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Zenkarus
12-14-2007, 02:02 AM
Once upon a time not to long ago a great war took place between the guild untouchables and chaos order.

We first got notice from a fellow guild mate that botchla, one of the great generals of chaos order, wanted to war us. The coming of the war made us act immediatly. We fled with our novice fighters to the sea of greed. The sun scorched our skin as we made the long hike through burning sands of the sea of greed. As we came upon the mouth of echo cave we were sure to be cautious, as the enemy may be lurking inside thinking we might hide there. Our group crawled slowly through echo cave killing monsters as they came at us for invading their home. We found a safe place to hide our novice warriors as i Zenk and my right hand man Yayhigh left the cave in search of botchla and his party. Mounting our horses we moved quickly back to elder. As we closed in on the gate to elder we cautiously stepped through.... Appearing on the other side, we then quickly moved to a safe haven to devise a plan. One of our messengers from the field came to us with news that botchla had made camp at the arena. We slowly made our way to the arena making sure no one was to see us, for chaos order has many allies and spy's ..... I stood at the bottum of the stairs with yayhigh at my side when we saw the great general appear from at the top with his party of two clerics. He taunted us and laughed as we sat at the bottum of the steps. On the outside we were calm but on the inside we were tense ready for battle. Botchla raised his great pole axe to into the air and rushed us. We ran trying to draw him away from his clerics but botchla saw through our plan. He laughed yelling "Do you honeslty think i would fall for such a trick!!". Yayhigh then devised a plan to split the two groups up with his raccoon. Of he sped as i made my way to sea of greed once again, when i spotted giege a lone cleric of chaos order! i rushed her trying to defeat her with my own might. Her mace clashed with my sword as we fought. My attemps at killing her myself were futile as she blocked my blows with her shield. botchla then came with his second cleric black_rose. i fled the fight knowing that taking on all three would surely lead to my defeat. I escaped through the gate when i heard the voice of yayhigh taunting botchla away from me. Yayhigh led botchla away from me as i waited for anyone to come to the other side of the gate. i waited there patiently ready to ambush. The murderous black_rose came through the gate and i rushed her with full fury striking her down. With my adrenaline rushing i left the scene running deep into the forest in sea of greed. I stopped cold when i heard the booming voice of botchla as hey yelled in anger over his lost comrad "ZENK YOU NOOB COME FIGHT ME!!". Knowing this war would not end without us fighting, i gripped my sword and rushed back to the gate. We met at the gate his eyes blazing with fury. We leaped at each other crying to the heavens in a fury of rage. Our swords clashed and sparks flew when my sword hit his axe. we clashed for several minutes beating each other relentlessly. We paused a moment to catch our breath. With one last lunge we flew at each other with full fury. a blinding crack of light shot out from our weapons striking, blowing sand and dust everywhere. i could feel the his axe pushing me down as my strength started to fail me. with every last ounce of energy i pushed back and an explosion of energy blew both of us away from each other. botchla angrily snaring at me said "this isnt over zenk" and walked off. and so i left the place that the great battle took place knowing that once again we would come back to finish this never ending war.

Botchla
12-14-2007, 02:11 AM
LOL...wow that was an awesome story.

great detail. i totaly enjoyed that LMAO cant believe u made an entire story out of it but WOW

A+

Zenkarus
12-14-2007, 02:16 AM
I TOLD YOU I WAS GONNA im surprised you found it

.....i think i did i pretty good job if i do say so myself =P lawlz

blazedaces
12-14-2007, 02:20 AM
Zenk I give you kudos on such an epic tale...

Keep fighting strong...

-blazed

bull40692
12-14-2007, 02:21 AM
Once upon a time not to long ago a great war took place between the guild untouchables and chaos order.

We first got notice from a fellow guild mate that botchla, one of the great generals of chaos order, wanted to war us. The coming of the war made us act immediatly. We fled with our novice fighters to the sea of greed. The sun scorched our skin as we made the long hike through burning sands of the sea of greed. As we came upon the mouth of echo cave we were sure to be cautious, as the enemy may be lurking inside thinking we might hide there. Our group crawled slowly through echo cave killing monsters as they came at us for invading their home. We found a safe place to hide our novice warriors as i Zenk and my right hand man Yayhigh left the cave in search of botchla and his party. Mounting our horses we moved quickly back to elder. As we closed in on the gate to elder we cautiously stepped through.... Appearing on the other side, we then quickly moved to a safe haven to devise a plan. One of our messengers from the field came to us with news that botchla had made camp at the arena. We slowly made our way to the arena making sure no one was to see us, for chaos order has many allies and spy's ..... I stood at the bottum of the stairs with yayhigh at my side when we saw the great general appear from at the top with his party of two clerics. He taunted us and laughed as we sat at the bottum of the steps. On the outside we were calm but on the inside we were tense ready for battle. Botchla raised his great pole axe to into the air and rushed us. We ran trying to draw him away from his clerics but botchla saw through our plan. He laughed yelling "Do you honeslty think i would fall for such a trick!!". Yayhigh then devised a plan to split the two groups up with his raccoon. Of he sped as i made my way to sea of greed once again, when i spotted giege a lone cleric of chaos order! i rushed her trying to defeat her with my own might. Her mace clashed with my sword as we fought. My attemps at killing her myself were futile as she blocked my blows with her shield. botchla then came with his second cleric black_rose. i fled the fight knowing that taking on all three would surely lead to my defeat. I escaped through the gate when i heard the voice of yayhigh taunting botchla away from me. Yayhigh led botchla away from me as i waited for anyone to come to the other side of the gate. i waited there patiently ready to ambush. The murderous black_rose fcame through the gate and i rushed her with full fury striking her down. With my adrenaline rushing i left the scene running deep into the forest in sea of greed. I stopped cold when i heard the booming voice of botchla as hey yelled in anger over his lost comrad "ZENK YOU NOOB COME FIGHT ME!!". Knowing this war would not end without us fighting, i gripped my sword and rushed back to the gate. We met at the gate his eyes blazing with fury. We leaped at each other crying to the heavens in a fury of rage. Our swords clashed and sparks flew when my sword hit his axe. we clashed for several minutes beating each other relentlessly. We paused a moment to catch our breath. With one last lunge we flew at each other with full fury. a blinding crack of light shot out from our weapons striking, blowing sand and dust everywhere. i could feel the his axe pushing me down as my strength started to fail me. with every last ounce of energy i pushed back and an explosion of energy blew both of us away from each other. botchla angrily snaring at me said "this isnt over zenk" and walked off. and so i left the place that the great battle took place knowing that once again we would come back to finish this never ending war.

The Great Warrior Zen led the battle with honor and dignity. Both Chaos and The Untouchables fought very tough battle. Great Story Zen!! Yay High also is a beast of a warrior, and I wish I was there.

Ichigo

Aoishe
12-14-2007, 02:29 AM
thats was a good story... i liked it ... very vivid detail...nicely done chap

BlueiceBoy
12-14-2007, 02:40 AM
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i was there when they are warring each other.. Zenk wif 4 other ppl.. hiding at the lake place in elderine ! lol.. i logged in from there.. surrounded by them... and they are talking about Some General haunting them.. ouch... was too blur by what they are talking about.. and i get out from therE!

Zenkarus
12-14-2007, 02:45 AM
LAWLZ that was after the war i was telling mudkip and niome about the war !!!! thats what made me write this story!!!!!

matty19
12-14-2007, 10:28 AM
wow Zenk great story and excellent detail. whats so funny is that i saw the fight while watching it from botchlas screen so i saw everything that took place LOL.

redhaze
12-14-2007, 12:24 PM
nice story ;)

ZillaWoman4
12-15-2007, 02:13 AM
HA ZEN I FOUND THE STORY!

u really think my siggys that funny lol

how come i wasnt in the story :p
i was there too i was just watchin Slime and had to get off earlier, sry i wasnt there to see ur epic fight against the evil botchla, though i think some of it was stretched =.=

MY SIGGYS EFFIN AWSOME!

Naomie
12-15-2007, 10:40 AM
He made me listen to it in Eld 2days ago @_@

proej
12-15-2007, 11:07 AM
Good story Zenk lol!!:p










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Zenkarus
12-15-2007, 02:43 PM
lawlz thanks u guys i appreciate the feedback be ready for a sequel or another story

ikeburner
12-15-2007, 04:51 PM
rofl
that was indeed a great story

Akujiki
12-15-2007, 06:11 PM
Woah very nice story Zen!

ZillaWoman4
12-15-2007, 06:19 PM
He made me listen to it in Eld 2days ago @_@

i feel sooooo sorry for ur ears.
Zen ur gonna make pple go deaf with ur stories about the name Jade too!

Andrewm
12-15-2007, 08:42 PM
lol WOW wasnt that big dude, xD but got me interested for more!

Naomie
12-16-2007, 06:23 PM
i feel sooooo sorry for ur ears.
Zen ur gonna make pple go deaf with ur stories about the name Jade too!

lol. it took about 15-20mins >.>

FiendFire
12-16-2007, 07:01 PM
With my adrenaline rushing i left the scene running deep into the forest in sea of greed. I stopped cold when i heard the booming voice of botchla as hey yelled in anger over his lost comrad "ZENK YOU NOOB COME FIGHT ME!!".

i actually lol'd at that. :p

Botchlasrp
02-26-2008, 12:32 AM
COME BACK TO FIESTA ZENK! lolz