Rokudo

[the_xander]

INTRO
Hello first off i wana say thanks for droping by "thanks for droping by" now this is rokudo the first fanfic iv made about fiesta and only the second iv ever posted on the outspark forums now about the fanfic i must tell you that the first chapter to my opinion is kinda slow but its info vital to the fanfic also the *...* are actions and the (....) are thoughts now im planing on 8 chapters yet you never know ill go updating this post with the chapters as i go

NOT AS IMPORTANT

actors (so far):
belljane: high counciler belljane
mikesharpe: general mike
leathal kitty: kitty the historian
eligio: eligio kittys siter ^^u

IMPORTANT

i also need most pressingly a fighter and an archer for the fanfic i must mention they are for big roles plz pm me for them with your in game name, class and sreeni of char if possible also there are MANY roles left to fill so plz pm me if you wish to be in it and i will tell ya what i am thinking for your role if you dont like it well then just tell me nvm no hard feelling now without more interuption my fanfic

PLZ POST WHAT YOU THINK

[the_xander]

ROKUDO
chapter 1:teva's back up plan

GM murdock: WATCH OUT
soldier:*see's a fire spell coming at him and rolls to the side to dodge it*
thank you that was close
GM murdock: no prob just stay focused we have to buy lady teva some time
Teva: Murdock im ready
GM murdock:good with the seal we have created you will be able to seal the evil gods
and stop this war once and for all
Teva:about that... Murdock I have tried to think of every way to keep the seals power going but I couldn’t theres onely one way,I must give my life, it’s the only sufficient power source
GM murdock: what!!!, why didn’t you tell me if i knew that, we would have thought of somthing else i mean..
Teva: that's enough, we both know that this is the only way, in addition if giving my life
brings peace to isya than so be it
GM murdock: very well my lady,I shall respect your wish, i will creat an opening so that you may pass and seal the*(readying his weapon*
Teva: murdock..you always were the closest to me, wich is why i will intrust you with the location
of the rokudo
GM Murdock: *with a slight grin in his face*so the rumers that you had created them are true?
Teva: indeed they are but, for the sole reason that this seal will be weakend every decade and when it will not be able to keep them in anymore they will bring destruction back to isya,i fear that my people will not be able to defend themselves against them, when that happens summon the rokudo there the 3 bravest warriors I have ever met,there hearts have remained pure during this battle and there skills are like no other but, all have died protecting my people thus I am giving them the chance to come again they will be able to be summnend once the seal becomes very weak, to reseal it and protect my people from the force of the evil gods there the only ones I can trust for that task and the only ones strong enough
GM murdock: very well my lady I wil make sure that when ever the time comes a summoner will be ready to call them
Teva: I trust you but, now i must bid thee farewell

that day teva gave her life to seal the evil gods after wich all the people of isya rejoiced for the end of the war
and felt sorrow for the loss of the god who protected them, many years passed and isya finally felt peace
all the monsters were gone and life was filled with joy, but as Teva feared they left behind the traditions and ways
of the fighter,mage,archer and cleric and relied on and other things, the great sacrifice of teva became legend
and legend became storry and storry was forgoten, what few did remember was that the evil gods were still alive just sealed and
that one day they would take over yet know one really cares any more they think it will be years later, little did they know
that time had run out....

eligio:kitty the council is calling for you
kitty:why did they call you to tell me?
eligio:what do you mean, im just as important as you well kinda
kitty:*grabing her books*haha its ok anyway I should be on my way now if its them who are calling me*heading toward the council building in a calm pace passing by a store*
darth:hey kitty can i interest you in somthign to buy
kitty:not right now i think im in a hurry
darth:*to himself*...you think?*watching her walk away*
kitty: I wonder what there calling me for, they usually dont take me very serius there, then again they never take anything that has to do with tradition serius oh well might as well check it out *entering through some absurdly tall doors*

in the council building

kitty: *looking towards a table of two people and taking a seat herself*
belljane:glade you could make it kitty*with a worried look on her face*
kitty:me to high counceler bell*still wondering what the heck was going on*
belljane:very well you must be wondering what you are doing here, I will let gneral mike
take care of that part
General Mike:very well as you both know the war with the east side of isya has ended yet a new danger has been brought to our attention, in the forest of mist….ratmen and wild boar were spotted
Kitty:no way(darn this is bad, wait no duh im here, of course it bad why els would they call me im just the historien)
Belljane:*her eyes set on mike* what do you supose to be done general
General Mike: well fight them off of course, then again we havnt seen monster in isya in many years
Ketty:hmph, wont work
General Mike: what do you mean it wont work are you questioning the strengh of my men
Kitty: not at all just there simple sword swinging wont work you know the only thing that inflicts good
Damage on them are skills*with a grin on her face*
General Mike: HA. Skills have not been used in far to long plus it would take to long to teach them all
Kitty: you don’t need to you could teach a phew and then have clerics and mages and archers that way you wouldnt need to teach so many to your fighters
Belljane:kitty, I am also concerned but we must be realistic the the 4 classes have been fading every year
Very little clerics as yourself and eligio are left not to count mages and archers the best we have are mikes fighters, Skills would be useless
Kitty:*taking out the book she had been reading and setting it on the table* are you joking we all know what to do this is just as the legend said the monsters will come back when the seal of the evil gods weakens we must get the rokudo
General Mike:*wispering* bell, I told you it was a bad idea to bring her that is but a legend and she speaks of it as a solution
Belljane:very well kitty well get them
General Mike: yea we will….huh?
Belljane: its our best chance while kitty is away you can train your fighters and gather the mages,archers and cleric you can find for training when she returns or do you have a better idea general?
General Mike: (with an angerd face) no, but does she even know where to find them
Kitty: yes why yes I do
General Mike: fine go youll never find anything*raising from the table and going into another room*
Belljane: forgive the generals temper he believes his forces are all we need
Kitty: I understand (hahah poor mike I win this one)
Belljane: I would belive you will take eligio with you will you not
Kitty: of course I don’t go anywere without my sister
(raising from the table,giving a bow to the councler , and exiting the building)

Ancient elven woods

Eligio: KITTY!!! Can we stop im tired
Kitty:no we are to close to stop, plus we just stoped in uruga
Eligio: yea yea but how close are we?
Kitty: I don’t know
Eligio: we are lost arnt we?
Kitty:no, mabye, I don’t know lets just keep going this way
Eligio: mhm sure
(after having walked in circles for many hours until they dicide to finally stop)
Eligio: you are sure its here, what if it doesn’t exist?
Kitty: *looking at eligio with a sad face* it has to be , if it isnt the war of the gods will reign isya again and if the storys of my fathers are true then teva help us all
Eligio: * with somewhat of a worried face* well lets keep looking then
Kitty: ok eligio where havn’t we looked
Eligio:ummm under that rock? *pointing at a big bolder*
Kitty: I highly dout that *setting her hand and looking that under the bolder there was a small space*hmmm nevermind
*saying a chant and having the rock move from its place*
Eligio: *surprised* soo where did you learn that?
Kitty: came from the book
Eligio:what book
Kitty: *handing her a book that murdock had written himself with the wereabouts and chants to find and summon the rokudo*
Eligio: *looking at it intensly* theres nothing here its blank
Kitty: duh, if murdock had just written it on any book anyone could find out where the roudo are
Eligio oh
*both heading down a stair case and finding a giant undergrounds castle*
Kitty:this is it……the place where we will summon the rokudo
Eligio: huh this place that’s it?
Kitty: yes this is it now shut up im trying to creat dramatic tension and make somewhat of a cliffhanger
Eligio:huh cliffhanger for what where here already not like we are gona fade out or something?
Kitty: good point but, but it just seems cool to stare off into the castle and say something like that
Eligio: I know I know but why here
Kitty: why not I mean took us forever to find It didn’t it
Eligio: ok ok point taken I guesse teva did know what she was doing
Kitty: good now where was I oh, this is the place where we will summon the rokudo *fading out while she stares at the castle*

[T3h_SyN]

anyway i wonder if anyone will ever read my fanfic T-T not saying its that good i mean i mjuts a beginer but come on ya know

Well, if it makes you feel any better I read your fic but I'm gonna wait for more before I review it. I will however pm you Kitone's info because I'm cool like that. Also I just want to know, is English your first language? I ask because there's plenty of spelling and punctuation errors, more than I'd usually let slide (I mean, even the best of us make a few spelling/grammatical errors). I'm not saying it isn't humorous, just that it needs a bit of tidying up.

[the_xander]

ok im working on the next chapter and from there it starts moving faster also yes English is my first language but i lived in chile for 4 years and just moved back to the states 2 months ago so im working on my grammar also when i wrote this my spell check wasn't working and then it was Spanish spell check so lol ya know
so now that i have spell check back when i finish the next chapter i'll tidy this up a bit thanks for the comment anyway lol

[T3h_SyN]

ok im working on the next chapter and from there it starts moving faster also yes English is my first language but i lived in chile for 4 years and just moved back to the states 2 months ago so im working on my grammar also when i wrote this my spell check wasn't working and then it was Spanish spell check so lol ya know
so now that i have spell check back when i finish the next chapter i'll tidy this up a bit thanks for the comment anyway lol

Ah, I see. Well in that case, it's perfectly understandable. I look forward to the next chapter.