A FanFic By Fallen Rain

[FallenRain8]

Well hello everyone this is the first time i will be posting anything like this on the forums so bear with my slowness. This is really just a story that popped up in my head , many of my guildies are in it ( Bunny Bashers) and also those from the Adeline server. Now it isn't Really sos based but it is a way for everyone to read it and for me to get some feedback :3


Preface


The cool wind that broke through the soft leaves of the trees was like music to her ears as she trailed through the new surroundings that captured her curiosity. Her soft footsteps the only other sound echoing through the trees so quiet, her last home the furthest thing from her mind as she continues to walk blindly through the trees. Sapphire eyes darting around her surrounds as long midnight locks framed her face dropping down her back blowing lightly in the wind. Soft supple lips curved into a smile as she walked further in the thick forest, soft hands brushing the trees as she walked past. A long tapered dress draped over her small frame faltered every inch of her soft alabaster skin, soft scars that seem like fire could be seen through the light fabric coursing along most of her body. The pace of her feet fastening into a run as she breathed in the freedom of the forest around her, the only concern her mind thought of was where her feet would take her. Jumping with ease into the large trees around her she made her way to the top of a large oak settling into a branch as she glanced out at the vast scenery. “A new home at last” she said in a bell tone as she leaned back into the large tree smiling lightly.
“At last.”

[momo79]

woot woot imma fan already xD hehe cant wait to read more xD

[Parcol]

it arleready sounds good more more

[FallenRain8]

Omg sorry it took me so long to post the first chapter, lol took me forever to write it :P, Note: Rane is 7 and Susie is 9 they may not seems it but bear with me :P( and chapter one needs to be in two parts lol , limits are boo but its ok :P)

Chapter 1: Separated

Dawn crept slowly over a desolate village in ruins, soft crackles of the fire still burning the now almost gone buildings the only sounds heard through the thick air. Slowly the wind blows the leaves of the trees that look over the village of Atte light murmurs now filling the Smokey air, bodies sprawled out over the village. Huddled in the corner of a small hut one of the only ones standing, a young girl with Safire eye holds her knee close to her body crying lightly, her face smeared with soot. The soft murmurs getting closer she hears them and start shaking lightly her face still buried in her knees not knowing if it’s the ones she knew or those who wished to harm her. An older man steps through the doorway his eye full of sorrow and disgust as he looks around, his mind swirling with the images of the horrible massicure outside. Spotting the young girl he smiles the most sorrow filled smile and slowly starts approaching her as he speaks to the man just coming in behind him.

“She is the only survivor” his voice croaked through his tight lips, the younger mans eyes glancing over the older mans shoulder and shakes his head.

Hearing the voice she huddles closer to her own body waiting for more screaming her eyes still streaming with tears. Feeling a soft hand touch her shoulder she jumps and slowly lifts her head to look at the older man in front of her his tanned face smiling warmly down at her his short auburn hair giving his golden brown eyes a glowing tone to them as he looks at her. Bursting out of her corner she hugs his leg tightly only coming up to under his hip still shaking. Patting her head he shakes his and pulls her back from him lightly kneeling holding out his arms for her, his golden brown eyes now holding back the moisture behind them.

“Its ok little one, it’s over” his soft voice breaks with sorrow as he speaks softly to her.

Hearing his words she hugs him tightly and holds on with all her strength as he lifted her up holding her tightly walking out of the hut. The soft sound of a music box being heard on the wind its broken song filling the air as the little ballerina dances on her broken pedestal. Burying her head in his shoulder she falls asleep tears still falling from her now shut eyes. Soft voices can be heard as he walks with the seven year old girl in his arms, the heat coming off her small body something he had never thought possible for one of such size.

“She the only one left “a younger man says looking at his comrade his hands covered in dirt from the graves he has been digging for the people that once lived in the village.

“Shame really, such a young age to lose everything” the other answers.

A soft sigh would escape the older mans lips as he holds her closer to him knowing nothing would bring back what she needed most, her family… but he would try, try to give her life back. Walking out of the sight of the village he sees small scars on her tiny hands as he looks her over for any sign of injury.

“What happened here, such destruction, so much death” he says speaking to himself rather then the small child in his arms. His mind swirled with the sights he saw in the village, the totally destruction, how could it have happened he wondered still walking in the direction of the neighboring village…his home.

*In the distance*

Hard and cold yellow eyes slowly watched the scene unfolding before them, the young girl the only thing in his cold gaze.
“You’ll be mine one day, one day Rane.”

*The Village Of Mire*

Slowly his foot steps seemed to get heavier as he reached his village outskirts, the bad news stuck in the back of his throat, the news that would devastate those he lived with. He looked down at the only one to have survived this horrible disaster and wondered to himself if she would remember what happened, who could have done such a thing. Hearing the light mumble of voices as he step foot into the village he looked around at the villagers flooding the streets waiting for their return, for the news of their brothers, cousins, sister. One woman as shaky as her legs were took a step forward her eyes worried as she spoke to the older man, not noticing the child in his arms.

“Murdock please tell me, my sister…her and her family they lived…are they alright” she said in a shaky soprano voice.

Murdock’s golden brown eyes softened with sorrow as he looks at the woman he knew as Emori the blacksmiths wife and spoke lowering his head “Emori…I am sorry the whole village…” he stopped not being able to finish the sentence stuck in his throat as he heard the gasps and shrill cry’s from many of the villagers. Emori’s legs finally giving out from underneath her she slowly sinks to the ground in front of Murdock her eyes fixed on the ground between his feet tears streaming down her face as she speaks quietly.

“How…how could this have happened, I saw her just the other day…how” she said to no one but herself as she sat in her own grief on the ground.

Looking down at the grieving woman he hears light footsteps behind him knowing the rest of his party has returned from their horrible task. Hands and faces covered in dirt and soot they walk silently into the village hearing the sobs of their families, their friends. Soft scar-like lines break through the soot caked onto their faces, trails where their tears escaped their will to keep them in. Looking at the sullen men Murdock notices Trent the blacksmith breaking through the crowd to get to his wife’s side.

“Emori…” Trent spoke in a sad voice pulling her into his arms as he knelt down beside her his own tears falling.

“How could this have happened… she was so young” Emori sobs into Trent’s shoulder soot smearing lightly on her cheek.

“I don’t know Hun… I don’t know” he said his voice low as he held her tighter.

The others that had come back with Trent were now in the crowd with their own families, looking at Murdock sad and confused faces looking for answers. Looking at all the faces Murdock slowly looks down at the young girl in his arms and speaks clearly to all of the villagers.

“Does anyone know of this young girl’s family…she is the only survivor” Murdock says motioning towards the young girl he is holding.

Silence crept over the crowd as their eyes locked on the sleeping girl in his arms, so many questions swirling in their teary eyes. Minutes passed in silences as they waited for someone to answer the question they all wanted to know. Glancing up at Murdock’s arms Emori sees the young girl memories flooding the back of her eyes with images.

“She…she is the little girl that lived beside my sister” Emori spoke in a hushed tone only the first few people in the crowd catching her words.

“Are you sure…” Murdock asked in a rushed voice wanting to know if she had any other relatives.

“Yes, she used to play with my niece…I think her name is Rane” she spoke standing up with Trent’s help still a little wobbly.

“It was only her and her mother that lived there from what my sister told me.”

Murdock looked down at the small face resting on his shoulder and said her name softly in his mind trying to think of who her family could be. Hearing another voice speak up Murdock turns his focus to an elderly man walking through the crowd towards him.

“I knew her mother, a good women always helping with medical research” the elder man called Mordine spoke in his husky voice.

“Would you know of any other family she has, her father maybe?” Murdock asked looking between Mordine and Emori.

Shaking her head lightly Emori looks to Mordine for his answer as well, many of the crowd anxious to hear as well. Looking at the Rane in Murdock’s arms Mordine shakes his head lightly sighing before he spoke.

“Claudia only spoke once of her family, many were lost in the battle that took place in Lost Bryn” Mordine spoke his eyes now fixed on Murdock.

“Her father one that was taken, I am afraid I know no one to claim this child my friend” Mordine said in a sad tone.

Looking out over the crowd of village he sighs and nods to himself raising his voice so all can hear his words.

“Friends morn your losses this day, tomorrow we will hold a ceremony for those that have passed on.”

Watching the crowd slowly start to dissipate he glances back at Rane smiling a sorrow filled smile speaking to only him and her.

“Guess your coming with me Rane…” he said starting to walk to his own home still hearing lightly sobs through the village.

*Murdock’s house*


Soft white light surrounded her as her eyes searched the area for something, anything. It felt warm, like a nice spring day in the fields, sun shinning down soaking into her skin as she searched. Slowly a faint picture of a women and a young girl caught her by surprise their soft voices hard to hear from the distance. Trying to get closer she could make out their features, the women young but wise in her years had beautiful bright blue eyes her hair a soft tone of lilac her soft pale skin glowing in the lightly shinning down on top of her. The young girl a mere image of her mother , darker midnight hair long down her back sapphire eyes looking lovingly up at the older woman. Seeing their smiles a light tear rolls down her cheek as she watches them speaking out one word.
“Mother…”

Rane’s eyes shot open as she looked around an unfamiliar place, metals and plackes hung off the wall, the room lightly lit with a lamp on a bed stand. She moved her feet off the bed that she had been placed on and glanced around the room water heard in the background.

“What is this...place, where am I” she said to the room in soft voice.

She jumped as the door opened falling off the remaining bed she was sitting on sprawling out on the floor in front of Murdock, his eyes watching her with light amusement. Looking up at Murdock with a worried and unsure look she scrambles to her feet stands defensively in front of him.

“Who are you, where am I … why am I here” she said quickly backing up a little not remember much of what had happened.

Seeing the cautiousness in her eyes Murdock sighs lightly and takes one steps towards her his hand held out as she speaks in a soft tone.

“I am Murdock…do you remember what happened?”

Hearing his voice her memory screams with images, her mother’s tears, the village on fire, and the screams. Tears start rolling down her dirty cheeks leaving fresh lines, looking up at the older man before her sinks to her knees. Sobbing lightly her tears soaking her soot covered clothes she pulls her legs tighter to her self like in pain remembering what had taken place. Kneeling beside the sobbing child Murdock puts his arms around her little shoulder and pulls her closely whispering to her lightly.

“I am sorry…everything is alright now, your safe with me…no one will hurt you again Rane.” Murdock speaks in a loving tone already taking on his role as her care taker.

Carefully placing his arms under it curled up legs he lifts her up into his arms walking out of the room towards the bathroom. Curling into his chest she cries harder knowing that her mother is gone, but somehow knowing she was safe. The hallway was brighter; walls lined with pictures a warm glow surrounding them as they slowly traveled down to where the sound of water was coming from. Keeping his eyes on his destination Murdock speaks softly to Rane hoping to comfort her.

“Rane please don’t be afraid, everything is alright now” he said knowing it’s all he could do to console the young girl.

Hearing the light beating of his heart he head pressed against his chest she listens to his word and sobs lightly. Her mind thought to its self “So warm… so safe” as she glanced up at the older mans face, his features weary and stressed. Reaching her hand up she lightly touches a small line in him cheeks soot smearing lightly across it. Her head to the side she smiles sadly tears still showing in her eyes as she speaks in a small tone.

“You’re alright too…no need to worry so much” her little cracking voice gets out as she looks at him with teary eyes.

Shocked by her comment he just stares at her his golden brown eyes fixed on hers slowly thinking to himself. Murdock hug Rane closer to him more lovingly then before, his voice husky with tears.

“Lets get you cleaned up in bed missy” the words slipped out as he turned into the bathroom.

[FallenRain8]

hehe seconds half

*The land of Enesse*

In a Small back ally a group of young boys gather around in a circle to look at the wondrous thing one of them has caught. There squirming around in the eldest boys hand was a small fairy, her wings the brightest blue. Struggling against the tight grip of the eldest boy she claws and bites leaving little marks on his hands as they all watch her squirm.

“What do you think we should do with it?” one boy asks the group.

“Well it must be of value to someone shouldn’t it” another one chimes up.

“Wonder if its like a butterfly, if you pull its wings off does it still try to fly” the eldest says squeezing the fairy tighter a small squeak escaping her lips in pain.

All the attention on the small fairy in the middle of the group none of them noticed their shadows slowly starting to move from their places. Slyly the shadows of the boys make their way around the circle their eyes now a deep crimson red as they watch the scene before them. In a booming voice the shadows speak putting their hollow hands on the boy’s shoulders.

“Its not very nice to pick on things smaller then you, how about if I rip your legs off and see if you still walk.”

Hearing the voice coming from their shadows the boy’s eyes widen with fear as they step back. Still holding the young fairy in his hand the eldest boy looks at his friends and whispers.

“Let’s get out of here.”
As the boy’s scatter the eldest throws the fairy from his hand onto the ground as their shadows merge into one. Slowly the shadow looks at the fairy on the ground dusting her light blue dress off her face smeared with dirty.

“Are you alright…” the booming voice asks getting closer to her.

Backing away in defense the young fairy flutters her wings trying to fly and squeaks with pain as one of her light blue wings shoots with pain. Seeing the fear in her eyes the shadow starts to fade as a young man steps forward his bright crimson eyes lock on her as he slowly approaches.

“Your hurt…Please let me help you. I mean no harm.” He speaks gently to the fairy as he kneels a few feet away from her his long cloak falling across his body. Still backing away slightly the young fairy speaks her own tongue in a small wind chime voice.

“En wai shon yen rui ta?”

Taken aback by her small voice he looks at her with confused eyes wondering what she was saying. Seeing her still defensive he speaks again in a soft voice.

“I am not sure what your say but I mean no harm to you, if you don’t need my help I will leave you in peace.”

Starting to his feet he hears her take in a deep breath, locking his eyes on her again he wait for her to speak. Looking up into the crimson eyes of this stranger she wobbles forward towards him with soft words.

“Please forgive my defensiveness… they just really.” She looks down at her feet waiting for his response.

Smiling a soft smile he kneels in front of her and reaches out his hand locks of long black hair falling forward through his cloak.

“No one will hurt you like that again… I promise.” His soft voice assures as he watches her hesitantly step into his hand.

Lifting her up he watches her for a minute before he starts to walk back to his hotel, his promise something he will never break.

“I’m alyssum…” her soft voice echo’s as she curls up into his hand letting sleep take over her small body.

“Nice to meet you Aly.”

*The Village of Atte*

Soft Sobs echo through the empty hut, its walls charred its windows gone as a young girl sits in the corner crying into her knees. A soft breezes blows through the ruined village of Atte graves lining the outskirts.

“Why…why am I alone?” Rane asks herself as she lifts her head just above her knees remembering the day Murdock had to go away leaving her with a strange woman. He had been called away; all the village leaders had been called away for an important meeting. “He said it wouldn’t take long, he said he would be back soon” she thought to herself. “Why would he lie to me?” She asked again to no one resting her head back into her knees.

“Why did you have to go?” She asks the air around her.

Soft foot steps can be hear coming closer to the house, scurrying to her feet Rane try to wipe the tears from her eyes dirt whipping lightly under her eyes. The Smell of wild flowers filled the small house as a young girl peaked her head into the small building. Her bright green eyes broke through the darkness in the hut, her sandy blonde hair shone in the light from outside soft red highlights braking through the blonde once and awhile. Spotting the girl Rane stands in awe her tears still streaming down her cheeks as she try’s to turn away.

“What’s wrong…” the elder girl ask in a soft tone.

“Nu…noting” Rane says finally able to break away from the elder girl eyes turning her back towards her.

Slowly walking into the hut the elder girl looks around at the charred walls. Feeling the presence of the elder girl standing behind her Rane turns to look at her, her sapphire eyes still soaked with tears. Running her hand gently across Rane's cheeks the elder girl smiles softly.

“You shouldn’t be crying…” she says in a worried voice.

Glancing down at her feet Rane slowly talks in a shaky voice her tears hitting the floor with a light dripping sounds.

“No one cares if I cry…I’m alone…”

“Your never alone, I’m here your not alone right now” the elder girl speaks bluntly.

Looking up into her bright green eyes Rane breaks down into sobs as she hears her words. Taking her softly into a hug the elder girl holds her closely speaking in a soft tone.

“Its ok, I’m here”

Looking up at her Rane smiles sadly and hugs her tightly thinking to herself as she does.” Will she really stay…?” Holding her in front of her the elder girl smiles gently and wipes the remaing tears from Rane’s eyes.

“I’m Susie” she says with a smile

“I’m Rane” she answers with a smile of her own.

Holding out her hand Susie puts her pinkie forward to Rane and smiles. Holding out her own hand Rane intertwines her pinkie and Susie’s, marking the promise their making her eyes still damp from crying.

“Sister…neither of use will be alone again.” Susie says smiling brightly.

Looking at the elder girl in front of her Rane smiles as new tears start to fall, happy tears.

“Sisters.”

*End chapter One*

[momo79]

shweeeeeeeet xD i sooo wanna read more!!!!! hehe love it rain ^^

[sliver_wolf94]

Soooooo awesome!!! Type up more pweeez :3

[temeragan]

wooot keep it going rain

[kazuya-str]

Oh cool, I love SoS fanfics!
Simply because there's so little and it's not TOO challenging to write one.
It's just that we'd rather be playing the game rather than writing about it I guess. ._.
I can't wait to start mine someday when I'm not lazy.

It's a nice fanfic. Keep it up. ^^
I can't wait to read more.

[sweetjk]

When ur book gets published and u
become famous, I call first signature! :D
Maybe I'll even illustrate ur book XD

[Aerise_Destiny]

so sweet~~

keep writing~~

[FallenRain8]

Well sorry it took so long for me to get the second chapter out but here it is O . O

Chapter 2: Lost Ties

Soft fluffy clouds slowly trace the sky as sapphire eyes watch the wind slowly pushing them along the bright blue ocean above. Long midnight locks cover the fresh green grass beneath it; a long slender body of a woman can be seen lying across a hill looking over a small village. Her soft cotton dress tracing across her alabaster skin as the wind lightly ruffles it as it passes by. Dazed sapphire eyes watch the day passing by, her mind off in her own memories and thoughts of the past and what could be the future.

*Day Dreams*

“It’s been ten years…already” she thought to herself as images of fire race through her mind.
“What really happened that day…?”

Slowly the fire would switch and change shapes the light smile of Murdock appearing in her mind, his gentle words from long ago echoing in her ear.
“It’s alright now”

Twisting and turning the images change again the face of a young girl flooding the back of her memories her warm smile and friendly face.
“Sis…”

Shuttering she slowly turns into fire, the trees and animals burning, the forest a blaze. Seeing herself huddled under a burning tree the fire surrounding her as the forest burns. Bright crimson eyes sticking in the back of her mind, the scars that have grown tingling on her arms as she stares at the eyes.
“Was that me…did I do that?”

Shuttering again she pushes the image to the back of her mind again, a shadow appearing in her mind now the silhouette that of a man.

“Its you again, who are you?” she asked the shadow she had been dreaming about.

Slowly the shadows darkened hand would reach out to her wrapping around her waist pulling her closer to his dark figure. Feeling her cheek hotten she looks up unable to see his face but feels completely safe. Slowly wrapping his other arm around her waist he pulls her closer, their bodies pressed together as he leans down. Her eyes widening as she blushes deeper her body shivering at their closeness. Running his hot breath up her neck to her ear he whispers softly in a deep voice.

“You’ll know soon enough.”

Shivering lightly she looks up into the shadows face his features slowly coming through, soft eyes and tanned skin. Gently leaning forward she closes her eyes ready to take the unknown mans lips with hers, cheeks still hot with blush.
“What are you doing Rane” a female voice came from the shadow in front of her.

Opening her eyes she shot up in her place on the grass and looked up at Susie her lips still pressed together.

“Umm…nothing I err…” Rane shuddered with a deep blush on her cheeks looking up at her sister.

“Sure…that’s why your lips are still all puckered up huh” Susie says laughing and poking Rane in the forehead as she sits down beside her.

Pouting slightly Rane lies back on the grass looking at the clouds again as she listens to her sister soft voice.

“It’s been awhile hasn’t it?” Susie asks her eyes looking at the village of Atte below them.

“Yea…I am glad I have you, wouldn’t have made it through half of the stuff that happened if you weren’t around” Rane answered.

“You give me too much credit, you’re a strong person Rane I think stronger then most could ever be.” Susie says lying down beside her sister looking up at the clouds as well.

Looking over at Susie for a second Rane smiles a soft smile and goes back to watching the clouds her mind wandering off again.

*Off in the Distance*

Deep Yellow eyes watch the two women cloud watching, Dark Crimson nails scraping along the tree branch as their stalker waits for the right moment.

“Soon you’ll be ours, I will get all his lords praise…when the night comes you will be ours”. The figure says its bright yellow eyes intent on the women.

* Land of Eir*

The streets quiet as the dusk slowly reaches the clouds the day slowly fading as a tall beautiful woman steps out of the item shop. Her fire red hair long and wavy down her back as she glides out of the store with grace her hazel eyes looking around the streets.

“Hmm…it’s to quiet” She thought to herself as she slowly started to walk down the street her bag in hand.

Half way down the street a soft humming noise can be heard from behind her, shifting to the left side of the road she wonders what it could be. Soft Screaming can be heard now from a girl…no a lot of girls. Glancing back in a flash a young man runs by, slowing down the moment in front of her she looks at the man before her for a split second. Tanned skin flawless, deep brown eyes and a handsome face, slowly her eyes glance down his body in front of her. Blushing deeply she looks behind him as he runs by a group of girls chasing holding what seemed to be his clothes.

“RUBIX…..COME BACK” some of the girls scream as they run by.

Watching the group of young girls run by she stands there a blush still on her face thinking of what she just saw.

“Rubix huh…”She giggles at his name and starts walking back down the road towards the outskirts of town.

*Rubix’s side*

“How the heck did this happen again” he thought to him self running down the streets stark naked.

“They got the jump on me this time” he said out loud a giant group of girls running behind him with his clothes.

Turning onto the main street he runs faster his bare feet making soft sounds as he run , his scruffy black hair blowing lightly as he runs. Seeing a woman in front of him he focuses on her as he runs by slowly, her soft skin showing through her skirt slits on both sides. Keeping his eyes focused on her he blushes a little seeing her look over him, locked on her bright hazel eyes he wonders to himself why he has never seen her before. Breaking from their moment he runs faster trying to out run the giant mob of girls behind him.

“What’s her name…” he wonders to himself running out of the village into the forest area around the village.

*Land of Enesse*

The door to the hotel room would open slowly a tall young man sliding into the room his hands cradling a soft light sleeping in his hands. Locking the door behind a soft shield of shadow coats the door as the man goes over and lightly places the sleeping fairy on the big beds pillow.

“Aly…Aly wake up we need to fix your wing…”he says in a light voice nudging her with his little pinky.

Sturring slightly Aly Rubs her eyes lightly yawning and stretching only to get a pain through her wing as she finally remembers what happened. Looking up at the man before her she is still a little unsure but trusts him to take care of her.

“How are you going to fix it…”she says in a small worried voice.
A smile showing softly in his eyes a small dark shadow of aly slowly stands up on its own beside her as the young man hands the shadow fairy small bandages. Looking a little shocked at her own shadow standing beside her aly slowly stands up and watches as her shadow self goes to work setting her wing in place.

“How…how do you do that…?” aly asks in a shocked little bell tone.

Slowly taking off the large dark cloak shielding his features from the world he looks at her with soft ruby eyes, his long black hair falling loosely around his face. Sitting down on the soft bed he sighs lightly and looks over at his small companion his light pale skin flawless to the eye.

“I was born with this power…” he speaks in a soft deep voice looking at her.

“I’m Shamir…I’m a shadow master.” The words roll off his tongue with ease and distain for that he was.

The small shadow of aly doing what she was told slowly goes back to its place as aly watches the man before her, his eyes searching for something she couldn’t place.

“So what were you doing in this town anyway, I thought fairies stayed in their forests.” Sham says getting up and wandering over to a near by window.

Making sour face aly answers “I am not like other fairies…I wanted to explore then those boys…” she trails off looking at the wind from the window softly blowing Shamir’s hair.

“Exploring is fine but be careful not everyone is your friend…” Shamir says looking up into the sky sighing lightly.

“What…what are you looking for, I mean why are you here” Aly asks shyly not knowing if she wants to know the answer.

“My…sister…” Shamir says looking back at aly now.

“Our village was attacked along while ago…we were the only ones left alive…I ran but she was taken by that man.” Shamir explains his fists clenched at the mention of the man he was talking about, as many of the shadows near him shake with his fear as his anger builds.

Looking rather shocked again at his explanation aly slowly climbs up onto the bed side table getting closer to the man that seemed to fascinate her.

“Well…then I want to help, to find your sister…I mean I owe you….for saving my life and all.” Aly says looking down at her feet.

Smiling softly at the fairy on the night stand he kneels beside the table whispering lightly to her “your company is welcome and thank you…our adventure begins tomorrow my little friend.”

“Hey I may be little but I can cause some pain” aly says making a fist smiling.

[FallenRain8]

*The Hill Of Atte*

Slowly sighing a groggy Rane would sit up and look around her eyes focusing on the now darkening sky. Rane smiles looking beside her at Susie fast asleep on the grass her soft light blonde hair almost glowing in the darkness. Poking Susie lightly Rane rolls her eyes and she just rolls over, smirking she slowly creeps closer tickling her till she wakes up. Wiggling fiercely Susie knocks rain back giggling as she speaks out of breath” what was that for you bum.”

“Well you wouldn’t wake up as usual” Rane says shrugging.

“I guess it is pretty late we should get home” Susie says getting up and dusting off the grass pieces.

“Your right, I am getting hungry anyway” Rane says copying her sister.

Taking their time walking back to the village they get to the clearing before entering the village and see a women standing in their way. Her deep yellow eyes cold and menacing as she glares at the women before her. Long brown hair looking like fallen leaves, her skin a soft peach colour, tight red pants clinging to her slender legs hanging on her hips. A black corset being seen under the red jacket covering her arms and shoulders, long vines wrapping themselves around her arms reaching down to her hands.

“Good evening ladies” the women says looking straight at Rane.

“Umm...good evening, excuse us” Susie says grabbing Rane’s arm and goes to walk by the strange women in front of them only to be stopped by her vines.

“I’m afraid I cant let you pass…” the women says her vines creeping forward pushing the two back to their starting place.

“What do you want from us…”Rane asks gripping Susie arm just incase.

“I want you…and that lovely monster inside of you” the women says with a smirk on her soft red lips.

Looking taken back by her words Rane freezes in her place looking at the women, as Susie looks at Rane worried.

“Like I said we don’t have time for this, now let us pass” Susie demands as she pulls Rane along with her forward.

Scowling at the pest in her way the women growls her ears those of a wolf as she glares at Susie. Screaming as the vines start to wrap around her leg Susie shakes Rane a scared look on her face. Snapping out of her daze Rane looks at Susie’s legs being covered my vines and starts ripping them off.

“What kind of sick joke is this, stop… I am not going anywhere with you” Rane says still ripping off vines.

“No one will ever get away from Enelle you hear me “ the women speaks forcefully.

“I’ll bring you back even if you’re half dead…” she says a sharp vine slithering off her body posed to strike at any moment.

“Leave her alone!” Susie says struggling with the vines.

“I’m not going anywhere you hear” Rane says moving away from Susie so she doesn’t get hurt.

“Fine you chose the hard way” Enelle say the vine racing forward towards Rane ready to strike.

“Just as long as your barely alive it wont matter” She say laughing evilly.

The night air is heavy with blood as the sound of the vine tarring through flesh is heard in the clearing a soft gush of blood hitting the ground. Looking shock at the scene before her Rane watches as Susie falls limp to the ground blood gushing from the wound in her left shoulder and chest. Scurrying to her sister side bringing her close into her arms blood staining her hands and dress as she holds her closely tears streaming down her cheeks.

“No…no stay with me please…please don’t leave me I need you” Rane pleads her sister to hold on through her own sobs, soft laughing being heard from Enelle.

“What a fool , risking her life for such a creature.”

Opening her eyes lightly Susie looks up at Rane and smiles lightly her life slowly slipping away from her. Her soft green eyes looking at peace as she watches her sister cry, her own tears starting to falling down her cheeks.

“Your…strong….Rane, Live…your life…freely…as I wish I could…”Susie says softly barely being heard.

“No No you have to stay …don’t leave me …your all I have…”Rane says holding Susie so close her tears fall lightly on her cheek.
“I…love…you…” Susie whispers as her eyes slowly close her body losing its own will to hold on her life slipping away in Rane's arms her blood forever stained on her hands.

“Heh are you done with the stupid little scene” Enelle says starting toward the two huddled on the ground.

“Now lets get going you have nothing left” she says with a laugh.

Slowly the night air starts to become hotter, the air around Rane starting to crackle as her midnight hair starts to turn a brilliant shade of crimson the scars on her body starting to grow again. Looking up at Enelle her once sapphire blue eyes now blood red and full of pain and hatred, soft alabaster skin now tinged with a red glow. Placing Susie’s down softly on the ground Rane stands up blood stains on her dress as she looks at Enelle with a murderous rage, an aura of fire swirling around her body.

“I will never forgive you…” Rane says in a deep tone as she glares at Enelle.

“You’re the one who’s going to die now…” Rane says slowly walking towards the women before her, hot foot prints scorching the ground beneath them. Murderous eyes fixed on the shocked ones of her pray.

“Its over…”

[momo79]

O.O love it!!! hehe u better be starting chapter 3 soon :P HUGS and keep up the awesome work rain =)

[Aerise_Destiny]

its good but there're lots of grammar mistakes... do u think u can get someone to beta? just suggesting.

[FallenRain8]

i do get alot of the past and present terms mixed up please excuse that of my writing but for some reason when i put the story up i can never edit it on the forums o .O

[sliver_wolf94]

Ahhhhhhhhhh omg Rain I offically love it O_o; Buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut I'm a lil confused on who's who in the beginning on the first part...but I'm sure their names will be mentioned later right? O_o