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nikmon
08-11-2009, 10:40 AM
Battle for Elderine PART2/5
PART2
Click this Link underneath to read Part one of Battle for Elderine
http://outspark.com/forums/showthread.php?t=218959


I couldnt believe my eyes. There were bodies scattered all across Forest of Mist. I closed Sethmn's eyes and went to go look for survivors.

Sure enough there were survivors but i recognized none of them. I ran back to the waiting area leaving the ruined castle in its sorry state.

I found Jena, she had an arrow jutting out from her shoulder and blood stains all over he right arm. I also found Haara he had his crossbow tucked under his arms and a large cut on his leg. He was using a leaf he found on the ground as a makeshift band-aid.

I found Sun not nearly as busted up as the others but still in a terrible state. Pk4eva wasnt as hurt either but he was a cleric so he could do that. He went immediatly to Haara and started to fix up his wounds.

I couldnt find BPmaster, CashaK, or Xray. I knew what their fates were though.

Grand Master Sean saw me and raced over.

He spoke, "I managed to hide from them. I discoverd that it was the Helgaits doing. Someone has realeased them from their tomb."

Laen spoke, "We know we also know that they have Elderine captured. Are you going to even do anything about this Grand Master?"

"I alredy have young mage, I informed Uruga just before you got here. Im going to let you in on a secret. Uruga is planning a sneak attack today to win back Elderine."

I asked, "Do you think they even stand a chance?"

"Ofcourse Adrian and I fought Helga once im sure we can do i again."

Something about the uncertanty of his voice told me otherwise.

Sean said, "Rayy they havent killed anyone in Elderine yet. Instead everyone is being held inside Guild Hall. If we dont act soon they will light Guild Hall and burn it to the ground with everyone inside it." They also have scouts surrounding the outskirts of Eldy. If they find any survivors, they will find you and kill you." "I suggest you and your little friends should hide."

I retaliated, "No i wont i want to help fight!"

"That is unwise Rayy and even if you wanted to you cant."

"Why is that sir?"

"See for yourself" He pointed toward the hills behind Elderine.

Adrien and the rest of Uruga were marching straight into Elderines walls but surprislingy no one was stopping them.

My attention was now focused on the color of the hills. Last i rememberd they were green not brown.

Just after all the tropps walked to Elderine's golden gates, the hills stood up.

By standing up i mean, there were Hellgait soilders laying in the grass with their brown armour. Thats why the hills were mis colored!

In a huge mob the Uruga soilders were surronded and imprisoned.

It was a clever move by Helga but how did he know they were going to attack? It was supposed to be a suprise!!! Sean's face showed his worry. He turned to me and spoke, "I will return to my hiding unlike you i enjoy living."

He went to the corner of the forest and hid. That day i realised the great hero Sean was a coward.

I looked at my survivng friends, "We will fight the Hellgait and win back Elderine."

They looked uncertain but one by one they nodded their heads in agreement.

"That settles it then, tommorow we will begain our march and we will take the same paths the Uruga soilders took."

A shady voice rang out, "Are you planning a conspiricy?"

I turned my head to see an archer with a bow standing in the trees he jumped down. His golden long hair scattered over his face.

He spoke, "my name is archshadow and i want to join you. I know those hills better then anyone in the world. I also want to get rid of those damned Helgait who polluted the land i grew up in with bodies."

I spoke, "What do you say guys is he in?"

Laen spoke, "Sure we need ALL the help we can get it we stand a chance of taking down that army and regaining Elderine.

END OF PART 2
Hope you liked it!
PLEASE COMMENT ON BOTH PART 1 & 2

teamchlidren
08-11-2009, 11:11 AM
good job on it ^^

nikmon
08-11-2009, 02:00 PM
:D thanks hope more people read it!

aaj83o8
08-11-2009, 03:49 PM
this story is awesome!But the next one can i b in it?

chrusciki
08-11-2009, 06:16 PM
no comment on the awsome story