Series of darkness my version: o.o

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I created this topic because lately i was ready a interesting book series called "Chronicles
Of darkness" I LOVED these books so i decided to write my own story about them ^^
All credit goes to Michelle paver, For making these books and characters ^^ so i will
post about 2-3 chapters a day depending how long i can stay on o.O please dont comment until the end of the book o.o

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A new beggining: A never ending battle.
"Im here!" called Torak. "Good Good." The oak mage said. "Clan law forbid me to kill a man without warning. So prepare yourself Thiazzi!" "Hah you kill me? Im the master of the forest and fire. I am invicible" He taunted. "Prove it!" Shouted Torak while he charged at him with his knife. Thiazzi dodged with ease and laughed. He hit Torak on the back of his neck causing him to yelp. Thiazzi then punched Torak in the stomach with such force, He passed out. "Your no match for me yet soul eater." He taunted.
The last thing Torak saw was that he was thrown into a bag and felt a huge heatwave come over him.

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Chapter 2: A girls mission.

"Renn! come here this instant!" Shouted Fin Kendin. "What is it?" Replied the girl. "It seems that Thiazzi has kidnapped Torak. We need you and 3 other men to go out and look for him. If my predicaments (Idk if i misspelled that D;) are true, Then the oak mage will take over Toraks soul and make him his minion."
Fin Kendin said. "Alright, im ready whenever. I'll save Torak no matter what!" Renn said Sounding confident but feeling nervous and scared. "All right then Renn, You set out at Mid-day. We cannot rush the preparations." Right" Renn agreed. She collected her things and walked to the entrance of the camp.
"Goodbye" She said to Fen Kendin. "Goodbye Renn come back safe" He said. She walked out to the trail and and left the camp. When it wasnt long before she saw wolf just standing there as if to say (Im ready when you are! Lets go find Tall Tailless)

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Chapter 3: A wolfs mind.


Wolf sensed something was wrong with Pack sister. She seemed confident but now she just looks gloomy and sad and scared. Wolf tryed licking her muzzle but every time he tried she pulled back. Much unlike Tall Tailless. It was getting The time of the dark. Wolf wondered when Pack sister and himself would sleep. He was getting tired and his paws hurt from walking so long without stopping. Pack sister didnt notice though. She just kept walking like nothing was happening. Oh wolf worried about Tall Tailless.
He wished he would howl for him and say "Im here! come find me" but wolf never heard a howl that sounded like Tall tailless. He saw a big wet on the ground and drank. Then started running to catch up to Pack sister. Oh wolf was so worried about Tall Tailless, Wolf was worried what happend to Pack sister.
He wondered if anything would be the same when he was a just a few inches high. It seemed like hours before they finnally stopped to rest. Pack sister had started a "Bright beast which Bites hot" and put some juicy looking fish on it. Wolf didnt realize he was staring at it until Pack sister saw him and gave him a fish. He showed his stomach to say "Sorry for starring" but it seemed Pack sister didnt pay much attention and just ate her fish. Wolf made it last since he was starving but Sister just ate hers down faster then wolf ever saw her eat before. Humans are so complicated, Wolf thought.

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Chapter 4: Renns and wolfs adventure begins.
Renn ran up into the forest waiting for wolf. He had gone to go get a drink and catch small prey but was taking forever. Renn shot a arrow from her bow to kill a bird. She thanked the forest and then gutted it. She ate the bird fast. Wolf returned with blood all over his coat. She thought that he had killed a deer or something. She took him to a lake and began rubbing him off. She sighed. She wish she could just save Torak and be done with it. She couldent admit this to anyone but she always sorta "Liked" him. "Oh well, Torak you better not die on me!" She said to herself.

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Sorry for the wait folks ;c anyways on with the story:

Chapter 5: A bear attack.
Renn and wolf walked quitely. Renn had picked a pair of berrys from a tree. She then gave wolf a few and saved the rest for later.Wolf began whimpering. "What is it boy?" Renn asked knowing he couldent understand her. Just as she spoke a giant bear crushed a tree and nearly hit her. She was astonished. She had never seen a bear this big before. Wolf tryed running but saw that pack-sister could not move out of fear. Wolf tryed getting the bears attention. He bit the bears leg and made him fall. Renn finally coming out of her daze, Picked up her bow and arrow. She shot him in his back yet he did not show any sign of pain. She then shot another arrow at his head but missed. The bear kicked wolf in the stomach knocking him off. Wolf hit his back on a tree from the powerful force of the kick. The bear then turned its attention towards Renn who was the main damage dealer. It clawed at her but she dodged swiftly. She climbed a nearby tree trying to aim at the bears head again. The bear charged at the tree to knock her out. She grabed a nearby branch and held on. She then took her bow and arrow out again and aimed. The bear knocked the tree out of the ground which caught Renn off guard. She dropped her bow and arrow and jumped off the branch onto a more sturdy one. She jumped to the ground and grabbed wolf. She ran with him in her arms to the river forgetting her bow. Wolf was still knocked out from the blow and was bleeding viciously. She made a shelter for wolf and laid him down away from the river. She didnt sense the bear following her. She then left wolf to go and get her most precious bow. But when she returned she found that her bow was trampled on, Broken in two and all the arrows were gone. She felt a knot in her stomach then ran towards wolf. She came to the river and got some water. She then went inside the small shelter to get wolf. However when she went inside wolfs room there was no gray black hair in sight. Wolf..was gone.