Critique my Failed Art ^^

[matsuke]

Been about nearly 2 years since I've drawn anything. In need of critiques to better my art ^^
1.) Sketched and painted in photoshop, I felt lazy and didn't go over the lines so they stayed pencil-sketched :P
2.) My first Chibi art. They're so simple, that it made it hard for me to draw them..bleh ><...anyways, drawn all in photoshop, except the backgrounds.

[bjzee1]

Try to make them look more 3d :) other than that there great

[matsuke]

I will give that shot hahah :P Thank you for your input ^^

[LeonMagnus26]

wow...I like how u can draw between chibis and regular structural art! Everything is nicely done in the 1st drawing, but maybe u should go over the sketch lines lol. The 2nd art is pretty cool. very nice skills to draw just from photoshop, funny comic too :D

[ras-blackfire]

the head of the left character on the first art seems a bit weird, the comic is nice.
good job

[matsuke]

^^ yea, there's quite a few things I need to retouch on. I'll try fixing and measuring out the body proportions so they won 't be so awkward, and try not to be lazy :P. Appreciate the critiques.

[julio661]

The first one is great,
the bodies are spot on but the only problem is the heads/face
a little more practice and it will be perfect.

the second one,
its perfect spot on.
funny,adorable,entertaining
you should make a thread and post your comics there
that will be awesome :3

[matsuke]

When sketching the first photo, I should've not tried to make it so anime-ish :P I debated if I wanted it to be more realistic, but it didn't fit the pic so well ^^ Thank u for that comment as well, for i need to touch up on my anime style drawings. Been drawing life-style portraits for a while and tend to forget that "anime is anime" and "life is life".

[krackin_skullz]

love em just the way they are... every artist has their own signature trates to their drawings, it''s what makes us artist... but i agree on the comic style, would love to see more of these pertaining to in game experiances. I think they would be a good addition that would incourage more players to visit the forums.

keep up the awsome work :)

[matsuke]

^^ thank you very much...I'll try to better my comic skills so that maybe one day, I can make a thread for it. I too believe that having all these artists out here bring many to the forums, just like myself. i learn from many of the drawings and skills from viewing everyone's art, which in turn, hope can incorporate into my own :]

[Baktwerel]

the comic was quite funny :D ehehehe ... I saw that blue thing too, he stole my cookies D8