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gm_toasty
05-11-2009, 02:40 PM
Which of these Poems do you like the most?

*Note* Please do not post which Poem is yours ... Thank You.

Poem #1

Title: The Land of Xen

Here in the vast Land of Xen,
lies a past not forgotten.
Sisters that shined like the moon and the sun,
princesses to the king, named Adeline and Marian.

In this Land of Xen,
monsters lurk from their dark havens.
Knights, Mages, Clerics, and Rogues,
to battle these monsters, they are called forth.

In the Land of Xen,
our adventure starts by being a Xenian.
And as people of Xen,
our path is ours to decide.

Fight as a Squire,
battle with your strength and might.
Use magic, be an Apprentice.
Learning spells would require your intelligence.
Acolytes are known for their Divine Power.
With their hands, any wound shall be cured.
Agile and keen, they are the neophytes.
Their nimblenes,s you should not slight.

Poem #2

See, see the Greatness of Xen
Marvel at the Depth of this Land
Tell me, Alastor do you
Know why the dark lord calls to you
Why do you foolishly wonder
Attacking all of Xen
We know it's you in the Shadows
Attacking all of the Towns
Like an Unknown Enemy
In this Land there is only one hope
The Heros
Training, Leveling, Preparing
The Levels show
Together the Best prepare to fight
And When it's done
Your attacks are no-longer
See,see this Great Land
Alastor why did you even bother
In the End
You couldn't Defeat
The Best Of Xen

Poem #3

A sister's hate is sharper than a blade.
War torn Xen is starting to fade.
A land once peaceful, a haven of sorts.
but darkness has anchored on Xen's unknown port.
Actions have consequenses, as the saying goes.
From jealousy comes hate, and here hate grows.
Did the King so wise, bearing his prize,
think of the consequences of his actions ?
Now the Orb is shattered, across Xen it lies.
A broken land, where a champion shall rise.
Vengeance is sweet, or so we thought.
Friend stabs friend, battles are fought.
The writer done with the story, but the story is not done.
What does the future hold? Only we can decide.

deoxys114
05-11-2009, 03:01 PM
FAIL! Didn't win. T_T Lol.

I vote for Poem #1. ^^

Warberg
05-11-2009, 03:07 PM
voted for #3 I like poems that rhyme :3 lol

bloodly-chan
05-11-2009, 04:07 PM
I like number 1! :D

It tells about the game more, I think. x3

lynzy
05-11-2009, 04:09 PM
my poem didnt get in the top 3 :3 oh well... I voted for #3

johnkevinco
05-11-2009, 04:23 PM
poem number 3

billomatic
05-11-2009, 04:30 PM
number 3 ftw

t3hdud3
05-11-2009, 04:51 PM
Rhymes ftw!!! =[i]

bobalitos
05-11-2009, 04:55 PM
numba 3!!!!!! muwahahaha


it rhymes >:3

gemadvt
05-11-2009, 05:16 PM
i Like 3 woot :3

deoxys114
05-11-2009, 05:33 PM
I wonder who won. It's a close race I must say! >_>

bobalitos
05-11-2009, 05:37 PM
well, you never know until it's over xD

kinniv
05-11-2009, 07:34 PM
Number 2 :D

brittany777
05-11-2009, 07:43 PM
:D Great poems

vinsizle916
05-11-2009, 08:59 PM
wow poem 3 sounds awesome ... it RHYMES !!!

Sawars
05-12-2009, 06:38 AM
hehe, i didn't make it, but oh well, next time...#3 FTW!!!

fuzza3001
05-12-2009, 01:47 PM
i like #3 :)

kingzamzom
05-12-2009, 01:55 PM
Yea #3 FTW
...#1 &2 are good too =)

bobalitos
05-12-2009, 04:36 PM
is it... safe to say that we now know who wrote number two?


o________________O

Callypso
05-12-2009, 07:54 PM
Voted for number one. The other two were good, too, but the first one was the only one that actually made me feel something.

But lol... #1: 3 votes. #2: 1 vote. #3: ... 35 votes. XD

gm_toasty
05-13-2009, 03:06 PM
Keep voting everyone! Support the creative players of Secret of the Solstice!

cinderella8013
05-13-2009, 04:48 PM
They all were great :) wish i could write poems oh well voted #3 GL To everyone

ManaKnightMatthew
05-18-2009, 12:54 PM
Oh well, my 'Knight of Xen' Poem must'ive not been that great then -.-

I vote for #3 btw ^^

Also btw, what rank did mine make? Just wondering is all ^^ .!!..

kazuya-str
05-18-2009, 01:20 PM
*suddenly feels like an outcast after vote* ._.;
I really do like number one though, it talks a whole lot about the game.
But then again, number three talks more about the story.

ffmasterxii
05-18-2009, 02:02 PM
Hard choice between #1 and #3...But..I vote for #3 ;D
It has much meaning of the story of Xen...:D
XD

sedfvgt
05-21-2009, 09:49 PM
wen does voting end?

miaowsun
05-23-2009, 02:38 AM
poem 1 was good but 3 owns it =D

danibelle07
05-23-2009, 02:51 AM
*cough cough poetry doesn't have to rhyme to be considered poetry cough cough*

not bursting anyone's bubble, but I liked all of them.

Keeshadoll
05-25-2009, 01:22 AM
I vote for Number 3!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sedfvgt
05-26-2009, 09:09 PM
:confused: how long till this competition ends?