Mithrahn
11-01-2007, 04:41 AM
I am posting this suggestion to improve the grammar of the NPCs.
I am sorry if such a suggestion has been posted before though I think
that I am the first to make such a lengthy one, and hopefully not the
last.
It is up to the admins of the game to decide to correct the NPCs'
grammar as my suggestion or not.
So far, I've only and am only suggesting one option and from one NPC
which is the "SoS guide" NPC and the "Standard game control" sub option
in the "Tell me how to play the game!" option.
Character Name: Mithrahn
Time: Varies
Date: Varies
Map: Starting town
Bug Description: Grammatical errors of an NPC
Operating System: Windows XP Professional SP2
The format of my post is :
---
Original text from NPC
---
Suggested modified text
--- or +++ or ===
Option chosen
--- or +++ or ===
Original text from NPC
---
Suggested modified text
---
and it goes on...
Without further ado,
===
1. SoS Guide
===
a.
---
[SoS guide]
Hi ~ <player name>
I'm SoS guide. I'm here to take care of problems
that reported by users in game.
I'll tell you about not only how to play game but also
will take care of your trouble.
Well then, How can I help you?
---
[SoS guide]
Hi ~ <player name>
I am SoS guide. I'm here to take care of problems
reported by users in the game.
I'll tell you not only about how to play the game but
will also take care of all your troubles.
Well then, how may I help you?
+++
> Tell me how to play the game!
+++
[ Explanation of game control ]
I'll explain for each menu. please select the menu.
Standard game control, Item, Battle, Quest, Party,
Friend, skill, Game options, How to quit game, and so on.
You can see detailed explanation.
<player name> , What is your question?
---
[ Explanation of game controls ]
I'll explain each menu. Please select the menu.
Standard game control, Item, Battle, Quest, Party,
Friend, skill, Game options, How to quit game, and so on.
You can see detailed explanations.
<player name> , what do you wish to know?
===
b. Standard game control
===
[ Standard game control ]
Left click your mouse where you want to go then
you can move to there.
If you keep click your mouse button, you can
move to there continually.
Right click your mouse button on item, skill icon
then you can see description for each ones.
From now, I'll explain about these things in more detail.
---
[ Standard game controls ]
Left click your mouse on the spot you want to go to
move to that spot.
If you hold your mouse button, you can continually
move to the spot.
Right click on an item or skill icon to see a
description for each of them.
Now, I'll explain in more detail.
---
> Continue conversation
---
[ Standard game control -
Standard information woindow(left upper hand) ]
HP means health point :
you already know You can't move
when your HP is '0', aren't you?
MP means mana point :
It'll decrease when you using a skill.
Lv means level and experience :
You can level up when this comes to 100%.
WT means the weights of your belongings :
You can't move of you have
too much belongings. so be careful.
---
[ Standard game controls -
Standard information window(upper left hand) ]
HP means health points :
you already know that you can't move
when your HP drops to '0', don't you?
MP means mana points :
It'll decrease as you use a skill.
Lv means level and experience :
You will level up when this reaches 100%
---
> Continue conversation
---
[ Standard game control - minimap ]
You can see minimap in the right upper hand.
You can see NPC, Spores, party member near of you.
You can Increase/Decrease the size of minimap
by clicking button in the minimap or just plress Alt+Z
---
[ Standard game controls - minimap ]
You can see the minimap on the upper right hand corner.
You can see NPCs, Spores and party members who are near you.
You can Increase/Decrease the size of the minimap
by clicking on the button on the minimap or you can just
press Alt+Z.
---
> Continue conversation
---
[ Standard game control - chatting window ]
You can see chatting window in the lower left corner.
You can chat with another players here.
Press (Enter) or, click the long space of chatting windiw.
Then you can type the letter.
Press enter after you type what you want to talk,
then you can see in the chatting window
what have you typed.
---
[ Standard game controls - chatting window ]
You can see the chat window on the lower left corner.
You can chat with other players here.
Press (Enter) or click the long space on the chatting window
then you can type your message.
Press enter after typing what you want to say,
then you can see what you have typed in
the chatting window.
---
> Continue conversation
---
[ Standard game control - chatting window ]
You can whisper by type ID you want whisper in
short space in the loewer left corner of chatting window.
You can see former player list that you have whispered
by clicking mike button in the chatting window and you
can also slect one of them in that list.
Push Button form like human then you can change
chatting mode to Chat to all(All) or Party chat(Party).
---
[ Standard game controls - chatting window ]
You can whisper by typing the ID you want to whisper to in
the short space in the lower left corner of the chatting window.
You can see the former player list that you have whispered to
by clicking on the mike button in the chatting window and you
can also select one of them on that list.
Push the human like button to change
chatting mode to Chat to all(All) or Party chat(Party).
---
> Continue conversation
---
[ Standard game control - Menu window ]
You can see Menu window in the low right corner.
( Press Alt+X if can't see this )
There is My info, Quest, Inventory, Party members,
friend from left.
Skill, Stores, Standrad game control are in order.
You can open or close by clicking each icon.
Ah, You can close that window by clicking button in
upper right corner.
I'll give you more information from eacn menu.
---
[ Standard game controls - Menu window ]
You can see the Menu window in the lower right corner.
( Press Alt+X if you can't see it )
There is My info, Quest, Inventory, Party members,
friend from left.
Skill, Stores, Standard game control are in order.
You can open or close the menu buttons by clicking the icons.
Ah, you can close the window by clicking the button on
the upper right corner.
I'll give you more information from each menu.
---
> Go back to standard game control description
---
//
Edited : Added a .txt file for one more set of corrections for the same NPC
I am sorry if such a suggestion has been posted before though I think
that I am the first to make such a lengthy one, and hopefully not the
last.
It is up to the admins of the game to decide to correct the NPCs'
grammar as my suggestion or not.
So far, I've only and am only suggesting one option and from one NPC
which is the "SoS guide" NPC and the "Standard game control" sub option
in the "Tell me how to play the game!" option.
Character Name: Mithrahn
Time: Varies
Date: Varies
Map: Starting town
Bug Description: Grammatical errors of an NPC
Operating System: Windows XP Professional SP2
The format of my post is :
---
Original text from NPC
---
Suggested modified text
--- or +++ or ===
Option chosen
--- or +++ or ===
Original text from NPC
---
Suggested modified text
---
and it goes on...
Without further ado,
===
1. SoS Guide
===
a.
---
[SoS guide]
Hi ~ <player name>
I'm SoS guide. I'm here to take care of problems
that reported by users in game.
I'll tell you about not only how to play game but also
will take care of your trouble.
Well then, How can I help you?
---
[SoS guide]
Hi ~ <player name>
I am SoS guide. I'm here to take care of problems
reported by users in the game.
I'll tell you not only about how to play the game but
will also take care of all your troubles.
Well then, how may I help you?
+++
> Tell me how to play the game!
+++
[ Explanation of game control ]
I'll explain for each menu. please select the menu.
Standard game control, Item, Battle, Quest, Party,
Friend, skill, Game options, How to quit game, and so on.
You can see detailed explanation.
<player name> , What is your question?
---
[ Explanation of game controls ]
I'll explain each menu. Please select the menu.
Standard game control, Item, Battle, Quest, Party,
Friend, skill, Game options, How to quit game, and so on.
You can see detailed explanations.
<player name> , what do you wish to know?
===
b. Standard game control
===
[ Standard game control ]
Left click your mouse where you want to go then
you can move to there.
If you keep click your mouse button, you can
move to there continually.
Right click your mouse button on item, skill icon
then you can see description for each ones.
From now, I'll explain about these things in more detail.
---
[ Standard game controls ]
Left click your mouse on the spot you want to go to
move to that spot.
If you hold your mouse button, you can continually
move to the spot.
Right click on an item or skill icon to see a
description for each of them.
Now, I'll explain in more detail.
---
> Continue conversation
---
[ Standard game control -
Standard information woindow(left upper hand) ]
HP means health point :
you already know You can't move
when your HP is '0', aren't you?
MP means mana point :
It'll decrease when you using a skill.
Lv means level and experience :
You can level up when this comes to 100%.
WT means the weights of your belongings :
You can't move of you have
too much belongings. so be careful.
---
[ Standard game controls -
Standard information window(upper left hand) ]
HP means health points :
you already know that you can't move
when your HP drops to '0', don't you?
MP means mana points :
It'll decrease as you use a skill.
Lv means level and experience :
You will level up when this reaches 100%
---
> Continue conversation
---
[ Standard game control - minimap ]
You can see minimap in the right upper hand.
You can see NPC, Spores, party member near of you.
You can Increase/Decrease the size of minimap
by clicking button in the minimap or just plress Alt+Z
---
[ Standard game controls - minimap ]
You can see the minimap on the upper right hand corner.
You can see NPCs, Spores and party members who are near you.
You can Increase/Decrease the size of the minimap
by clicking on the button on the minimap or you can just
press Alt+Z.
---
> Continue conversation
---
[ Standard game control - chatting window ]
You can see chatting window in the lower left corner.
You can chat with another players here.
Press (Enter) or, click the long space of chatting windiw.
Then you can type the letter.
Press enter after you type what you want to talk,
then you can see in the chatting window
what have you typed.
---
[ Standard game controls - chatting window ]
You can see the chat window on the lower left corner.
You can chat with other players here.
Press (Enter) or click the long space on the chatting window
then you can type your message.
Press enter after typing what you want to say,
then you can see what you have typed in
the chatting window.
---
> Continue conversation
---
[ Standard game control - chatting window ]
You can whisper by type ID you want whisper in
short space in the loewer left corner of chatting window.
You can see former player list that you have whispered
by clicking mike button in the chatting window and you
can also slect one of them in that list.
Push Button form like human then you can change
chatting mode to Chat to all(All) or Party chat(Party).
---
[ Standard game controls - chatting window ]
You can whisper by typing the ID you want to whisper to in
the short space in the lower left corner of the chatting window.
You can see the former player list that you have whispered to
by clicking on the mike button in the chatting window and you
can also select one of them on that list.
Push the human like button to change
chatting mode to Chat to all(All) or Party chat(Party).
---
> Continue conversation
---
[ Standard game control - Menu window ]
You can see Menu window in the low right corner.
( Press Alt+X if can't see this )
There is My info, Quest, Inventory, Party members,
friend from left.
Skill, Stores, Standrad game control are in order.
You can open or close by clicking each icon.
Ah, You can close that window by clicking button in
upper right corner.
I'll give you more information from eacn menu.
---
[ Standard game controls - Menu window ]
You can see the Menu window in the lower right corner.
( Press Alt+X if you can't see it )
There is My info, Quest, Inventory, Party members,
friend from left.
Skill, Stores, Standard game control are in order.
You can open or close the menu buttons by clicking the icons.
Ah, you can close the window by clicking the button on
the upper right corner.
I'll give you more information from each menu.
---
> Go back to standard game control description
---
//
Edited : Added a .txt file for one more set of corrections for the same NPC