sakono
10-16-2007, 10:34 AM
In the guild Plaza NPC Einberg has a few grammar mistakes when you talk to her.
in the third screen when you hit chat,
"From the look of it, you didn't know..
the curse of the goddess has rendered this world frozen
in time.
Many lives in agony."
from the look of it should be from the looks of it, you didn't know..
the t in the on the next line should be capital.
and the last line should be Many live in agony.
on the next screen after that on the bottom paragraph it says
"However, we temporally relived problem"
I should say "However, we have temporally relived the problem"
and on the next screen after that,
"We freeze the mana that consists the world"
should be "that consists of the world"
Anyways I'm just trying to help out a bit. If i posted this in the wrong forum section I'm sorry.
keep up the good work and thanks for the game. ^.^
in the third screen when you hit chat,
"From the look of it, you didn't know..
the curse of the goddess has rendered this world frozen
in time.
Many lives in agony."
from the look of it should be from the looks of it, you didn't know..
the t in the on the next line should be capital.
and the last line should be Many live in agony.
on the next screen after that on the bottom paragraph it says
"However, we temporally relived problem"
I should say "However, we have temporally relived the problem"
and on the next screen after that,
"We freeze the mana that consists the world"
should be "that consists of the world"
Anyways I'm just trying to help out a bit. If i posted this in the wrong forum section I'm sorry.
keep up the good work and thanks for the game. ^.^