pikachu2423
04-05-2009, 02:11 PM
I like the background, but you should make the text the same colors. Also, you need to cut off more of the white stuffs =0
darkpaper
04-05-2009, 05:05 PM
Pretty Good For A First Time. But:
1.The Multi-colored/Multi-font Text takes away from the overall effect.
2.The Outspark Logo needs the white bits taken off.