. It turned to me, and shot another Slime bullet. This one hit me, and I fell to the ground.
I touched the wound. The acidic slime left a smoking hole in my robes, and blood flowed out of the burn on my chest. I bit my lip, trying to supress the pain. A single drop of blood fell where my teeth cut into my lip.
I jumped up, and ran back to the Slime. It hissed at me, and I glared in response. It tried to throw another bullet at me, but I knocked it back with my dagger. It simply clutched back onto the Slime. I gripped my dagger harder. Running up to it, I started casting my strongest spell.
"THREATEN!"
The slime fell, sizzling from where my energy enhanced slice had cut into it's wiggly slime. The cut had sliced off at least three quarters of it's slime body, and the rest were badly burned. I stood, breathing ragged from my wound and the toll the spell took on me.
The slime disinegrated, leaving behind an HP potion. I picked up the potion and drank it. I felt my wound close up. I contemplated drinking another one of my potions to stop the soreness around it, but decided against it.
'Better to save my potions...'
I sat down and pulled out some bandages from my Inventory. Opening my robe, I wrapped them around my chest, making sure the wound didn't get an infection. I pulled my robes back on and stood, ready to 'PWN' some more random generic monsters. Just before I was about to go...
I was hit in the back with two huge slime bullets...
To Be Continued...
Well? How was it? I'm sorry if it isn't very long or good, but I think it is a HUGE improvement from the original. There might be spelling mistakes, if so I'm sorry. If you liked this (or not.. :( ), please give me feedback on this. I will try to get chapter 2 up as soon as I can, although I am only allowed on my computer on weekends... (I'm on now because there is no school today! :D )