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waterlily955
03-18-2011, 12:21 AM
Hi, this is my first time doing a fan fiction soo if theres any thing wrong please tell me what to do and this is my characters info:

Name:Veronica
Side: good
Class: Cleric
Weapon:Hammer and shield


anyway just tell me

waterlily955
03-18-2011, 01:05 AM
Prologue





Joo Ah Ran saw her parents die right in front of her eyes,and she suffered from aphasia


for a long time since then.While living the life of a bottom of society,she finds out her


parents death was not an accident, but a carefully executed murder by Shin Woo Sub,


the president of the company her father was working for . Ah Ran vows to take revenge


for her parents and leaves the bar to get a job at Woo Sub's furniture company .


There,she seduces his son Hyun Woo and marries him, Hyeon-woo sincerely like Ah-


Ran.One day , Hyun Woo discovers that everything he knew about his wife was a lie .


She was also usurping money from the house hold.Hyung woo confronts her while driving


in the rain, and gets into an accident resulting in him falling into a coma.Once he


miraculously wakes from his coma. Hyun Woo plots to take revenge on his wife by losing


weight and getting plastic surgery to completely change his appearence and identity to


Ahn Jae Seong. Now, the husband and wife begin a fierce game of revenge...

hinata9966
03-18-2011, 02:39 AM
What is this about really? but not bad story

kme92
03-18-2011, 01:29 PM
It looks a little short to be a chapter, but would make an excellent Prologue/Intro.
Interested in seeing how it develops.

waterlily955
03-18-2011, 06:45 PM
thanks it was really hard to make the Prologue -.- first time doing a fan fiction

waterlily955
03-18-2011, 06:48 PM
and thanks for telling me

john99944
03-18-2011, 06:56 PM
nice prologue i love the part when she vows to take revenge keep up the goood work

tristene599
03-18-2011, 06:59 PM
Who's Joo Ah Ran . but i love a good revenge story hehe keep it up!

archer_4life
03-18-2011, 07:02 PM
Woot a revenge story i wonder what will happen

astegumas
03-18-2011, 07:13 PM
Not bad Prolouge although i wonder what will happen

waterlily955
03-19-2011, 06:21 AM
Hey here are some story i like if u want to go to them click the link below

mary587
04-15-2011, 07:07 PM
Nice proluge