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sharky32123
09-07-2011, 05:36 PM
Hello i am sharky32123!

I had to sudden urge to write a fan fiction for fiesta online. I plan to actually make this a novel-type so i'm aiming for 80+ pages about 13 chapters. I want to go deep into alot of things in the story as this game has alot of offer and has a great plot if you play the cards right. I will be introducing all of the classes, trickster being last. This is after the legend of Teva and the great wars also. This is pretty much modern fiesta! I will also have parts in the story of the level 20 job change with 2 characters being introduced by then, teaming up and fighting the shadows of themself! But i wont be doing everything the same for copyright purposes just in case i'll be adding my own spice and i will always give credit where credit is due. And i'm also game for any suggestions!

I'll be remaking character names like the blacksmiths or merchants but they will have the same job. I will be using map names for area's of Isya and so forth. I will also be aiming for 1 chapter or so every 2-3 days. So wish me luck and i will have the story for you guys if you want it in download links per chapter. I am also not doing any of this for money or anything too just to add that. I havent came up with a name either :D but im putting ideas together! This is what i am playing around with in the intro before our main hero, the fighter, sets off. He hasnt had any special training and is currently residing with a few people. But i dont want to spoil it. Here is a sneak peak! :

sharky32123
09-07-2011, 05:39 PM
"Our world, Isya, is home to many gracious creatures and filled with luscious herbs and flowers. Many years ago, our gods and godesses fought to protect our land from evil. Though some tend to forget those legacy, and thus slowly the world began to corrupt itself. Evil has been spread around the beautiful Isya; this time, none of our saviors are here to protect us from the demons within. Isya, and all of mankind is headed towards destruction..."

Chapter 1
"The universe was born in a sea of darkness and chaos. This primal force called itself Legel, and embodied both creation and destruction." - Outspark/Fiesta

"Cleo!" A loud voice called. "Cleomence! Get up!" The voice repeated. "Shut up, hag! I'm getting up!" Cleomence said, rising from his bead. Cleomence was a messey haired male; around the age of 17. His body type was average and his hair burgandy red which complemented his sea blue eyes. He wore a necklas made of silver steel and a brace which stretched from his wrist to the start of his forearm, made of the same components.
The house fell quiet as Cleomence began to dress himself with brown wolf clothing, which created a Venus Cut at the chest, revealing the necklas. He placed his belt on the loops in his wolf-skinned leathery pants, and proceeded to the door infront of him, heading down the stairs. The smell of breakfast food filled the air of the home as Cleo began to form a hungry look upon his face. He reached the bottom of the stairs and quickly turned towards the area of the kitchen. In the kitchen was a mid aged woman, around her later 30's. Seemingly age 37. She wore a apron with her thin black hair tied, shorts for bottom. "Hey, Hey! Reina!" Cleomence said excitingly as his look began to grow more. "What's for breakfast?" Renia sharply glared at Cleomence quickly taking his hungry face away. "WE are having eggs, with bacon and peanut butter and slime-jelly." Cleomence's smile began to grow even more as he sniffed the air vigorusly. "WOW! Sounds tasty. What's the occasion?" He asked. "You aren't having any." She replied with a beautiful smile. (Despite Reina's age, she deemed a very beautiful woman with a nice slender body.) The room fell silent as the sizzling of bacon began to emerge. Cleomence's jaw fell open, as he seemed hopeless to Reina's harsh words. "Cleo, if you don't mind could you check on Yover? I believe i am a tad too OLD to be doing such movement." She said, not giving Cleomence so much as her peripheral.