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mary587
12-26-2010, 08:11 PM
The Journey Begins
Chapter1
The Begining Of The Journey

One time a new isya adventurer has been born.And the Journey began...

her name was Lily_Asbeth he expolored the new world before she knew it she found a friend helping her on her first KQ she kind off died she faced a wolf for the first time she hittted lvl 20 and went to the promotion she faced her shadow she was down to one stone she was low on health but..... by the time she had 100hp her shadow was defeated
Lily_Asbeth:"what a relief"
Lily_Asbeth:"you suck shadow or should i call you loser shadow"
Lily_Asbeth:"yay"
the sign said:
"Warping to shutian 10 seconds"
When Lily warp to shutian she choose a wand and she went to the abyss she meet isabella then party with her they grinded on phinos and phinoflys Lily_Asbeth was down to 1 hp stone
Lily_Asbeth:"ima go restone"
isabella:"sure why not"
While she was gone.... Pkrs showed up they said "hey a bad cleric lets pkr her!" isabella:"no please have mercy" Pkrs:"why should we"isabella slammed the floor creating a tunnel of water the pkrs were at the edge the pkrs said:"please dont push me down i cant swim" isabella:"its ok i heard that cowards float"
pkrs:"noooooo" '' time to cross tis bridge a very broken bridge" isabella said Lily_Asbeth came back
Lily_Asbeth:hey isabellla im back
isabella:if you can cross this bridge then you can use your magic to make me fly at the other edge can you do that?
Lily_Asbeth:"Sure ill do it"
isabella:"oh and if you takeback it ill give you a piko-piko hammer on the head"
Lily_Asbeth:"YOU'VE GONE MAD!!!!!!!!
isabella:"yes i have yes i have"
Liliy_Asbeth went on the bridge
Lily_Asbeth:"ahhhh lava!!!!!! dont fall down keep moving dont look down keep your balance
ahhhhhhhh isabella im scared!"
isabella untied the rope and grab the rope and played with it
Lily_Asbeth:"stop doing that"
isabella:"what"
isabella:"this?
Lily_Asbeth:" yea that more"
isabella:"yea do it more ok!"
Lily_Asbeth:"no isabella!"
isabella:"im doing it harder im doing it harder
Lily_Asbeth:" phew im there
isabella:"THEN MAKE ME FLY THERE!"
Lily_Asbeth makes her fly below the lava
Lily_Asbeth:"here?"
isabella:"stop it"
Lily_Asbeth:this?"
isabella:"yes that"
Lily_Asbeth:"yes yes shake you around the lava ok!"
isabella:"nooooo"
Lily_Asbeth:im shaking it im shaking it"
isabella:"drop me down!"
Lily_Asbeth:"ok"
Lily_Asbeth drops isabella into the lava
isabella:"you idiot!"
isabella came up and said :"it was better when i got shaked"
WANT ME TO DROP YOU AGAIN OK! isabella:"noo!
Lily_Asbeth drops isabella again and is she alive? find out in chapter 2

Made by Yek zp

mary587
12-26-2010, 08:15 PM
anyone wannna be in the story everyone can be in the story
^.^

john99944
12-26-2010, 11:23 PM
That was funny. Can I join?

mary587
12-27-2010, 01:10 AM
anyone wannna be in the story everyone can be in the story
^.^



Sign up here


describe yourself !

john99944
12-27-2010, 05:15 PM
DavidsonSam's info
Name: DavidsonSam
Class: Fighter
Faction: Good
Weapon(s) of choice: Two Handed Sword, One Handed Sword and Shield
Personality: As a fighter, he may be hot-headed at sometimes, but he has a soft side. He gets irritated easily and wants to become a PKKer. He loves tanking, even though at some times he's not good at it. He is extremely aggresive when his friends are attacked and you can almost always count on him to help you.

mary587
12-28-2010, 03:43 AM
OK Davidsonsam ill add you

mary587
12-29-2010, 04:21 AM
The Begining Of The Journey

PART 2


Previously on PART 1


Lily_Asbeth Droped isabella into the lava twice and how could isabella survive?

PART 2
isabella survive cause Lily_Asbeth made the lava WATER! so she could survive

isabella:"thanks for saving my life."

Lily_Asbeth:"Your Welcome."

isabella:"BUT IM STILL GONNA GIVE YOU A PIKO-PIKO HAMMER ON THE HEAD FOR DROPING ME."

Lily_Asbeth:"But you told me to drop you soo i droped you."

isabella:"But you droped me 2 times."


isabella gave Lily_Asbeth a piko-piko hammer on the head

Lily_Asbeth:"Ow,what was that for?"

isabella:"for droping me down."

Lily_Asbeth:"KQ's recuiting lets join Mara Pirate's Rage [A]."

isabella:"aww why Mara KQ?"

Lily_Asbeth:"Its exciting with Marlone and Mara."

isabella:"Ugh,fine."


Lily_Asbeth accidentaly pushed isabella down to the lava making her fall

isabella:"HELP!"

Lily_Asbeth made her fly around the lava pit.Sunddenly a gang of Pkr's came by they said:"You are a squishy weak spinless mage who gonna die!

Lily_Asbeth:"Wanna 1vs1."

Pkr's:"Your on your on"

Lily_Asbeth won the 1vs1 and eventually 1 Pkr remains history

isabella:"How did you win agaisnet a lvl 36 fighter when your only a lvl 34 mage?"

Lily_Asbeth:"Easy i just make him fly above the lava pit drop him and hes dead."

They went to the Pkr's Tomb stone it said:"Here Lies the pkr who i dont know rest in pieces."

isabella:"Isnt it "rest in peace" not "rest in pieces"?"

Lily_Asbeth:"no its rest in pieces " cause he was burned to pieces in the lava."

isabella:"oh i get it."

Lily_Asbeth and isabella got warp to there KQ

clericjohn:party please

zombietap:party please

iceeee:party please

kregor:party please

cutieshelby:party please

Lily_Asbeth partied isabella zombietap clericjohn and iceee

Lily_Asbeth:"Who shall help tank Marlone and Mara?"

isabella: i will

zombietap:i will

iceee:i will

clericjohn:i will

cutieshelby: im staying here

Everyone looked at cutieshelby

cutieshelby: what?"

everyone said:"you wont help thats whats wrong!"


Will Shelby help find out in Chapter 2
Made by Yekzp

mary587
12-29-2010, 04:23 AM
Hiya i forgot to tell you that this is the first time making a story soo please be patient

mary587
02-01-2011, 08:05 PM
The UNDEAD Marlone
Chapter 2
PART1


cutieshelby: OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG



One Hour Later ...


cutieshelby:OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG



Anyway...


iceee:What it is?

cutieshelby:Theres a a a undead zom...

iceee:what?

cutieshelby:Look behind you.



cutieshelby looks behind her.

iceee:OMGWTHBBQ IMPOSIBBLE!...

Azula:Muahahaha

iceee;WHAT ON DE EARTH HAS GOTTEN IN TO YOU!

Azula:OH NOTHING IM ON DRUGS


cutieshelby:wait just a a minute what is Azula doing here???


iceee:Lets just ingore her and fight!





OMG!


Marlone:Muahahaha*cough cough* do u have some water?


iceee:do you want crystal clear or sparkling


Marlone:crystal clear please ahh now where was i oh yeah Muahahaha i will destroy the earth!


..................................... PLEASE STAND BY WILL HAVE TECHNICALL PROBLEMS

videlkitty
02-01-2011, 09:34 PM
very cute ^.^

live2fly
02-02-2011, 01:11 AM
naaw cute :3
can you add me too? ~~
ign: Live2love
awesome evil mastermind xD
Hawkiarcher ~

mary587
02-03-2011, 06:04 AM
Sure you can join

mary587
02-03-2011, 06:24 AM
The UNDEAD Marlone



Chapter 2
PART2




Previously on PART1



.............PLEASE STAND BY WE HAVE SOME TECHNICL PROBLEMS.......


PART 2


OK NOW WE ARE BACK NOW WHERE WERE WE OH YEA! just sit back and enjoy the show.


cutieshelby:WE JUST HELPED YOU AND YOU WANNA DESTORY THE EARTH MAD YOUVE GONE MAD YOUVE GONE!

iceee:Isnt it youve gone mad no "MAD YOUVE GONE"?

cutieshelby:i know im just talking backwards.


iceee:OMG

Live2 love:MUAHAHAHA YOU WILL NEVER DEFEAT ME NEVER NEVER*While Live2 love was talking the mage levataveted her to the water*


everyone:HAHA!

Live2 love:well u won this round but mark my words mark my .....

Live2 love's mother:live time to get to your grama's house and poopy.

Live2 love:MOM!

Live2love: im gonna destroy my enimies and your embarrasing me!


Mara: you WIL********


PLEASE STAND BY! TO PREVENT FOUL WORDS.


What will happen find out in PART 3~

mary587
02-03-2011, 06:26 AM
very cute ^.^


Thanks and if u want to join just say soo

live2fly
02-05-2011, 09:59 PM
YAY~~~~
Hahahah this is great!!! :D :D :D
Jeeez mum's so embarrassing :P
<3 ~ PART 3 sooooon please <3

EriAeris
02-05-2011, 11:29 PM
wow... very entertaining story... I would like to be part of this story as well... but not now though :p and I understand now this is your first story... trust me.. these storytelling thingies aren't as easy as it seems okays? just take your time...

mary587
02-08-2011, 03:50 AM
Thanks ill try to make the 3rd part

mary587
02-08-2011, 04:17 AM
The UNDEAD Marlone


Chapter 2
PART 3



Previously on PART 2

PLEASE STAND BY ! TO PREVENT FOUL WORDS.

* i was taking a shower while whistling*

Lily_Asbeth:ack! WHATS THE BIG IDEA oh its you let me just put on my clothes.

*lucky peny put a bomb in my clothes*

3 2 1 BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Lily_Asbeth:PENY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lucky peny:yes master which will explode in 3 2 1 BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!

Lily_Asbeth: oh never mind anyway enjoy the story.




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The UNDEAD Marlone


Chapter 2
PART 3


Mara: you cant beat me and live2loveor me or her or me or her or me or her*Lily_Asbeth taps her watch* or me or her or me or her or *everybody sleeps* or me or her or me or her or me or her.

Everybody:WE GET IT ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mara: Alright let me just finish.

Mara: or me or her or me or her *sun goes down* or me or her or me or her or me or her or me or her or me*sun goes up and down ten times* or me or her


1 year later.....

Live2love: Misteres hello Miss Mara pooopy

Live2love's mother:live time to go wash your church pants.

everyone:*gigles* church pants

Live2love: MOM ! CANT U SEE THAT IM, BUSYY.

Live2love's mother:oh yea dont forget to put on your diapey wapey.

Live2love: why U ****

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*BACK AT Lily_Asbeths house* Lily_Asbeth: sorry folks my camera is broken i need to fix it until then see ya !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh and really Live2love dont forgetto put on your diaper.


Will the camera get fix is Live2love really a baby why am i asking these questions?

mary587
02-08-2011, 04:18 AM
Sorry this part isnt very good .....

mary587
02-08-2011, 04:21 AM
but if u want to see it ok -.-

tristene599
02-11-2011, 02:02 AM
Nice story . your very good at this hmm is this even your first time?
Anyway i would love to be in the story but not now .

tristene599
02-11-2011, 02:04 AM
And take your time making the chapters theese making story things are furstrating

nicole955
02-11-2011, 02:08 AM
Hey , not bad for a story you should make the chapters longer and nice jokes lol i hope i can see the next part soon good luck your gonna need it

waterlily955
02-11-2011, 02:34 AM
Haha its soo funny please make next part soon please!!!

hinata9966
02-11-2011, 03:09 AM
Hey can i be in the story?

archer_4life
02-11-2011, 07:05 PM
Hmm not bad though but you need some improvement i understand this is your first time . you have some mistakes .

mary587
02-11-2011, 11:10 PM
:) thanks ill reallly try to make part3 soon

john99944
02-23-2011, 07:51 PM
Nice that you revived the story again sis

AsterTatsuRyuu77
03-06-2011, 06:15 PM
Bad story t_t

mary587
03-08-2011, 05:07 AM
if its bad please tell me how too make it better

waterlily955
03-18-2011, 12:04 AM
Seriously do you expect her to make that good a story when its her first try sesh u think u can do better?