nikmon
08-10-2009, 10:23 PM
Battle for Elderine Part 1/5
PART1
Rayy woke with a start and hopped out of bed. He quickly tossed on his armour and unsheithed his +9 1h and Shield. He needed to hurry if he wanted any bit of a chance of being at the Event. He even skipped breakfast to get ahead.
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I stared at the croud of Isyans in front of me. All the classes brought there best armour for the event. I felt under prepared. My stomach groweled to remind me of it.
I looked for my friend and found him with ease.
He came in his best SC suit and was trotting around on his dark pegasus like he was some sort of God. His name was Laen he was a mage only a few lvls under me but still strong for his lvl.
He saw me, "Hey Rayy, sup?"
I answerd to my friend, "nothing much just hungry." my stomach growled.
He laughed, "I can tell i hear it loud and clear." "Whyd u call me to this event anyways?"
"Well, this is the opening of the new Tower of Iyzel and i was hoping to get here early so we wouldnt have to wait in line."
Laen mocked, "i can see u wer late, this line seems endless."
I sighed, "We cou-"
A loud blow horn sounded.
Gaurd Captn Sean spoke fast to avoid the rush of Isyans, "THE TOWER OF IYZEL IS NOW OPEN!"
I felt like a bull slammed into my back as hundreds of people trampled over me and Laen to make it in.
In about a minute later another message was deliverd, this one was more dishearting then the other.
"THE TOWER OF IYZEL IS NOW FULL TO CAPACTIY. WAIT TIME: 3HRS"
Laen and i trembled in disbelif. I studied my suroundings and recongnized a few people. I saw: Haara (friend), Sun(guild master), Jena(friend), Sethmn(friend), BPmaster12(Guildling), Pk4eva(friend), CashaK(friend), xRay(friend).
WOW a lot of my friends!
There wer others waiting outside as well i didnt kno many of em though. Eldy was full too. It was Choas.
I diceded since it wasnt worth the wait me and Laen would go grab a bite to eat.
I went to my favorite resteraunt (THE COOKED SLIME), Laen's treat he said anything was worth stopping the grumble.
As i was eating my food. A loud blast shook the ground. The room went silent as a destructive roar shot out and outside of our window i watched in horror as the mighty tower of Iyzel crumpled....
Laen looked astonishd he spoke, "A- all those pe-people... dead"
We dashed outside to find a few people on the ground most uncouncious....or worse.
I found my friend Sethmn and in his dying breath... he whisperd, "Its the Hellgait... someones realeased them from the tomb.... and they have...Eld-Elderine. Run.........." He closed his eyes for the last time.
He warned me... if only i listend...
END of PART 1
Part two will be written later!
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Tell me if u liked it.
Pls Comment!
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~Thank You~
- nikmon
Click the link under to read the Second Battle for Elderine
http://www.outspark.com/forums/showthread.php?p=2584871#post2584871
PART1
Rayy woke with a start and hopped out of bed. He quickly tossed on his armour and unsheithed his +9 1h and Shield. He needed to hurry if he wanted any bit of a chance of being at the Event. He even skipped breakfast to get ahead.
-----
I stared at the croud of Isyans in front of me. All the classes brought there best armour for the event. I felt under prepared. My stomach groweled to remind me of it.
I looked for my friend and found him with ease.
He came in his best SC suit and was trotting around on his dark pegasus like he was some sort of God. His name was Laen he was a mage only a few lvls under me but still strong for his lvl.
He saw me, "Hey Rayy, sup?"
I answerd to my friend, "nothing much just hungry." my stomach growled.
He laughed, "I can tell i hear it loud and clear." "Whyd u call me to this event anyways?"
"Well, this is the opening of the new Tower of Iyzel and i was hoping to get here early so we wouldnt have to wait in line."
Laen mocked, "i can see u wer late, this line seems endless."
I sighed, "We cou-"
A loud blow horn sounded.
Gaurd Captn Sean spoke fast to avoid the rush of Isyans, "THE TOWER OF IYZEL IS NOW OPEN!"
I felt like a bull slammed into my back as hundreds of people trampled over me and Laen to make it in.
In about a minute later another message was deliverd, this one was more dishearting then the other.
"THE TOWER OF IYZEL IS NOW FULL TO CAPACTIY. WAIT TIME: 3HRS"
Laen and i trembled in disbelif. I studied my suroundings and recongnized a few people. I saw: Haara (friend), Sun(guild master), Jena(friend), Sethmn(friend), BPmaster12(Guildling), Pk4eva(friend), CashaK(friend), xRay(friend).
WOW a lot of my friends!
There wer others waiting outside as well i didnt kno many of em though. Eldy was full too. It was Choas.
I diceded since it wasnt worth the wait me and Laen would go grab a bite to eat.
I went to my favorite resteraunt (THE COOKED SLIME), Laen's treat he said anything was worth stopping the grumble.
As i was eating my food. A loud blast shook the ground. The room went silent as a destructive roar shot out and outside of our window i watched in horror as the mighty tower of Iyzel crumpled....
Laen looked astonishd he spoke, "A- all those pe-people... dead"
We dashed outside to find a few people on the ground most uncouncious....or worse.
I found my friend Sethmn and in his dying breath... he whisperd, "Its the Hellgait... someones realeased them from the tomb.... and they have...Eld-Elderine. Run.........." He closed his eyes for the last time.
He warned me... if only i listend...
END of PART 1
Part two will be written later!
Hope u liked it!
Tell me if u liked it.
Pls Comment!
Pls Participate in the poll at the top so i know if i should write the second one.
~Thank You~
- nikmon
Click the link under to read the Second Battle for Elderine
http://www.outspark.com/forums/showthread.php?p=2584871#post2584871