The deadliest one in Fiesta

[Orchids_Mantis]

Just felt like doing something different today while my characters vend.


Enjoy



For those of you who don't get it, put his last name first then read it backwards.

[Orchids_Mantis]

From the song of a minstrel, a warning to all:




On calm days while wind blows soft,
Sky filled with songs from birds aloft;
As you wander about, you just may find
So deadly a being it baffles the mind.

He searches for players,
Who without knowing come near;
And as they draw mobs
Secure without fear,
He stalks up behind them
Their attention unwavered,
Then remoreslessly kills them,
This emotionless slayer.

In abysses the strong
Fight for glory and fame;
Yet even verse them,
The results are the same.

Despite vaunted strength,
And regardless of map,
If he's there he will find you,
And surely attack.

None know his face,
For he hides it to well,
But we've all felt his gaze,
And been trapped in his spell.

This being's great power seems without end,
With only a glace, to town players he'll send.
Those in power have tried to prevent his attacks;
But regardless of changes, he always comes back.

Those struck by his gaze,
Are frozen in place
And stand while attacked,
As their minds furiously race.

They pray for salvation,
For some deity's grace.
But alas, mobs shall
Their hp swiftly erase.

From their distress he feeds
And their hope he consumes;
As they die, without rest,
To the next victim he moves.

Those in the abyss,
Who on Kill Points pride,
From the number he's killed
They are innumerably shy.

Worry not, from mobs or PKers you see,
The one to truly fear in Isya is he.
Whenever you lure,
You must always give pause;
To consider the effect,
His appearance would cause.

The deadliest one,
In all Isya -without fail,
And beyond all shadow of doubt,
Is the dread Vissam Gale.

[Icetra]

Whoa. If I had a chocolate cake I would gift it you immediately. I really liked what you created. :O

I give you my rating. 10/10. ^^ (Reminds me to read up your story.)

[pikachu2423]

Dun dun daaaaaa


Massive Lag O:

[erick-]

Hmmm... You're quite the poet, Orc!

[defcom]

Wow that was an awesome poem :O How long did it take you to create it? hehe..I liked the end where you revealed what it was.

[hyutten]

From the song of a minstrel, a warning to all:




On calm days while wind blows soft,
Sky filled with songs from birds aloft;
As you wander about, you just may find
So deadly a being it baffles the mind.

He searches for players,
Who without knowing come near;
And as they draw mobs
Secure without fear,
He stalks up behind them
Their attention unwavered,
Then remoreslessly kills them,
This emotionless slayer.

In abysses the strong
Fight for glory and fame;
Yet even verse them,
The results are the same.

Despite vaunted strength,
And regardless of map,
If he's there he will find you,
And surely attack.

None know his face,
He hides it to well,
But we've all felt his gaze,
And been trapped in his spell.

This being's great power seems without end,
With only a glace, to town players he'll send.
Those in power have tried to prevent his attacks;
But regardless of changes, he always comes back.

Those struck by his gaze,
Are frozen in place
And stand while attacked,
As their minds furiously race.

They pray for salvation,
For some deity's grace.
But alas, the mobs
Their hp swiftly erase.

From their distress he feeds
And their hope he consumes;
As they die, without rest,
To the next victim he moves.

Those in the abyss,
Who on Kill Points pride,
From the number he's killed
They are innumerably shy.

Worry not, from mobs or PKers you see,
The one to truly fear in Isya is he.
Whenever you lure,
You must always give pause;
To consider the effect,
His appearance would cause.

The deadliest one,
In Isya without fail,
And beyond shadow of doubt,
Is the dread Vissam Gale.

Great!!! *claps*
I've fought Vissam Gale many times, I've never once laid a skill on to him.

[Orchids_Mantis]

Hehehe, thanks; I'm glad people are enjoying this one.

I created the name a little while ago (same as Rojam Gal) -I was considering using one of the names for the first evil character in Li Tianxia's story then I settled on a different name...but I liked the joke so much that I was compelled to do something with it, so I wrote this.


Oh, and it took me about fifteen minutes to freehand, another five or six to refine to this point.



oh that reminds me...*makes a small adjustment*

[T3h_SyN]

You have won my internets! You deserves a cookie, or some other baked good. It was masterfully written and the bad guy... I mean, I really felt like I had a reason to dislike it. Truly this was a very epic poem.

I give it my Seal of Approval!

[Orchids_Mantis]

What's this?
*sniff sniff sniff*
I smell choclate chips!
*Hoovers cookie before anyone sees him move*

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what...I don't have a problem....I don;t HAVE to eat them...

[Orchids_Mantis]

Just a little bump; I'll let it sink for good after this.

[Angel_Serene]

I'm glad I got a chance to read this poem. It is really well written and lol I found myself curious enough to read the entire thing from beginning to end. :3 Well done. ^ ^

[Dragonfly77]

*bump* How come I haven't seen this until now? XD Vissam Gale...very evil indeed...

[Orchids_Mantis]

You were writing chapter 5,6 and 7 for your story at the time and going through massive lists of people wanting cameos in it....

[MagicalElfy]

a¡¡¡very gooood poem :P even though im a PKKer lol was awsome

[honeymustard]

Nicely written enjoyed it thoroughly