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eckota
02-08-2011, 02:38 PM
In the early years of the world there used to be a young warrior he warrior was strong and mighty and feared nothing. In the outskirts of the Roumen village lies a forest known as The Forest of Tides a forest where a girl of great beauty lives.

One day upon laying his eyes on the beautiful village girl the warrior was sure he fell in love, but the young maiden had many suitors. Men from all surrounding villages would come to make her their bride, but the maiden was very demanding of them before she was to be theirs.

The warrior having fallen in love decided to take on the challenge feeling confident that he could accomplish anything put forth, so long as she would be his.

The girl asked the warrior for a magical dress made from the night sky’s Vail. It was a beautiful dress said to have the power to make the wearer transcend all beauty. The warrior confident in his strength accepted and began to ask about the magical dress in the near by town. He was told of a witch that lived on the other side of the forest in a hut by the river bed.

Upon meeting with the witch the warrior explained his situation. She instructed the warrior, for her to give him such a dress he must slay a monster of great power Cornelius the great dragon that dwells in the cave known as The Dragons Tomb.

No later had three days passed the warrior had returned having slayed the beast. The witch surprised and amazed gave him the Vail as promised, but she gave the young man a warning pertaining to the Vail.

Although it has the power to transcend beauty, if there truly is true love between him and the girl, they will forever live in joy and happiness with great riches and fortune. But if there were to be a single ounce of doubt or darkness in there love they will be turned into frogs and be separated for all eternity.

The warrior sure of his love for the girl rushed to her village as fast as he could. He wished to be not one second longer away from her. He presented the dress. The fair maiden over joyed with the gift agreed to marry him. The warrior overly excited laid with her that night.

Come morning the girl decided to put on the dress, but once she had put it on they were transformed into frogs and began to fly away from each other.

For what the warrior did not see was that his love was not one of pure intention but was only one of lust and the girl’s tests were not made to fill her heart with assurance of her suitors love but one of greed and selfishness.

Thus the darkness with their hearts and sorrowful day brought with it an end to their dreams and the beginning of their purgatory. He the lustful warrior now sits in the pond by a water fall in Ancient Elven Woods and she the greedy temptress sits in the pond in The Forest of Mist.

Forever an always croaking as they yell at each other’s misbegotten love.

The most tragic of all was that a child was conceived and had to bare the same curse as the two forever trapped in the same pond next to his mother.

Light_Punisher <333

P.S. A special thanks to Ruine, AR~ and LadyPera of Teva for listening to my story, giving support and helping with the editing of my writing lol much love … and I hope u all liked it.

kira1985
03-07-2011, 08:32 AM
:O tragic love story really nice to read *tumbs up* :)

AsterTatsuRyuu77
03-07-2011, 11:33 AM
^ its not a tragedy, I loled because the entire story is a deconstruction of romeo and juliet without the family vs family element

kawasu
03-09-2011, 07:17 AM
I'd hardly call this a tragic love story, but it's not like R&J either. No, it's more like a story of misunderstood emotions that eventually lead to the destruction of all mankind.

Annaleth_Aryla
03-09-2011, 12:30 PM
^ thats basically what romeo and juliet is , as the banned one up there said ,its a deconstruction.

eckota
09-29-2011, 02:43 PM
hey there been awhile since i've logged in but i'd like to say i wasn't going for a R&J retelling story .. and it wasn't to overly tragic lol R&J is more of a forbidden love story this had more to do with ill twisted fates :) but i welcome ur opinons and ofc i hoped u liked the story :D

i think Kawasu is more along the lines of what i was going for

P.S R&J died @_@) ... these frogs are still there in iysa u can go visit them like i do .. maybe even take them a snack :P