Back To Back Mini Storys

[mary587]

hi as u know this is my SECOND time doing a fan fic cause the other one didnt go soo well soo.... im gonna make mini storys if theres anything that needs to be changed tell me please i hope that this fan fic is better than the other one and i hope that this fan fic will get more commets not just from my brother's or sister's soo ill hope you will commet on this fan fic offen and if i make a mistake please tell me.

[mary587]

This Fan Fic Is Proud To Present The First Mini Story Ever!



Back To School (A Funny Moment)



The day giving the exam papers ....... , Jason 85 % , Breandda 40 % ,Jacky 20 %

Teacher: If u do your home work and study hard u willget better results.

Jacky: Yes teacher.

Teacher: David 98 %

David frowns and falls down

The teacher said u got good results why are u sad ?

Jacky: Isnt it me who should be sad did the writter write it wrong
writer pops up and say hey!

After David explain only then they know why he was sad.

The Teacher said : ok time to arrange your bags now

vegetables??!!

meat??!!

a tooth brush ?!!!!

a baby bottle !!!???????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

a PSP ??!!!

David: How many things can your bags hold ?

david went home and saw his mom and dad he as really happy











The End

[Daevor]

There are a few important questions that have been left unanswered, and so give the mini-story a very incomplete feel. For example:

1. It is not explained why David is unhappy with 98%

2. It is not explained why David has a rather strange variety of items in his bag.

3. "The teacher said u got good results why are u sad ?" Who in the story is saying/thinking this?
- also, do not use sms speak when writing a (mini-) story (e.g. type "you", and not "u").

~~Daevor, The Devoted