DGO's Free Verse Virtuoso: Forum MVP 9/8 - 9/22

[GM_Nekopon]

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Welcome Dancers and Writers!
Ready to fire those pens up and write some lyrics?
Give it all your got and show us how much you love DGO!
This is a TWO WEEK Forum MVP.

Rules:
* Two entries maximum per person
* Must be related to Dance Groove Online
* You must recompose the entire song, including title
* No flames, rude, or sexual language in entries
* Posting on other thread will not count
* Do not violate the Terms Of Service

PRIZES:
There will be one winner, chosen by the GM:

You very own Forum MVP badge!
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GOAL:
Rewrite the lyrics for the DGO song,
"It's You, It's Me" so it's all about DGO!
It can be about how much you love the game, your in-game experiences,
the friends you made there, be creative!

"It's You, It's Me"
You never know who's waiting for you
You never know when love is coming your way
but if tonight i look again into your eyes
then its you and its me and love
then its you and its me and love

you never know who's waiting for you
you never know when love is coming your way
but if tonight i look again into your eyes
then its you and its me and love
then its you and its me and love

you never know who's waiting for you
you never know when love is coming your way
but if tonight i look again into your eyes
then its you and its me and love
then its you and its me and love

you never know who's waiting for you
you never know when love is coming your way (comin your way)
but if tonight i look again into your eyes
then its you and its me and love
then its you and its me and love oo baby

you never know who's waiting for you
you never know when love is coming your way (is comin your way, hey)
but if tonight i look again into your eyes
then its you and its me and love
then its you and its me and love

Submission will be accepted until 10:00AM (pst) Thursday September, 22nd 2009.

GOOD LUCK!

[poochyenarulez]

y don't solstice have forum mvp anymore ????????

[xoxnarutoxox]

Haha, I'll try.. Maybe o.o.
-Thinks-
-Puts lyrics on-

Dance with no worries

x3
Once you start dancing you get better
Once you start you can't stop following the beat
Yet if you trip and miss it doesn't mean you fail
There are friends that will cheer you on
There are friends that will cheer you on

Once you start dancing you get better
Once you start you can't stop following the beat ( following the beat )
Yet if you trip and miss it doesn't mean you fail
There are friends that will cheer you on
There are friends that will cheer you on

Once you start dancing you get better
Once you start you can't stop following the beat ( don't stop following )
Yet if you trip and miss it doesn't mean you fail
There are friends that will cheer you on
There are friends that will cheer you on ( ohh yeahh )

[shogiebear]

It's time for me to put my thinking cap on ;D

EDIT: . . . Kay x3 Here it is
EDIT2: I decided to put my second and last entry here ^^

Entry 1:
“My Groove, My World”

Expression, satisfaction within me
Can’t you see what I’ve becoming to be?
Why is it too hard to even to believe?
This is my only groove
This is my only world

Persistence, firing in my own way
Drives all those dancers sinking right away
I could make your smile turning upside down
That’s just a little step
That’s just a part in life

Everything around me is just an illusion
All I care about is my own solutions
I couldn’t even deny with my very eyes
It’s just me, my little groove
It’s just me, my little world

All my friends and crew looking out for me
I’m very happy for them to see (Oh hell yeah)
They’re so supportive in their very way
Keep grooving, for my only self
Keep turning, my own small world

Expression, satisfaction within me
Can’t you see what I’ve becoming to be? (Becoming to be)
Why is it too hard to even to believe?
This is my only groove
This is my only world

Entry 2:
“Feelings and Response”

I can’t believe what I am go through
After all those dances that I’ve made
It’s embarrassing and filling up with shame
That is all, in my thoughts
That is all, in my thoughts

Each emotion that I have been shown
All the times that I have got from a Poor
The Perfect sign, it makes me going blind
My very eyes, I’m freaking out
My very eyes, I’m freaking out

Those dance moves that I couldn’t believe
It’s all about Tell Me and even Gee
Why can’t they put Mirotic or Amigo?
At the least, put Purple Line
At the least, put Purple Line

Whenever it’s a 4 key or 6 key
I don’t care if it is Step Up or not (or even items)
Too much pink and girly gestures all the way
Omona! I am insane
Omona! I am insane

Emo or not, I can live up in DGO
Despite the fact that I’m scared of all that pink (scared of all pink)
Perfect, Great, Good, Bad and also Poor
That’s just the DGO life
That’s just the DGO life

[Kyuubi-sama]

Hmm I might just attempt to fail at this

[michaelhc]

Will give it a try :p

[Hessel]

"It's You, It's Me"
You always know I'm waiting for you
You always know when I'm is coming your way
but today I came to look into your eyes
then its me and its you and love
then its me and its you and love

You always know I'm waiting for you
You always know when I'm is coming your way
but today I came to look into your eyes
then its me and its you and love
then its me and its you and love

You always know I'm waiting for you
You always know when I'm is coming your way
but today I came to look into your eyes
then its me and its you and love
then its me and its you and love

You always know I'm waiting for you
You always know when I'm is coming your way (comin your way)
but today I came to look into your eyes
then its me and its you and love
then its me and its you and love oo baby

You always know I'm waiting for you
You always know when I'm is coming your way (is comin your way, hey)
but today I came to look into your eyes
then its me and its you and love
then its me and its you and love

Randomly done in 5 minutes. Enjoy.

[ras-blackfire]

omg hard one O_o ill give it a try after im back from school x3

EDIT: nvm made one already o.O im failing but i realy don't knwo what to write XD
" It's Me, It's Dancing"
You can always dance with me
you can always take a chance to dance with me
But when the night is falling
then its only me who's dancing
then its only me who's dancing

You can always dance with me
you can always take a chance to dance with me
But when the night is falling
then its only me who's dancing
then its only me who's dancing

You can always dance with me
you can always take a chance to dance with me (yea, always)
But when the night is falling
then its only me who's dancing
then its only me who's dancing

You can always dance with me
you can always take a chance to dance with me (yea, take the chance)
But when the night is falling
then its only me who's dancing
then its only me who's dancing


y don't solstice have forum mvp anymore ????????

becouse the GM of SOS quited :D

[himuchan]

"It's You, and I cherish you so much"

You know how I feel for you
And you know I cherish you so much
But when I look deeply in you eyes
I drown in them and love takes over
I drown in them and love takes over

You know how I feel for you
And you know I cherish you so much
But when I look deeply in you eyes
I drown in them and love takes over
I drown in them and love takes over

You know how I feel for you
And you know I cherish you so much (Cherish you!)
But when I look deeply in you eyes
I drown in them and love takes over
I drown in them and love takes over

You know how I feel for you
And you know I cherish you so much (Yeah I cherish you)
But when I look deeply in you eyes
I drown in them and love takes over
I drown in them and love takes over

not so good but hey it's still morning >.>

[evil-zop]

i think i'll skip this one.. Who knows what it'd be re-written as by me.. aha ;p

[shogiebear]

Randomly done in 5 minutes. Enjoy.

o.o More like 10 seconds

[ShonenHero]

Heheh, this is my specialty! *Takes out microphone in a really cool spinning way*

Just watch!

"I want to see you fly"

Newbie or pro, come join our dance crew
I`ll show you a game you`ll never regret you played
Just make a char, you pick its gender and its size
In DGO, I want to see you fly
In DGO, I want to see you fly

The song is on, you know that`s your cue
You never know which arrow`s coming your way
Just hit them all, you may give yourself a surprise
It`s DGO, no need to be shy
It`s DGO, no need to be shy

Dance with your friends, some old and some new
Your friendlist grew and all your pals it displays
At school or work, you think `bout dancing with the guys
In DGO, there is no goodbye
In DGO, there is no goodbye

Let`s dance in teams! It`s green against blue
Watch out for items, your points they take away (They take awa-ay~)
But in the end you all get fun as your grand prize
In DGO, it is you who won
In DGO, it is you who won

So now you know, come join our dance crew
I bet you`re tired of all those orcs you slay (Those orcs that you-slay~)
Just drop your sword and all your armor in the ground
In DGO you and me will fly
In DGO you and me will fly

http://i450.photobucket.com/albums/qq222/Neoshaman2/Neomicro.jpg

[shadinjaxd]

ill try
by Badgamer

[shadinjaxd]

“Its fun, its free”
when your alone and have nothing to do
you’ll never know if you’ll have fun today
but if tonight if you play dance groove online
then it’s fun, it’s free so dance with me
then it’s fun, it’s free so dance with me

when your alone and have nothing to do
you’ll never know if you’ll have fun today
but if tonight if you play dance groove online
then it’s fun, its free so dance with me
then it’s fun, it’s free so dance with me

when your alone and have nothing to do
you’ll never know if you’ll have fun today
but if tonight if you play dance groove online
then it’s fun, its free so dance with me
then its fun, it’s free so dance with me

when your alone and have nothing to do
you’ll never know if you’ll have fun today ( fun today )
but if tonight if you play dance groove online
then it’s fun, it’s free so dance with me
then it’s fun, it’s free so dance with me oo babay

when your alone and have nothing to do
you’ll never know if you’ll have fun today (have fun today, hey)
but if tonight if you play dance groove online
then it’s fun, its free so dance with me
then it’s fun, it’s free so dance with me

YOU WIN
1. Badgamer beats 1000 + 40 exp
2. ……………………………………………..
3. ……………………………………………..
4. ……………………………………………..
5. ……………………………………………..
6. ……………………………………………..

[GM_Nekopon]

More more entries! We want more~

[sk8erdude123]

LOL nice one shonen xD and i like the pic at the end :D

since this isnt my forte im just here to judge the lyrics is that ok neko? lol

[Daywen]

My rewritten lyrics are about the game in general. I had fun doing this. not sure if i'll make a second entry or not.

Entry 1: Up double down left left right up


When you’re online I wanna play you
just customize and get in the groove
left up down right up up
Dance Groove Online, let’s have some fun
Dance Groove Online, let’s have some fun

When you’re online I wanna play you
get in a room and ready on up
left right left right down right
Dance Groove Online, let’s have some fun
Dance Groove Online, let’s have some fun

When you’re online I wanna play you
We can team and serve all day
up double down left left right up
Dance Groove Online, let’s have some fun
Dance Groove Online, let’s have some fun

When you’re online I wanna play you
G.L.H.F and smiley face (good luck, have fun)
even if you miss I’ll dance with you again
Dance Groove Online, let’s have some fun
Dance Groove Online, let’s have some fun, free to play

When you’re online I wanna play you
Now come close I’ll give you a hug (oh yeah a hug hug )
It’s been 4 hours move your wrists left and right
Dance Groove Online, let’s have some fun
Dance Groove Online, let’s have some fun

[ras-blackfire]

last entry~~ it made me laugh XD

The buttons and the game
you never know which button to push
you never know which buttons will be shown
And when the buttons are comming your way
it will be up up, left, right~~
it will be up up, left, right~~

You never know which button to push
but When the buttons are floating on your screen
you will look like a dancing queen
you will dance right, down, left, right~~
you will dance right, down, left, right~~

if you are alone or with your friends
Play with the team mode and the battle items
The game will get beter
And we all dance, up, down, down~~
and we all dance, up, down, down~~

you never know which button to push
you never know which buttons will be shown (will be shown)
And when the buttons are comming your way
it will be left, down, left, right~~
it will be left, down, left, right~~

You always feel like playing this game
When you don't know how the dance but want too (you can play this game)
You will get the groove and dance all night
you will play dance groove online~~
you will play dance groove online~~

[xfluffypillow]

I tried and then deleted it :P
It's very difficult >.<

[sphinxster]

Here's my attempt. Hope you like it! :)

"Break a Sweat"

DGO is the place to be
Whatcha waitin' for? Come dance with me!
And if you can't control it, fear not coz we
are gonna rock the dance floor until three.

Everybody shake, kick, twist and groove to the beat.
Wear your dancing shoes and get on your feet.
Wait into the lobby or make a room to meet
with the other crews whose ready to break a sweat.

Select the game type for pleasure,
Choose the speed mode for pressure.
Decide on what kind of music to play,
Pick out which stage you wanted to sway.

Hit up, down, right, left keys to perfect the steps
But don't worry too much if you get bad/poor rating, (bad/poor rating)
As long as you take a screenie and strike a pose
I believe you did great! Never mind the ranking.

Come one, come all let's take the challenge!
Have fun, be yourself, savor the spotlight, dance with courage. (the spotlight, dance with courage, yo!)
Just do your thing, own the floor and earn groove points
Don't be so confident or else hear complaints not compliments.

[tatsuki101]

ahahah this is my fail entry XD : (done in about the shortest possible time lol)

"Eight Key, Fail Me"
You never know how hard it is
You never know when the arrows will pop up
but if i skip one i'll lose all my perfects
and eight key totally made me fail
and eight key totally made me fail

you never know where Silkypico is hiding
you never know when he'll pop into your room
but if Silky kills you it isn't my fault
and eight key totally made me fail
and eight key totally made me fail

you never know what level they are
level doesnt mean they are as bad as me
but if you get owned by a noob to bad
i guess you should have practiced more
i guess you should have practiced more

you never win when you play 8k
you never win against level 1's either you noob (your so bad)
but if tonight i look again at my keyboard
ive played for 8 straight hours omg
ive played for 8 straight hours omg oo gawd

you never know when you should quit
you never know when you've played to much (you're really bad at this, yeah)
but if tonight i play another 8 key game
then its you and its me failing again
then its you and its me failing again

[sphinxster]

my second entry =D

"It's Me, It's You"
You never know who's crying for you
You never know when joy is coming your way
but if tonight i look again into your face
then its me and its you and joy
then its me and its you and joy

you never know who's crying for you
you never know when joy is coming your way
but if tonight i look again into your face
then its me and its you and joy
then its me and its you and joy

you never know who's crying for you
you never know when joy is coming your way
but if tonight i look again into your face
then its me and its you and joy
then its me and its you and joy

you never know who's crying for you
you never know when joy is coming your way (comin your way)
but if tonight i look again into your face
then its me and its you and joy
then its me and its you and joy oo honey

you never know who's crying for you
you never know when joy is coming your way (is comin your way, yea)
but if tonight i look again into your face
then its me and its you and joy
then its me and its you and joy

[GM_Nekopon]

---All posts beyond this post will not be counted. The results will be posted soon!---

[ras-blackfire]

=^_^= Good luck to neko to pick a winner
and good luck to everyone who joined :)

LET THE BEST ONE WIN~~

[ras-blackfire]

this thread died o.o *w8's for the winner* x3

[sphinxster]

right D=

10 char

[ras-blackfire]

Q_Q still no winner? D: NEKOOOOOOOOO~~~XD

[GM_Nekopon]

Sorry for the slight delay, everyone! Let's announce the winner now!

Try to sing this along with the music, you'll realize it's a lot more than it looks. You'll get a whole new experience!

Heheh, this is my specialty! *Takes out microphone in a really cool spinning way*

Just watch!

"I want to see you fly"

Newbie or pro, come join our dance crew
I`ll show you a game you`ll never regret you played
Just make a char, you pick its gender and its size
In DGO, I want to see you fly
In DGO, I want to see you fly

The song is on, you know that`s your cue
You never know which arrow`s coming your way
Just hit them all, you may give yourself a surprise
It`s DGO, no need to be shy
It`s DGO, no need to be shy

Dance with your friends, some old and some new
Your friendlist grew and all your pals it displays
At school or work, you think `bout dancing with the guys
In DGO, there is no goodbye
In DGO, there is no goodbye

Let`s dance in teams! It`s green against blue
Watch out for items, your points they take away (They take awa-ay~)
But in the end you all get fun as your grand prize
In DGO, it is you who won
In DGO, it is you who won

So now you know, come join our dance crew
I bet you`re tired of all those orcs you slay (Those orcs that you-slay~)
Just drop your sword and all your armor in the ground
In DGO you and me will fly
In DGO you and me will fly

http://i450.photobucket.com/albums/qq222/Neoshaman2/Neomicro.jpg

Good job ShonenHero! Your prize is another forum MVP point.

Thank you everyone for participating! I found most of your lyrics very interesting and fun to read! It was a close one between two of you guys. ;D

[ras-blackfire]

Q_Q nooooo again D:

[ras-blackfire]

will there be another mvp? =/ or u guys wait till open beta?

[guppy12]

when will DGO be out again,that game was awesome!Well until i noticed the word,beta so do u guys know when it comes out, because i still cant get in. )= (I posted this 10/17/09

[twilightprincezz]

Awww, I cant believe i missed this Q-Q

Anywho.. Grats to the winner ! ^-^