the abyss patrolers

[meepkeep333]

theres mike the cleric daniel the fighter susie the archer and kevin the mage we where all patroling the abyss like normal when a knight showd up (fighter lv 100) he raised his sword and ran towards us the mage use ice nova on him it did some heavy damage but he came for the mage and raised his sword but befor he could strike he heard a rushing sound of air like a bunch of arrows he looked up and 1000 arrows slamed onto him down he fell to the ground a yellow light flashed then he duisapeard we thought we had won intill he came back for revange the archer raised his cross bow the fighter raisesd his axe the mage raised his wand and cleric raises his mace the knight charged for the archer first the mage catsed fear on him and the archer shot him with bleed poison and diease they struck him hard blood kept comign out of him poson was runing trough his vains and disease was eating him alive he knew 1 more shot and he was done then all of a suden all of his buddys came they struck us with alot of force we all dued execpt the archer she manged tio escape they all disapeard in a yellow light the archer ran for her life then triped over a dead vivi body tthen the mage the fighter and the cleric came from there respawn point to help...to be continued...

[meepkeep333]

No starting a riot in this thread i will add a new chapter every day.

[Orchids_Mantis]

that's...a very long sentence...

[meepkeep333]

ok ill start making chapter 2

[meepkeep333]

as i left of from last time the archer was running from a group of fighters the rest of the party just respawnd they came to help and heard a loud scream they went to check it out but they where to late the archer had died the cleric tried to revive her but it dident work they thought she would just respawn but she dident they wernt sure what happend untill the fighters came after them they ran and out through the abyss portal they serched for the archer but found nothing until they went to the 20 abyss they found her in there hiding in a tent they said are you ok? she said yes im fine the dainel the fighter said lets go back to the abyss they went back to the abyss to find out the fighters left allready or have they....??? they where celabraiting till dainel got stuned kevin tried to take them out with ice nova but they killed him susie shot arows at them then the cleric trioed to revive everywon as fast as he could dainel killed them along with the archer and mage (to be continued)

[Orchids_Mantis]

lack of punctuation for sentences, quotation for what is being said by characters and spacing for seperation of different parts makes this hard to follow...

[meepkeep333]

ok ill fix it up but ill post next part tomarow

[ccasarow]

hm.. abyss patrollers.. name rings a bell..
oh yea! abyss guardians, a very popular story on the forums. a very original name.
*shuts up*
(u figure out the rest)