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sandradds
06-08-2010, 05:31 AM
Yeah did this some time ago but if u like oneshots just take a look. Feel free to comment but please be nice :), and dont worry, I take constructive critisizm. Enjoy! :D

The 4 friends: AJ (Lvl 50 Cleric)
Rachel (Lvl 47 Mage)
Raymond (Lvl 43 Fighter)
Sarah (Lvl 40 Archer)

Raymond peered over the cliff next to the gateway to Elderine at Collapsed Prison and spotted his friends, Rachel and Sarah sitting beside the gate. Leaning further over the cliff, he listened to their conversation.

“You really should ask him soon,” said Rachel.

“I know,” sighed Sarah, “There just doesn’t seem to be a right time to do it.”

“Don’t worry,” said Rachel, “AJ is a nice guy, he won’t say no.”

“Woah, hang on,” Raymond said loudly, sliding down the cliff towards the girls, “Sarah, you like AJ?”

“Sure I do,” replied Sarah, “He’s a really cool guy. That’s why I wanna ask him if-“

Suddenly the gang noticed a level 38 Fighter running towards them, followed by 2 Harkans, a King Coll and a Vampire bat. The 3 quickly sprang into action n defeated the mob in no time. The level 38 Fighter apologised and thanked them, then he disappeared into to the gate to Elderine.

“I um, should get going too. See you girls soon.” Said Raymond before walking through the gate.

Once in Elderine, Raymond ran around looking for AJ, and soon found him checking out a vendor. AJ noticed his friend running towards him.

“What’s up, Ray!” he called.

“I have something to tell you man.” Whispered Raymond before pulling AJ to a quieter part of Elderine.

“Guess what man!”

“What is it?”

“Sarah has a crush on you!”

“You mean our friend, Sarah the Archer?”

“Yeah, she’s the one.”

“No way!”

“Way!”

“Seriously?!”

“Just thought I should tell you man,” said Raymond, slapping AJ on the back, and then he walked off.

The next day, the four friends met in Uruga and decided to go out hunting Orcs and Pinkys. It did not take long before the girls started to notice that AJ seemed distracted. Sarah also wondered why AJ started to look nervous whenever she got near him. AJ didn’t like Sarah that way- what was he going to say to her when she told him the truth?

“AJ, are you alright?” Rachel’s voice interrupted his thoughts.

“What? Um oh yeah, sure I am...”

“Focus man! You healed me five times for 0HP.”

“Sorry...”

“What’s up with him!” Rachel hissed to Raymond.

Raymond had a pretty good idea, but he just shrugged his shoulders.

After a while, the gang sat down at the stairs leading to the town of Uruga for a break. The one minute of awkward silence was broken by Rachel.

“Sarah, didn’t you want to ask AJ something?”

AJ cringed. Raymond tried to hide his smile.

“Yeah Sarah, ask him now,” Raymond nudged her, taking out one of his SP potions for a drink. AJ glared at him.

“Come on Sarah, AJ should be able to do this for you, rite AJ?” said Rachel.

“Heheh, yeah...” AJ laughed nervously.

Sarah finally spoke up.

“Ummm AJ? Will you be my- I mean, can I be your, uhm would you mind me being your .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..................................apprentice?”

A jet of blue potion shot out from Raymond’s mouth and he started coughing.

“Sure you can be my apprentice!” replied AJ, pleasantly surprised.

Raymond stopped coughing, “APPRENTICE?!” he yelled.

“Yeah...” said Rachel, puzzled by her friend’s outburst, “What were you thinking of?”

“He told me that Sarah had a crush on me!” said AJ.

Everyone laughed except Raymond, who was looking a little glum. “That’s why u were acting so weird just now AJ.” Said Sarah.

“Aw come on man, cheer up!” said AJ, patting his friend on the back.

“Umm Sarah?” said Raymond, “If you don’t like AJ, do you want to go out with me?”

“Oh my goodness!” sighed Rachel and rolled her eyes.

“Sure I do!” Sarah smiled.

Rachel then noticed AJ looking at her. “What? You want to ask me out too?”

AJ quickly stood up and walked towards the field. “We um, should get back to hunting.” He looked back and told the group, before walking right into a tree.

sandradds
06-08-2010, 05:35 AM
Haha ending may hve been kind of expected but hope u enjoyed it! If u hve fanfics abt this length, feel free to post the link here cuz I might like to read them.