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Lukasz_Lucky
07-20-2009, 12:28 PM
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Hello,
Welcome to the newest Fiestian Tale. Here, you live a new adventure, you will start everything from the beginning and advance with the community.
Welcome to "This is Fiesta!!!"
If you wish, you may post or PM me your ideas on what may happen next. You may also apply for a role in the story and you may help me find titles for each chapters.
Let the adventure begin!!!!!
Lukasz_Lucky
07-20-2009, 12:31 PM
Chapter 1: A New World , A New Beginning
Lucky: Puja,where are we?
Puja: I... I don't know, I never came here before.
Lucky: How did we come here? What happened to us?
Puja: I can't answer, it's like if someone made me forget everything.
Lucky: It's... it's impossible. I only remember that we were walking in a Forest and then... this happened.
Puja: Everything turned white after, remember?
Lucky: Ya, maybe it's just a dream...
Puja: It can't be a dream if it's happening to both of us.
Lucky: Maybe... maybe someone played a trick on us.
Puja: Nah, I think we just fell asleep or something like that.
Lucky: You're wrong, otherwise we would be where we fell asleep.
Puja: Unless someone brought us back home...
Lucky: It's just a dream I tell you.
Puja: I want to get this clear ,maybe we should find someone who might help us in this world.
Lucky: Good idea
Puja: Look, there is some light there, maybe we should go.
Lucky: It might be a trap.
Puja: Well you said it's a dream, so nothing can happen to us.
Lucky: Ya, you're right. Let's follow the light.
The two adventurers started walking toward the light. They both woke up in a mysterious forest with strange mushrooms and huge trees around them. The sky was dark, the stars were shining and shadows were hiding in the forest. Some sounds came out from woods but the adventurers didn't pay attention. As they were walking, Lucky and Puja kept silent: they were terrified about what was happening. Along the way, they saw mushrooms even bigger and some of them moved. As they made their way to the distant light, the sky grew darker, and it seemed as if the shadows pressed in on them. The scared adventurers finally arrived near a blue gate where the light was coming from.
Puja: Maybe we should go in...
Lucky: Are you crazy?!
Puja: But you said...
Lucky: I know it's a dream but it's getting very spooky now!!
Puja: We came here without knowing what's happening, we don't a have little idea where we are but there is one thing I know, we have to find out what happened to us.
Lucky: But... but...
Puja: Are you coming with me into a new world or do you stay here in this creepy place?
Lucky: I... I am coming...
The two adventurers stepped into the portal without knowing where they would go or what would happen but they knew a big adventure awaits them.
To be continued...
Lukasz_Lucky
07-20-2009, 12:33 PM
Chapter 2: Shadows of Friendship
Lucky and Puja arrived in the middle of another forest. The first thing they saw was a shadow. The shadow was small, it seemed like it was holding something. The two adventurers followed him but after awhile the shadow ran away.
Lucky: Why did you scare him?
Puja: What are you talking about? You scared him away.
Lucky: I didn't, I just followed him like you did.
Puja: Aww stop acting like a baby, it's making me mad.
Lucky: I am not a baby.
Puja: You're one for sure...
Lucky: Look,something moved in the woods.
Lucky was right,there were some creatures hiding behind the trees. Some shadows were smaller and some of them were bigger. The sky was getting darker and the moon brighter. Three shadows came out from the woods. Lucky and Puja were even more terrified, they moved back slowly. The shadows grew even bigger and suddenly, they stopped moving.
Shadow: Are you Lucky and P-p-p-puja?
Puja: Yes...
Shadow: P-p-p-please follow us.
Lucky: It...it might be a trap...
Puja: It might be the solution to our problem aswell.
Lucky: But...if they are mean and evil and...and if they were demons!!!
Puja: Aww Lucky, stop exagerating everything, I am sure they are friendly.
The two adventures slowly followed the three shadows. As they walked, they saw some shadows fighting with other shadows. Some of them seemed to hold swords, and some shadows were holding bows. They walked a little bit further to see even more shadows but these ones were holding maces. After some hours of walking in the woods, the shadow started disappearing and some colorful creatures came out of the woods: the sun was rising up. The shadows vanished and the two adventurers finally saw who was behind them. There was a little purple creature leading the way and two other creatures on both side which looked like mushrooms. The creatures stopped walking and purple creature turned to the terrified adventurers.
Creature: Welcome to our world!
Lucky: C-c-could we know who you are?
Creature: My bad,I forgot to introduce myself. I am Slimey, a little slime like many others. Nice to meet you.
Puja: Aww, look how cute he is!
Slimey: Thank you for your opinion but I would app-p-p-p-preciate if you could say "she" than "he" .
Puja: I am sorry Miss Slime.
Slimey: It's ok, everyone does mistakes. Anyways, I would like you to meet Eleus and Mary the mushrooms.
Eleus: Hello, nice to meet you.
Puja: Hi hi !!!
Lucky: Hello...so, could we know where we are and who are those human-looking creatures behind you?
Mary: This is Loumen's Forest
Lucky: Loumen...is this a town?
Mary: Yes,but it's still far that's why we will give you some sleeping here.
Lucky: But we don't have anywhere to sleep.
Mary: Don't worry, take these mushroom houses,they will help you along the way.
Puja: Do you mean it's our house and that we will sleep inside?
Mary: Exactly!!
Puja: That's exciting !!!!
Mary: Ok young adventurers,it's time for you to sleep. We will wake you up in a few hours.
Puja: Good night...I mean good day!!!
To be continued...
*BONUS*
A new card has been added
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Lukasz_Lucky
07-20-2009, 03:11 PM
Let's make it a little more interactive for the readers...
Your first task is called "Remake Roumen"
You,the reader behind the screen,will have the choice to create a new Roumen which is now called Loumen. The theme is "Darkness" (you will see why in the next chapters). You have to name each characters (with a number) to make Roumen even darker.
Example: Healer Julia would would be Gorlia the Dark Stone Merchant
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Good luck!!!
pikachu2423
07-20-2009, 03:44 PM
I wanna be in the story O: Item Mercant Pey - Evil Trader Fay
Lukasz_Lucky
07-20-2009, 04:14 PM
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6. Evil Trader Fay
7.
8.
9.
10.
11.
12.
If you wish to be in the story, please post or PM me a short application
[Character Name]
[Class]
[Team (Hero or Evil)]
[A little bit about yourself/character]
--Optional if you want your own game card--
[Screenshot]
[A little story (special ability and stuff like that)]
Enjoy the never ending adventure!!!
Dragonfly77
07-20-2009, 09:05 PM
I wanna join!!
12. Dark Priestess Faria
Athemis
Archer
Good gal~
About me...I'm peppy and outgoing, and make friends quickly. I'm also stubborn and I won't back down from a fight. Fiercely loyal to friends, I'll help em out whenever needed be.
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Hmm...well, my special ability could be to turn invisible, liek a 1337 scout ;D I love that skill. So that it won't be so overpowering, I can't stay invisible for so long, and/or I have to wait for a cooldown. You can choose whichever.
Tamlinari
07-20-2009, 09:08 PM
Hey, I want to be in the story too!
I want to be the evil stylist Litree
Number 9
Stacey
07-20-2009, 09:17 PM
Hey, nice story going there :)
Are you making this an RP, since your asking others to join? ^^
Reaper Roumeus
or
Hellraiser Julia
Lol, I don't know.
Lukasz_Lucky
07-21-2009, 06:34 AM
1.
2.
3.
4.
5. Hellraiser Dulia
6. Evil Trader Fay
7. Reaper Loumenus
8.
9. Evil Stylist Litree
10.
11.
12. Dark Karasian Templar Faria
Yay people are joining!!!
I have 2 applications and 1 person wants to be the Evil Stylist Litree. I will try to add you in the story as soon as possible. I will also do some cards and send them to you whenever they are ready so you can comment them.
stefanni
07-21-2009, 07:18 AM
Sounds fun !
Number 11
[Character Name] Element Corrupter Remi
[Class] Mage
[Team (Hero or Evil)] Evil
[A little bit about yourself/character] A dark mage with many dark secrets. Willing to do everything to achieve her goals no matter what the price.
[A little story (special ability and stuff like that)] Have the ability to corrupt a person's ( or even a creature's ) mind and soul and turn them into doing her bidding.
Lukasz_Lucky
07-21-2009, 07:35 AM
1.
2.
3.
4.
5. Hellraiser Dulia
6. Spirit Trader Fay
7. Reaper Loumenus
8.
9. Evil Stylist Litree
10.
11. Element Corrupter Imer
12. Dark Karasian Templar Faria
I like the number 11, we could play Remi's Rare Finds and she will just corrupt the items we win.
Only 6 more ideas from readers and the next chapter will be on his way.
Lukasz_Lucky
07-22-2009, 05:54 PM
Anyone else has ideas for the 6 other "Demons"?
ras-blackfire
07-22-2009, 07:05 PM
lol nice done :) im not so good in storys but i like yours. gl with it xD i cant realy help :3
Lukasz_Lucky
07-25-2009, 05:47 PM
Thanks Rassy =D
Anyone else wish to find 6 new names?
Dragonfly77
07-27-2009, 12:12 AM
Btw, isn't Lietree number 10? If so, storage keeper could be Soul Keeper Fianna.
1.Evil Man Goblin
2.Blackheart Kames
4.Kill Master Sapphire
8.Dark Army Leader
That's all I got. >.<
BloodMage78
07-27-2009, 12:17 AM
Can i be a part :D
[Character Name] Echo78
[Class] Archer
[Team (Hero or Evil)] Hero :)
[A little bit about yourself/character] I like to help out. I'm friendly. Ummm love the forums xD
Lukasz_Lucky
07-28-2009, 02:59 PM
1. Evil Man Goblin
2. Blackheart Kames
3.
4. Kill Master Saphirre
5. Hellraiser Dulia
6. Spirit Trader Fay
7. Reaper Loumenus
8. Dark Army Leader
9. Soul Keeper Fianna
10. Evil Stylist Litree
11. Element Corrupter Imer
12. Dark Karasian Templar Faria
Only needing one more and then the new chapter will come.
pikachu2423
07-28-2009, 03:59 PM
3- Weapon Title Ripoff Ryan
Lukasz_Lucky
07-28-2009, 05:05 PM
1. Evil Man Goblin
2. Blackheart Kames
3. Weapon Title Ripoff Ryan
4. Kill Master Saphirre
5. Hellraiser Dulia
6. Spirit Trader Fay
7. Reaper Loumenus
8. Dark Army Leader
9. Soul Keeper Fianna
10. Evil Stylist Litree
11. Element Corrupter Imer
12. Dark Karasian Templar Faria
There we are,the new Loumen has been created. Thanks to everyone who helped in making it.
I should add the next chapter tomorrow if I can.
Lukasz_Lucky
07-29-2009, 07:52 PM
Dear readers,
I didn't really have time to write the third chapter today with the preparations to Fiesta's Next Top Model Live Tour 3 (practice where I was only sitting lol, and leveling my chars on each server to warp them in Elderine). Tomorrow will be a long day as I will have to be on each server for the Live Tour so the next chapter should be up Friday. Sorry for making you wait.
Thank you for your patience.
Sincerly,
~Lucky
zumoku
07-29-2009, 08:21 PM
Heyas Lukasz, nice thing going there ;D
Good luck with the rest of the story thing
Lukasz_Lucky
07-31-2009, 01:17 PM
Dear readers,
It seems like time is against me today. I didn't had time to write the next chapter. I also have to start the second issue of Fiesta's NEWS. I am sure you are patient enough to wait a little longer. I can't give you an exact day but I will post the third chapter as soon as I am done writing it.
Sincerly,
~Lucky Preview of next chapter: The two adventurers will arrive in Loumen unconscious that there might be a trap waiting for them...
What will happen? Read the 3rd chapter of This is Fiesta!
pikachu2423
08-13-2009, 05:22 AM
Bump ?
nikmon
08-14-2009, 10:21 PM
i got one Deathsmith Rames no.2:D
Be sure to read my mini fiction sieries!
AWSOME MINI SIERIES CLIK UNDERNEATH TO READ
Click here for Battle for Elderine home page! (http://www.outspark.com/forums/showthread.php?t=219093):cool:
Lukasz_Lucky
08-27-2009, 07:47 PM
I am really sorry for this long waiting, next chapter or chapters will be added at the end of the week for sure.
Sorry once more.
Sincerly,
~Lucky
salman.pisces
09-05-2009, 01:41 PM
Um maybe you should add just one more chapter(idk last or not).A leader of the demons or something?Maybe you shoud call him something like 'Dark Shadow Master'?
I actually like this story.Really interesting plot and a great writing style!.Good luck with the story! ^^
Lukasz_Lucky
09-05-2009, 07:01 PM
I will add well more chapters, I am currently working on some.
I am glad you like it :P
T3h_SyN
09-05-2009, 09:54 PM
I will add well more chapters, I am currently working on some.
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This line, I like it.
Lukasz_Lucky
09-12-2009, 02:52 PM
I got problems with Internet at home (in friend's house now) so it might take a while before next chapters appear.
Sincerly,
~Lucky
ccasarow
09-20-2009, 05:02 AM
chapterrrrrrr
*angry mob bears down on author's house. helicopters, anti-submarine hydro-tanks, we got it*
Lukasz_Lucky
09-21-2009, 06:46 PM
I won't make you wait any longer, so here is the third chapter. I also got other news. I decided to get a sponsor for this chapter to make it easier for me so this chapter is presented by...
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Do you need to kill someone but your dexterity is so low that you can't hurt your ennemy? Orc Organisation is here for you! We kill anything, anywhere, anytime.
This chapter is presented by the Orc Organisation and the Dictionary Gang
Chapter 3: Loumen Explorers
After a few hours of sleeping, the two adventurers woke up after they both heared a strange noise.
Lucky: Puja, stop making animal cries, someone wishes to sleep here!
Puja: But it wasn' t me.
Lucky: Then who was it? The wind? The grass?
Puja: Maybe it was a creature we didn't saw this morning.
Lucky: Puja, it must have been a dream. Go back to sleep or you won't get any tough meat.
Puja: Ok...
Puja went back in her house but she couldn't sleep after she heared that strange noise. She kept thinking about this sound. Could it be a Slime,a mushroom or even a... even a Dark Beast? Puja couldn't think about this anymore. She took her bag, she stored her mushroom and woke up Lucky.
Puja: It's time to go Lucky. Slimey must be waiting for us.
Lucky: Uhh, mother, is it you?
Puja: Ohh, stupid. *Puja slapped Lucky with the power of her hand*
Lucky: Father, why did you hurt me?
Puja: I hate him sometimes *Puja punched Lucky with the power of her fist*
Lucky: Puja, is that you?
Puja: FINALLY!!!! It's time to go explore the city.
Lucky: My poor ears, stop shouting like that and you didn't even reach the sixth level.
Puja: This is not a game Lucky, something strange is happening here.
Lucky: Ok ok, calm down. Give me some minutes... or hours to get ready...
Puja: NOW!!!!
Lucky: I hate you sometimes you know.
Puja: I do too.
Lucky: How can you?!
Puja: I can by telling you I do...
Lucky: You're mean!
Puja: Just get ready!!!
Lucky took his bag and he stored his mushroom house like Puja. Both adventurers followed the path. They searched for Slimey who would guide them in the city. As they walked, they didn't saw any adventurers fighting creatures or poking others. Lucky and Puja were getting terrified, even petrified. They did one more step... ROAAAGGHHH!!!! Puja and Lucky couldn't say a word. As they quickly poked each other to see if this was real, Slimey came out of the woods.
Slimey: You finally woke up. We should go now. Something strange is happening in this forest.
Puja: You are perfectly right! No time to waste in this forest.
Lucky: Umm... right. Let's go!
Slimey: Follow me, but be careful once we get into the city. I heared that some citizens didn't like visitors...
Lucky: Don't worry, I will throw some meat at them!
Puja: Lucky, it's not funny.
Lucky: Ok ok, I will just ignore them... with some meat in my hands...
The three of them entered the city. It wasn't so scary after all and the citizens were nice... because none of them was walking on the street. Slimey introduced them to the important people of the city as Blackheart Kames, Spirit Trader Fay and Soul Keeper Fianna.
Slimey: These are the important citizens of this city.
Puja: They seem to have creepy names...
Slimey: Don't worry, it's just to scare the "chickens" out of the city.
Puja: Right...
Slimey: I have to leave to do some stuff now, please go visit Reaper Loumenus, he will give you some information about the city.
Puja: Sure, are you ready Lucky?
Lucky: ...
Puja: Lucky? Are you still here?
Lucky: Oh, yes, sorry. I had a strange feeling. Anyway, let's go!
Slimey: Good luck...
Puja: Good bye Slimey!
Slimey went back to the forest at his own speed. Once he reached a tree which seemed normal like many others, he disappeared! Slimey was in another dimension and... Nooooooooo!!!
Dark Creature: Sorry but that's the end for you narrator!
The narrator disappeared while following Slimey so the next chapter will be presented by someone else until he comes back.
~Orc Captain
Lukasz_Lucky
09-22-2009, 07:42 PM
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Orc Organisation is here for you. We can provide you with Orcs, Hunting Orcs, Depressed Orcs, Dancing Orcs, any Orcs for any ocasion. Aim the success anywhere.
~Orc Organisation
Chapter 4: Dark Mysteries
Now that the real narrator vanished, we asked the Orc Elder to continue the story until Lucky and Puja find the narrator...
Puja: Lucky, do you know where is Reaper Loumenus?
Lucky: I think that he is... SOMEWHERE IN LOUMEN!!!!
Puja: Really?!
Lucky: Yes!!!
Puja: I knew that...
Lucky: No, you didn't.
Puja: You can't read my mind.
Lucky: How do you know? You can't read my mind as well.
Puja: Immature...
Lucky: I am not a immature, I am a smart and organized boy. The opposite of you.
Puja: Just be quiet. We need to find Loumenus... but where could he be?
Lucky: Maybe you could look on that sign that says that he is near the fountain but because you are my opposite...
Puja walked toward the fountain to find Reaper Loumenus. Lucky quickly ran to catch her up. They finally arrived near the fountain but there was no sign of Reaper Loumenus. They searched behind the fountain, inside the fountain, under the water, underground and in the sky but they couldn't find him. They ran up to the Market Place to ask Soul Keeper Fianna if she saw Reaper Loumenus but she wasn't there aswell.
Puja: It's your fault Lucky, the sun is going down so everyone went to sleep.
Lucky: Are you blind or what, the sun is burning my skin.
Puja: Ohh...
Lucky: Are you fine?
Puja: Gaaaaahhhhh!!!!
Lucky: Puja!!! What's happening to you?!
Puja: Bwaaaaahhhh!!!!
Lucky: PUJA!!!!!
Puja: Muahahahaha, I got ya. That was so easy!!! I can't believe you fell for it.
Lucky: Immature...
Puja: Anyway, we should try to find Slimey, she might help us.
Lucky: Oh hey Eleus!
Puja: Hello, it's nice to see you here.
Eleus: Greetings fellow friends. Do you need any help?
Puja: Yes, we somehow can't find the citizens of Loumen...
Eleus: Oh, I am sorry. Slimey didn't tell you about it. Everyone went to Bolderine for a meeting about economy. They should be back soon.
Puja: Ok, thank you very much.We will wait here.
Eleus: Maybe you could go see the Dark Army Leader, he knows the city well too.
Lucky: Sure, no problem. I hope he loves tough meat...
Puja: Lucky!!!
Lucky: I mean " I hope he loves hugs"...
Puja: Well better.
Eleus: I will leave now, Mary is waiting for me.
Lucky: Goodbye Eleus!
Puja: Bye!
The two adventurers made their way to the Dark Army Leader after searching for him in every corner. The Dark Army Leader was tall, he was wearing a black knight armor which made his white face glow even brighter. He also had a sword which was as big as Puja. Lucky even saw that his sword had a little red color because of blood.
Puja: Hello, Oh great warrior.
Lucky: Hi!
Puja: Be nice, he is a great warrior...
Lucky: Sir, do you want a hug?
Puja: Lucky!!!
Lucky: Ok... Greetings sir!
Dark Army Leader: Hello adventurers, may I assist you in anything?
Puja: Yes please, we would like to know a little bit more about this town.
Dark Army Leader: So you want my knowledge of this town? Well you will have to prove me that you are worthy of getting it. Go see Element Corrupter Imer, she might have a task for you which will prove me your strenght. But that's not all, you can't only be strong, you also need to show me other qualities in future tasks.
Lucky: Finally, some action!
Puja: Don't you worry sir, we are ready to do all tasks. Lucky, let's go!
Dark Army Leader: Good luck!
Puja and Lucky quickly ran to Irem because they found her while searching for the Dark Army Leader. Irem was a woman with strange colorful clothes. She was tall with orange hairs. She was standing on a box which seemed to hold mysterious items.
Element Corrupter Irem: Hello, I guess that the Dark Army Leader sent you here for your first task?
Lucky: That's right!
Element Corrupter Irem (which we will only call Irem): Great, your first task will show your strenght. You will have to slay a creature, but not any creature, you will have to slay an Angel. This creature is spying on us and it tries to corrupt us. It's hiding somewhere in Loumen Forest. Please kill it quickly.
Puja: Sure... we will try...
Irem: Go talk to Blackheart Kames for some weapons.
Lucky: You can count on us.
Lucky and Puja were heading to the smith's house.
Puja: Lucky, I think there is something wrong here. How could an Angel be evil?
Lucky: It's maybe the Devil disguised as an Angel.
Puja: We have to find out what's really happening in this city.
Lucky: But...
Puja: It's for our safety, unless you wish to live in a town where you won't know anything and you will only do what the citizens ask you.
Lucky: Aww, you're right.
Puja: I am always right!
Lucky: Immature...
The two adventurers went up the stairs but as they arrived they saw... him!
This is the end of this chapter. I hope you enjoyed and remember, this chapter is sponsored by the Orc Organisation Aim the success!
kahysadra
10-08-2009, 11:01 PM
ehhhhhh so enjoyable to read!
pujaliscious
10-10-2009, 09:57 AM
Rawr Lukas! <3
chocolight51
10-10-2009, 05:45 PM
oooo i wanna be in the story too! i wanna be Brawny Blacksmith Jimmy!
kahysadra
10-18-2009, 11:10 PM
ohh nooo, where's an update? is the story coming along?
Lukasz_Lucky
10-31-2009, 04:10 PM
I will try to write the next chatper ASAP. It MIGHT be themed with Halloween. Finally, I wish you all a Happy Halloween.
~Lucky
ritra
12-24-2009, 12:19 PM
i wanna be in it :D
We umm *looks at map of eldin* Hmms o-o
Cheapo Depo RitRit
lolz~
kahysadra
12-28-2009, 05:55 PM
bump bump~~~
Lukasz_Lucky
01-03-2010, 05:40 PM
I am really but really sorry, but I am stuck with other projects (Fiesta's NEWS, Xmas Event and Blog) now and I don't have time to make this story go along. It might take a big while before it gets updated. I am really sorry for all the readers and everyone who followed this story.
Sincerly,
~Lucky
foxfire1329
04-03-2010, 04:31 PM
aw darn, i just found it and its not really gonna b updated now just my luck lol. good luck with your stuff lucky