View Full Version : Misadventures of Slime and Punkin
Galdrath
06-30-2011, 09:08 PM
Was bored and decided to make a short little story using pictures! I put it in General to get exposure but feel free to move it to the Fanfic section whenever you are ready.
edit: This thread happens to be my 2000th post as well! Woot.
Story by : Galdrath
Figures by : Avaly
And now,
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a134/Bendersinc1/s1.jpg
Please enjoy your stay!
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a134/Bendersinc1/s2.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a134/Bendersinc1/s3.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a134/Bendersinc1/s4.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a134/Bendersinc1/s5.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a134/Bendersinc1/s6.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a134/Bendersinc1/s7.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a134/Bendersinc1/s8.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a134/Bendersinc1/s9.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a134/Bendersinc1/s11.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a134/Bendersinc1/s10.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a134/Bendersinc1/s12.jpg
THE END
AvaleDeath
06-30-2011, 09:13 PM
XD AHAHAHA LOOOOL
Do you live near avaly?
Galdrath
06-30-2011, 09:16 PM
oops 1 frame was outa place. Fixed!
@AvaleDeath Avaly is my wife IRL :)
FrostyFruit
06-30-2011, 09:21 PM
Lol...very funny and cute. xD I started laughing when the slime was on it's back. Nice story. :]
Galdrath
06-30-2011, 09:25 PM
lols Thanks! When Avaly made these little guys I just had to do something with them.
DisGuy13
06-30-2011, 09:38 PM
I want that slime!
Kudos to you.
AvaleDeath
06-30-2011, 09:42 PM
whats it made out of?
Galdrath
06-30-2011, 09:43 PM
Kudos to Avaly for making them. I just play with the stuff. OOOO, she is currently making a dragon outa aluminum foil O.o
whats it made out of?
They are made out of homemade porcelain clay.
MissusDolly
06-30-2011, 09:48 PM
They're super cute and their little adventure is funny. xD
Galdrath
06-30-2011, 09:52 PM
I'm trying to get Avaly to make a whole army of the slimes. That would be awesome!
Wonder if there is a profit in them....
flapmyjack
06-30-2011, 10:04 PM
I'm trying to get Avaly to make a whole army of the slimes. That would be awesome!
Wonder if there is a profit in them....
I would buy like 3 or 4 if you sold them.
Just saying.... :D
FatalLace
06-30-2011, 10:05 PM
I'm trying to get Avaly to make a whole army of the slimes. That would be awesome!
Wonder if there is a profit in them....
I loved that! Hope you guys take some time to do more....
As far as profit goes, along the same lines as plushies, you may have to work out some kind of licensing thing with OS/OOS.
Galdrath
06-30-2011, 10:12 PM
I loved that! Hope you guys take some time to do more....
As far as profit goes, along the same lines as plushies, you may have to work out some kind of licensing thing with OS/OOS.
That part in red is what I am worried about. It would be something like 30% of the profit + 10 bowls of curry for Kobal per week and a new stuffed toy for Wishbone.
AvaleDeath
06-30-2011, 10:21 PM
porcelain? nice.
Galdrath
06-30-2011, 10:29 PM
yup its really called cold porcelain clay. Its really weird how you make it. Mostly glue and hand creme.
Orchids_Mantis
06-30-2011, 10:35 PM
you used the wrong "your", it sould have been "you're".
Just saying.
Galdrath
06-30-2011, 10:38 PM
you used the wrong "your", it sould have been "you're".
Just saying.
That's what I get for not having Avaly spell check >.>
hallucination_
06-30-2011, 11:33 PM
Picture 4, pumpkin's first line finishes with, "going eat an ice cream cone."
Missed something. :p
Galdrath
07-01-2011, 12:35 AM
I blame Avaly >.> <.<
AvalyK
07-01-2011, 12:58 AM
I blame Avaly >.> <.<
Oh, no you don't. It's all you when it comes to bad grammar. :p
This little comic strip thingy turned out cute, even with it's grammatical errors. ^,^
Panzehao
07-01-2011, 07:17 AM
omg do want *_* so cute <3 i want my own army of slimes XD
firework273
07-01-2011, 09:14 AM
And the ice cream cone was all like....
http://i51.tinypic.com/2ji8ic.gif
Galdrath
07-01-2011, 10:10 AM
I need her to make more little guys( maybe some honeyings and such) so I can continue this series.
GM_Wishbone
07-01-2011, 10:13 AM
this is AWESOME! great job, but this belongs in off topic and well be moved.
-Moved-
Galdrath
07-01-2011, 10:42 AM
Thanks Wishy. I knew it was in the wrong spot but meh, there are more peeps in General so had to throw it there first to get the views.
marz101
07-08-2011, 03:54 AM
bump?idk:]
yamato567
07-08-2011, 05:13 AM
Epicness xD
SeanSpark
07-08-2011, 05:36 AM
Lmfaooooooo. Very good. :P
Galdrath
07-09-2011, 02:11 PM
Avaly just got a bunch more ingredients for the clay so hopefully she makes some more little dudes and trinkets and I will continue the series.
hiro9
07-09-2011, 05:02 PM
lol xD
10charrrrrrrrrrrr
Galdrath
07-11-2011, 07:12 PM
Will have the next episode up and running in the next few days...if I remember, lol.
fastesthe1
07-14-2011, 09:43 PM
Aw, so cute! I love it, please continue!
Daevor
07-14-2011, 10:27 PM
Highly entertaining stuff.
*(impatiently) waits for the next episode* :p
cruel-angel
07-15-2011, 05:24 AM
ROFL awesome <3
Galdrath
07-15-2011, 06:26 PM
Second episode finally up! A little Naruto humor in this one. Hope you enjoy it!
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a134/Bendersinc1/g1.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a134/Bendersinc1/g2.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a134/Bendersinc1/g3.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a134/Bendersinc1/g4.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a134/Bendersinc1/g5.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a134/Bendersinc1/g6.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a134/Bendersinc1/g7.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a134/Bendersinc1/g8.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a134/Bendersinc1/g9.jpg
The End!
2 things for you!
baka= idiot, moron, stupid..etc
dattebayo= ??? No one really knows. Its just something Naruto says at the end of his sentences.
That is all for this edition!
If you have any questions or comments or ideas about new episodes, please feel free to PM me at any time!
edit: ARRRRRGGG. I misspelled in the pics once again! datebayo should be dattebayo. Oh wells.
tristene123
07-25-2011, 01:44 AM
Too short!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but its funny
fastesthe1
07-29-2011, 10:14 PM
Now that"s just plain hilarious!!!
Galdrath
08-01-2011, 12:47 PM
Yay! They fixed the image limit per post back to its original amount so I will be able to continue these little episodes!
piratejackfan
08-01-2011, 12:51 PM
hahaha funny XD
gronklo
08-03-2011, 12:39 AM
Could have used usuratonkachi, it's what sasuke calls naruto and the literal translation is thin hammer xD Usuallly means useless
rayule
08-03-2011, 01:30 AM
lol that was funny :D
im not really sure, but i think dattebayo means something like 'ya know?' in japanese
..yea i think thats it o.o
Galdrath
08-03-2011, 09:31 PM
lol that was funny :D
im not really sure, but i think dattebayo means something like 'ya know?' in japanese
..yea i think thats it o.o
Nope Dattebayo has no actual meaning in the japanese language. It was just used as a tag at the end of Naruto's sentences. Kinda like how you would use -nya or -ebi. Translators have either disregarded the word during translation or given it 'ya know' or 'believe it' translation.
Dragonfly77
08-05-2011, 02:32 PM
That is adorable XD
Galdrath
08-07-2011, 03:31 PM
Going to finish up the short story for the symposium then gunna make a new episode! Dunno when its gunna be posted but I have the idea for it already!
ChaseNetwork
09-04-2011, 03:40 AM
Nope Dattebayo has no actual meaning in the japanese language. It was just used as a tag at the end of Naruto's sentences. Kinda like how you would use -nya or -ebi. Translators have either disregarded the word during translation or given it 'ya know' or 'believe it' translation.
Japanese speech takes a lot more sillables, and sometimes even takes more time to use than English. This is part of the reason of how translation of anime gets so messed up. English translators have to translate it, and still fill in the time the mouth of the character is moving for speech, with exceptions being when the character speaking isn't on screen. And then when the Japanese script-writer decides to add the sentence end-caps that have no real meaning, the English translators, again, have to account for that time. When it's something simple like "-nya" they usually don't event bother translating it.
eg. "Watashi wa Myou-Ryoshi-nya!" (I know that this has it's own, but I do happen to hear it pop up every now and then when i visit Japan).
end-eg. "My name is Ryoushi Myou-nya!"
However, the larger ones, like dattebayo, need more work. They need to fill it with words. In Naruto's case, they chose "believe it" because it was more in line with Naruto's personality. It happens to work with the sillables too, because usually naruto slurs the phrase into 'tebayo. When Naruto doesn't slur it, it's in full Dattebayo, he's usually shouting when he does this, so the English Translators just make him draw out "Believe it!" into "Beelieeve it!" To account for the extra time taken.
I have no life and need to sleep now. Good night.