[Fiction] Fiesta Side-Story Bijou story

[Erbian]

Hi well i could tell you that i have the same problems as bladetsukasa

Is finals week and i was having a headache so i was stalking ppl in the forums >.> ......

and then i found an interesting post about a side story of Fiesta so with the encouragement of bladetsukasa

I could be a jerk and post it for you if you take too long? ^^

i have decided to post the story of Bijou hope u like it....:D

INDEX
Bijous story

Prelude http://www.outspark.com/forums/showthread.php?p=571579#post571579
Chapter 1 http://www.outspark.com/forums/showthread.php?p=571662#post571662
chapter2 http://www.outspark.com/forums/showthread.php?p=583577#post583577
chapter 3 http://www.outspark.com/forums/showpost.php?p=585841&postcount=13
Chapter 4 http://www.outspark.com/forums/showpost.php?p=594242&postcount=17
chapter 5 http://www.outspark.com/forums/showpost.php?p=595315&postcount=18
chapter 6 http://www.outspark.com/forums/showpost.php?p=621550&postcount=26
chapter 7 http://www.outspark.com/forums/showpost.php?p=636931&postcount=28
chapter 8 http://www.outspark.com/forums/showpost.php?p=640842&postcount=35
chapter8-a http://www.outspark.com/forums/showpost.php?p=640844&postcount=36
Chapter 9
http://www.outspark.com/forums/showpost.php?p=666917&postcount=54
Chapter 9 b
http://www.outspark.com/forums/showpost.php?p=666918&postcount=55
Chapter 10 Warriors
http://www.outspark.com/forums/showpost.php?p=733748&postcount=64

[Erbian]

Prelude



Warriors are the fiercest yet noble society in this blessed land of Isya.
Their will and courage have been the ingredients to the greatest deeds through the entire world, with their exceptional skills; and their mastery of the way of the sword and axe making them proud guardians of the world.
Every childs dream begins with a sword and sometimes ends with one.
Always ready to honor their god and follow their path with courage, they prepare themselves from a young age. Guilds from the big cities come and scout young lads looking for those who will honor the heroes from the past and claim a place in the hall where their names shall be ever remembered among them. From the nearest villages to the greatest palaces in Elderine and Uruga, boys with dreams of adventure and honor are born and recruited to prepare themselves and become one of them …a Warrior……
It doesn’t matter what social status you come from it comes down to only one thing in the arena and that’s …..for them to discover…..
Among them, the title of warrior is only gained through reputation between them.
Nevertheless, some of the greatest Masters are the ones with a strong soul…
The most prodigious swordsmasters come from the Guild Hall of Bijou
- The fiercest society of warriors that ever existed in this magnificent but strange world.

Guard Captain Shutian ~Elderine

[Erbian]

Chapter 1: About Dreams and Nightmares

He had been drifting away on a piece of wood for countless hours.
The raindrops had covered the tears of his face...probably had cried while unconscious.
His clothes were strange and he didn’t feel like waking up after he had finally reached the beach nearby. He had seen it a couple of minutes before, but didn’t dare to make an effort to reach it. He was tired of being in the sea for so long... 3 times he had seen a beach nearby and each time he was left without hope because he didn’t have the strength to swim over the shore.
He was glad that he could touch the sand again… was afraid that a creature was stalking him for his night meal…the storm seemed to become more violent and the wind that help him get there had joined forces with the sea waves dragging him.
He began to hate the sea.
Unable to move he wouldn’t resist the mighty force of the sea claiming ownership over him. What he could do?? He was only a human.
A big strong hand got a grip on him and carried him over to a small shelter, but before he could get out of the water he saw something glittering in the sand. He could sense the strong muscle of the person , whose face he could not see, was helping him to get to a safe place. But he had a feeling that everything was going to be fine….

The clear sky was a blue so full that it seems to be alive.
-Hey- the voice was thunderous and woke Bijou as he was trying to get up. -Are you ok??- said Roumen miner Palmers who had poked the young lad for over an hour with a wooden stick, thinking he was dead….even though some king crabs already wanted to play with him for a while….and were still looking from afar hoping Palmers would leave that toy for them.
-GO AWAY!!!- shouted Palmers as he saw the eyes of the king crabs staring his way- HE’S STILL ALIVE…and I should take you somewhere safe ‘cus there have been some imps making a havoc nearby- Bijou didn’t have the strength to reply but sensed the strong muscle of the miner and a memory from last night came to him...which, as he tried to analyze it, was gone. -So what’s a young lad like you doing out here…stupid storm destroyed my boat…and those arrogant merchants got what they deserved…-Palmers began to mumble something about gold ore, pickaxe and a camp destroyed, but Bijou felt all his energy almost gone again for lack of proper rest and food.

He didn’t bother to try to decipher what the miner was saying…a quick image passed through his mind…he saw something shining in the sand.
-Here we are- said Palmers while putting Bijou in a bedstone nearby the camp, where he heard a lot of people shouting and talking -Sorry lad, can't give you a proper place to rest cus I got a lot of guests after the storm. But I’ll bring u something good to eat, that’s for sure, and some honey that will surely bring you up- As the miner went to his store, shouting to the crowd over there, a small breeze came.
He was still lost and didn’t know where he was.
He was trying hard to remember who he was and where he came from, but with no results… Palmers was mad and he kept mumbling something about eating almost all his honey and being ungrateful…this time Bijou could tell that the merchants had done something.
-Here u go I think this will help- feeding him some chicken soup. -I don’t think that those merchants would care if I took some of their meal and some bread…even if they took most of my camp and my fish to eat and rest….i told them not to camp nearby the shore but nooo they had to ignore me…..Kenton….- Half an hour later, Palmers had finished feeding Bijou, and apparently mumbling stuff about Boars and Ratmen. -You make sure to finish up that honey ‘cus you need your strength-Palmers scrutinized the boy, and he looked even younger with a bit more color to him. -Thanks- said Bijou…a little bit surprised he could even talk.
-Well, well! You can talk”!”- The miners laughter reached even the merchants not so far away. Bijou just nodded, trying to sit, and checked to see if he had any injuries.
- Don’t worry, I mixed a few of those Helliupontius Crystals that those merchants had with them with ‘ur soup …didn’t think they would work but im glad that they did….imma keep some of them just in case…-Palmers stared at the merchants and looked back at the young lad. -Helliu…what??—said Bijou, staring at the plate intently. -Called them HP crystals- said the miner- Ok boy, I really have lots of questions and I think that soup and bread and that honey which you are not eating needs to be paid for, so how about some answers?- Bijou just nodded again.
-What’s your name? What were you doing at that hour in the storm? Where are you from?-
Palmers made it perfectly clear that he wouldn't accept any indirect answers or lies.
-My name is Bijou and I dunno what I was doing in the storm. My head doesn't let me remember anything more than a few hours ago, when you were poking me with that stick...- Palmers just laugh more- So you do remember? Well don’t worry I don't need to know who you are or why you were washed ashore, but i dont think it would be safe for you to go right now... and even if you were even if you were better, I don’t think you could.
There’s a lot of dangerous places, and the road to the Forest of Mist is blocked by those mini greenkies. Some of the guards in the camp ahead are coming, but they might have problems with that flood…-
Bijou didn’t really know what was going on or where he was….
-Where am I ??- asked Bijou.
-Welcome to Sand Beach-

[Erbian]

Soon Chapter 3 ,,,,,,

[smitske]

Also waiting for more of this ^^
you should make links in the first post though, its

[Erbian]

Chapter 2 About Guilds and Dungeons

Almost without breath and almost tripping Bijou was running down the hill from a gang of Boars, if only he hadn’t help that mage….

-im not a fighter, or archer or cleric- he repeatedly said that to his mind while running.

He chuckle when he remember drawing his sword and trying to stab that bored boar….after staying with Palmers over a week, the miner try to teach Bijou the way of the sword or at least what he knew about it.

Bijou didn’t show much interest in learning, he was really more interest in magic but Mages were born with that art and he didn’t posses a single drop of magic in his blood.

Bijou did remember something in this moment, something that Palmers told him since his first day here….~never wander alone in the woods in the Forest of Mist always make ‘our road nearby the cliffs never in the woods~….

It was too late he had enter one of the worst places.

He heard a merchant talk about a place that is only safe if u were a creature of darkness.

-fools, mercenaries, and heroes enter those kind of places……the most dangerous place in the Forest of Mist is the Luminous stone….but to me all of those people are fools-

He had lost the boar or the thing was ready to ambush him.

The woods became silent in the instance.

The loud crack of a wooden stick crushed by his foot make him uneasy.

He felt as if thousands eyes were staring at him.

He began to laugh- and this for some stupid graver pickaxe-

He sat down looking at his backpack, 12 grave robbers pickaxes were there; and he suddenly began to ask himself why he was still there??, why he hadn’t look for his hometown??, and who was really him??...worthless questions…he thought.

He felt a strong presence nearby, lots of sounds began to get to his ears; creatures in the shadows lurking for that essence that had startle them.

Bijou also felt that presence and began to look in all directions.

His heart was in a supreme joy he couldn’t suppress.

A shining thing had appeared nearby his chest- I have seen this before- he said in almost a whisper, his breath almost gone.

It seems as if the time had stopped to show him something, a chain had appear in neck and then a blue ring was pulling him outside the woods.

The air didn’t move, the trees seem dead, and his heartbeat let him know that he was still alive….no more sound, no more darkness only the gray vision he had….

He looked at the ring with surprise and it was a blue shining ring and beyond in the other side of the woods a blue aura…

He walked… (More likely drag) to where the ring was pulling him….

The time came back and he notice hundreds of ratmans, boars and boogies around him, they seem berserks to his presence……~run~…..

He doesn’t know how did he have the strength to run or how did he know where to go, but he did knew that for some reason; he was running towards the blue aura.

For half an hour he ran leaving behind most of those creatures.

The forest shadow began to grow and the forest roof began to thicken.

He froze and look to an old archway dusty but so ancient it might have come alive in any second; he walked towards the entrance slowly.

Something was calling him to enter.

It was in the middle of the wood, only old leafs looking as a carpet and the silence began to hurt his ears.

A dark thing began to grow behind him.

A single blow could have broken his bones but somehow the ring shield him against the attack in the ground he drag himself away from that thing.

Never have seen something like that or hear of it.

He ran away in to the woods again, before he could enter a shining arrow pass across him, making a little scratch in his cheek; after that 2 fireballs hit directly that thing chest. But that shadow didn’t back down instead it began a horrendous cry that left them without color.

A silver haired elf came out of the woods and whispered something so fast that it couldn’t be written here, and fired an arrow at that foul thing.

It didn’t hit it but disappeared.

-Are u ok??- said the elf that look scared somehow.

Bijou had never seen an elf so close and this beautiful being healed any fears he had.

- im….im fine- Bijou answered with a little bittersweet taste in his mouth.

One of the mages came out of the woods and he looked more dangerous thant the archer- what is it Wintergreen, is the human alive??- He asked and with certain disdain looked at Bijou who didn’t like him in the least “is that a mage??” he thought; really disappointed about his first meeting with one.

-Goshire you shouldn’t talk like that, after all you were the one that said we should save him- Wintergreen grin a bit, her beautiful smile eased the bad mood in Bijous’s.

-I didn’t…- Goshire was interrupted by sounds in the forest.

The mage’s hand began to glow blue and little pieces of ice began to form in his hand.

A shining sword appeared.

[Erbian]

-Calm down Gosh, I wouldn’t dare to fight u ….again… u have lost once- a Warrior came out of nowhere and stared at the mage who’s ice spell hadn’t disappeared.

-....where’s Machi??- asked Wintergreen to calm down the enchanter temper.

- she was talking to one of his guildmates- answered StarLeona- strange things began to happen in all Isya woods…here she comes..-

A paladin came and whispered something to the Warrior ear.

Leona face changed fast it hardened a bit.

-what’s wrong Leona??- asked the scout- what happened??-

-It seems that our mission here needs to be done inmeadiatly- said the enchanter who was already walking down the archway path.

-Leona??- the scout wasn’t sure if the warrior was in his body..-what should we do with him??- pointing at Bijou’s direction.

-we cant let him here- said Machi.

Besides Leona needs to go back to Uruga right away.

Leona walked without word to the archway and enter that dark place.

-Machi?? …what’s going on??- asked Wintergreen desperate to know.

- GardonOfRecluse….just declared war to Serenity and Leon’s brother is dead-

[bladetsukasa]

Nice so far, you should link all your posts to the original post ^^

[Erbian]

and i should be doing my Methodical Numbers HomeWork rofl
ok let me change that

[Erbian]

i think tonight the next chapter will be ready ^^

[smitske]

nice story, although I think you better not put someguilds in a bad daylight here(unless their Gm's aggree) cause the way you wrote the last things it mightve ment to be slander the guild.

[Erbian]

mmm i havent finished the plot so u might wanna wait for the rest lol

[Erbian]

Chapter 3 about Dungeons and Guilds He felt so uneasy once he had past the archway. Bijou felt as if he had been transported to a forbidden place in a different realm. The candle lights of the entrance make the place as if it were alive. Thousands of carvings in the wall were given the look of a spell in action. - it is a giant magic spell- said the dark elf- don’t touch them for your own good- Goshire didn’t like Bijou as much as Bijou but he had no intention of getting into trouble before they had reached their goal. -Gosh, do u think it is safe to bring the boy with us ??- asked Leona who was more serious from what Bijou had seen. -he will have to come because I don’t want to be nobody babysitter- said Wintergreen before anyone could answer- besides he could help- -without a sword? , a shield?, an armor?, guts??.....- said Goshire looking at him again with that sever look, that Bijou almost felt a spell upon him, - no I have a roumen sword right here – said Machi handing over the light sword- and if he gets in problems ill protect him whetever u want it or not- the cleric word sounded as law so no one said anything more. -ok but why do u gave him a sword?? He could be an archer u know…- said Wintergreen who stared at Bijou intensely. Goshire laughter almost waked up all luminous stone. - and maybe he is a Mage- the dark elf said- he could be a cleric but I don’t see anything in him- Mages could see through the blood in people and drain most o the magical ability’s from them for a moment. - so hes a fighter then…- said the scout giving up in the subject. -While u keep playing with that idea Machi already went far ahead and she maybe in trouble…. And we don’t have armor or a shield so the boy will stay close to machi and both of u stop chatting and come we need to finish this mission as fast as possible…-the words of Leon were sober for some reason. -…..elfs…- Machi was walking as stealthy as she could…she was no elf but she could have fooled one, Bijou couldn’t have kept a Mini Dragon sleeping with those heavy footsteps. *thump*thump* The sword that Bijou was carrying was one that had some mysterious carvings which he couldn’t read because of the dim light. -stop- he heard from Machi. A squadron of skeletons knights passed through in front of them, oblivious of the presence of the two intruders that were watching from the shadows. Machi knew he could have taken them solo but he couldn’t with Bijou at her side. -where are they ??- she asked more for herself than to anything else. Bijou started to ask why he hadn’t say anything and stayed up there. -Machi….what are we looking for here??- The Cleric smile a bit. – well since u are gonna see it I shall tell u- Machi and Bijou moved a little bit so they could have a safe place to talk. -I dunno much of the details but only the Masters of the Guild Alliance knows about it…theres a crystal down here that for some reason need to be guarded it contains something …I really don’t know whats in it…the Henneath Alliance the Mayors of the cities and the Masters of The Guild Alliance sworn to protect it whatever the cost…- A sound came from behind Bijou and a Kebing appeared. Machi hit it with his Morngestern but the sound of alarm had been already given. -RUN- she shouted to Bijou who followed her. The swarming squadron went after them. In a few minutes Bijou felt like in a maze while mMachi kept hitting anything in her pass trying to knock them and letting Bijou to get a free way. A hollow sound followed. A sea of stones fell upon Bijou. Machi stopped staring at the pile of rocks that blocked the way. -Are u ok ??- she ask thinking it would be funny somehow to hear a yes. -im fine but….what did u do ??- answer Bijou who was amazed for what he could see. He was inside a white sphere with a strange symbol in the top. The rocks couldn’t get to him thanks to this barrier. - well we need a way to find out how to get you out of there before I get tired- Machi went to the pile of rocks and began removing them. Suddenly, a sound makes her turn around. A howl, make her uncomfortable. -what was that? – Bijou asked he also heard that and trying he’s best to stop being frightened and not sound afraid. -Believe me; you don’t wanna know…- -MAchi.??...- Machi just felt the full hit in her face and was lying unconscious in the ground. Bijou felt how he shield was losing strength and there was nothing he could do.

[Erbian]

are you guys gonne bundle your stories in 1 thread later? or is blad egonne make a story bout this to laterz?

At the moment it's kind of undecided, but I plan an weaving the events of the other 2 stories into mine very shortly through minor characters :3

Also thought about this and u should read blades first post that would clear things up ^^

[bladetsukasa]

Mm, I was thinking we could all do alternate versions of the characters to make more creative plots for people to choose from ^^

i.e. this fighter version is more character finding himself while mine is more battle oriented, her archer version is more adultish spy while mine will be more magical historical I guess?

[Amathyst]

Hehe, well, mine has a few more action orientated events, but I'll be twinning in some of the minor characters and events from both of your stories as I go to make it easier to tie in at the end (if that idea goes ahead).

[Erbian]

Chapter 4 People and Secrets.

A explosion from the rear moved one of the giant rocks enough to let a body crawl thorugh the hole, and then a hand came.
It was the hand of a woman.
- are u stand there or are u coming- her voice had authority in it.
As fast as he could he crawled getting out of that place.
It crumble in the moment he got out and then he stumble by the tip of her sword.
-What are you two doing here??- She asked.
Bijou could only see a dark haired woman with a strong look.
Her body could be of any maiden but she was stronger that he could ever imagine.
In her back a ******* sword which was as dark as her eyes was kept sheathed.
-even if I could answer you I don’t find the words to say it- said Bijou.
- You don’t know huh??- said the women who back down slowly the sword she hold against Bijou’s throat and look at him with a familiar feeling.
-What’s your name??- her slender figure walking towards the fallen cleric.
-Bijou and what’s yours??- he somehow got the feeling this wasn’t a person to trust.
-Jandra- another voice came down from the passage.
Jandra draw out her ******* sword and glare down at the cleric walking towards her.
-Zelkova, nice to see you again- she maked sure she got plenty of space to make a run if it got too crowded- I thought that the Torturer King got you …and sorry to leave you in such unpleasant company- her grin was as twisted as the deeds she had done so far.
-Im stronger than you think Jandra, besides do you think that an assassin would defeat a Paladin of the Order of Teva??- the paladin was in clear calm but still she would remind that little fact and make Jandra pay.
Both women looked at each other walking and change places.
Bijou didn’t know what to do and since he remembers there was nothing he could do in this strange world.
-what are you doing here Jandra??- asked Zelkova once again.
- why do you think that serenity guild is here?? Why do you think a representative of the guild alliance is here?? They are all watching the crystal….as do the forces of darkness….who by the way they have already make alliance with the Great Goblin King- Jandra slowly went in to the shadows- and Bijou I’ll see you again-
-Why are u telling me this Jandra??- asked Zelkova.
But no reply came.
Zelkova looked at the darkness waiting for her to disappear.
-how long has been Machi unconscious??- asked Zelkova.
- not much I think- asked Bijou- who are you ??-
-My name is Zelkova captain of the 7th squad, Order of Teva-
Zelkova immediately began to heal Machi as Bijou looked how the cleric use her healing powers with amaze.
-You stand guard while I heal her- said Zelkova.
Bijou didn’t like to be boss around but he had to.
As the ring in his chest became more and more blue and shiny he didn’t notice he was walking into the shadows.
For some reason he forgot he shouldn’t go deeper and he forgot also that he was no match for any of the creatures that lived here.
It felt so deserted and a strong call was pulling him towards the vast darkness of this place, he found himself walking down some stairs and for what it felt hours he finally found himself in door that was clouded with a mist of black color.
Never fond of getting himself on trouble he found irresistible to cross it.
From afar Jandra looked down at Bijou.
She felt something strange about the boy.
He then walked slowly in to the open.
He had been able to cross the door without any sign.
No one is able to see the door unless they wear the sign of the top ranked in the Henneath alliance or the Guilds alliance or The order of Teva or …..
Then she remember that her clan the darkassassins were able to enter too…
But he was neither a member of any society.
Less a high rank.
He surely was …..something else.
*HOWL*
Jandra almost fell from where she was at the sound of that howl.
She knew who that was.
She wanted to shout at Bijou, to tell him to run but that would mean she too would be on danger there must be way.
Two bright colors appeared from downstairs.
Lots of howls, cries and footsteps occupied the chamber and then something appear in the middle of that place.
A big diamond and magic circle around it engraved with words lost in time.
Millennium Robo appeared with his dual blades.
One as hot as any dragon fire and the other as cold as the heart of him.
Behind him the biggest mob of creatures Bijou had ever seen.
Jandra knew that would only go until Bijou was dead and then devour his flesh and bones…-what a pity I really wanted to meet him??-
Bijou walked towards the center as the army of creatures began to surround him.
For some reason they didn’t approach much at the magic circle.
Bijou slowly back down towards the diamond
Robo didn’t let go of this chance and went directly at him both swords down upon him.
His heart almost out of his chest Bijou fell inside of the magical circle as did Robo.
The mob followed his leader and as they got the wall in the magical barrier killed all the creatures that tried to enter.
Bijou was safe from them.
The cries of the creatures became a chanting supporting Robo.
They wanted the blood and flesh of the human.
Robo started to attack viciously his swords making scratches at the floor.
Bijou didn’t know what to do. He barely could hold his weapon.
In a swing he tried to block the werewolf twin swords.
- What im doing? I know ill die..- his words came from the most deep of his soul.
The ring didn’t like that kind of attitude.
Robo tried to slash Bijou but found a surprise that he couldn’t injure him.
Bijou couldn’t believe his luck and without anymore thinking he began to attack relentlessly at Robo who had to back down a bit.
Robo hit again but not a single injure were given.
Robo noticed that he cant injure the human but he could launch him flying to walls and making him tired.
Bijou also found out that and he had to run a bir trying to rest for the countless blows that have fallen upon him and send him flying over and over.
Bijou knew that he need to finish this somehow.
The ring felt a strong source of energy drawing him of power.
Bijou looked at the diamond in the center.
Robo stood and looked how the diamond was robbing of power at Bijou.
The chanting outside was stopping when the creatures saw that his leader hadn’t killed the Human and they went berserk.
Shouting insults in their own language.
Bijou jumped while was distracted and stab Robo’s heart.
A hollow cry came from the diamond.
The fire and ice from the swords began to fade.
The magic circle also dissapered slowly and the creatures were ready to attack.
A dark mist covered everything.
Bijou felt someone grabbing his hand and running towards the downstairs.
The madness of this place felt in the whole atmosphere.
But the anger of it fell upon Bijou’s heart.

[Erbian]

Chapter 5 Awakening
As Jandra and Bijou ran through the stairs they found themselves in a maze lost and could hear the howls of every creature that were in their follow.
-Now what??- asked Bijou as he somehow felt as if something had awaken inside him. For a few minutes now he felt so much anger.
The image of that diamond was carved in the walls of his mind now.
He felt as if a great burden was lifted from him.
- are you asking me??- Jandra looked in shock- I wasn’t the one that defeated Robo single handed with that puny sword-
They stop trying to figure out where to go.
The torches down in the maze went out.
The sounds of thousands of tiny footsteps were heard all around them.
A blue shining thing appeared in Bijou chest it wasn’t as powerful as before but at least they could see where to go ….if that was a good thing.
- this has to be a joke- said Jandra that didn’t let go off Bijou’s hand.
Thousands of spiders crawling through the walls, closing fast on them.
Bijou had to pull Jandra in order to make her react.
Running for the first time leading in something, he felt the urge to use his senses. The ring could only afford of bringing them light.
His mind felt as if it was unlocked.
Was the feeling of hatred from before destroyed something??
The assassin followed the boy and she noticed she was still holding his hand. She let go in a instance in a very rude way.
- I don’t have time for this- Bijou said trying to run faster than those spiders.
-WATCH OUT!!-
Jandra saw a mob of Bats coming their way.
Almost tripping both of them they turn east and stopped frozen.
-shhh- said Jandra- they are magic staffs high concentrated magic in one thing….just move slowly the don’t like anything that moves more than they do…- Bijou try to be as slow as he could.
Jandra looked behind them.
- you better put that thing out …I kinda remember they don’t like light too-Jandra said and in that moment Bijou took the ring in his fist and blacked all the room.
Both of them could hear the sounds of the wings and legs of those creatures.
Walking in the darkness they felt as if they were submerge in the abyss.
-it is rumoured that there is a door to a dark place in here- said Jandra.
- so what now?? Are un gonna give me Geography lessons??- said Bijou in a very foul way trying to walk without being notice.
-no but that’s the only way out- answer her very angry.
-nice…-
Bijou stopped, he suddenly felt an urge of shouting in anger; a rage that would consume him and couldn’t hold on anymore.
His voice echo through all Luminous Stone.
Bijou was red and felt as if his energy were leaving his soul.
Jandra quickly hug him trying to calm him down.
His hands got burned because Bijou was burning.
Somehow she didn’t want to let go.
And unconsciously she began to whisper a song to Bijou’s ear.
However the Magic staffs were already awaken.
The light from them beamed in all the rooms and so they brought all the monsters.
Jandra took Bijou arms and almost drag him to a door that she just have seen. Without thinking she entered leaving that pleace with Bijou in her arms.
~~~
Leona hacked in 2 and 3 pieces every monster that was in their past.
Goshire saw how the entrance crumbled and the dark mist was causing a rebellion in the monsters inviting them to attack them.
-we should go for the entrance we cant handle this much of a monsters right now-said Wintergreen looking at the mob attacking them.
-I cant leave without Machi- said Leona.
-I think she will be ok but we have to go we cant handle all these monster now.- Goshire just turn his sights to the left where a skeleton warrior was face to face with him, with a speed of the elfs he touch the skeleton warrior who became a tower of ice.
Wintergreen shot 8 arrows in the same time so her companions could run.
-RUN!!!-
Leona looked to his back and saw someone holding Machi in her arms.
Wintergreen use her multiple shot again making time for her companions….again.
The warrior run over to help Zelkova and carried Machi- Lets go Gosh- shouted. Goshire was standing calm.
-I don’t care if this falls apart- and the enchanter began to say a number of spells just when the creatures got him surrounded.
A big explosion occurred.
-jajaj I’ve always been looking to do that- that laughter was the most evil they had heard but they were glad that Goshire was a friend.
They run for it.
As they were about to go out of that place they remembered the boy who had come with them….where was he??
-FIRE!!!-
A pack of arrows went flying towards them and it didn’t hit them, they pass through against the creatures behind them.
Grand Master Sean was there with a regiment from Roumen and Elderine.
A pack of cleverfighters came to help trying to help them.
Archmages and Hawkarchers were letting go all they got against the incoming tide of monsters that were following the party.
-What’s a member of the Order of Teva doing here? – Asked Sean – Only the party choose by The Henneath Alliance is allowed to enter that place, you should have been in the ceremony that was taken this morning…Teva has begun his journey-
Zelkova didn’t say anything.
- it was Jandra isn’t – said Sean interpreting her silence.
Leona looked at the archway and the battle that was taken place.
Something very bad had happened.
Something, which may affect them all.
~~~
Jandra felt the water in his face and woke up.
Bijou was a nearby conscious and trying to know what happened.
- I was pretty sure that you were and are an assessin- Bijou said.
-and??- Jandra asked too tired to even stand up.
-why did u help me?? The door was insight you could have escaped and saved yourself- asked Bijou- and more important why did Zelkova was following you??-
-that’s none of your business- answered her- and about uncomfortable questions what the hell happened to you back there …do you want us to get killed??-
Bijou didn’t know how to answer.
He just knew that something was free inside him.
Bijou was standing up when something catch his attention.
A person was coming to them.
Her Axe was being drag in the sand and her face couldn’t been seen because his blue hair covered, what was most important it had the armour of a clever fighter.
-Who are you??- Bijou asked without getting an answer.
The deadly axe however did tell them her intentions.

[smitske]

bumping this for later, no time to read ^^

[Lomirei]

Hmm.
So I've actually taken a look...and...
I hope no one flames me or anything...and this is just constructive criticism on my part.
Whatever I say, is not meant to discourage you...only to suggest a way for you to improve.
But your style...is different.
And I find it really distracting and a bit of a pain to understand and read, because your format is different than what I NORMALLY read.
Also, your grammar, sometimes, is a bit off.

However, your storyline and/or plot is interesting.
:3

There's my dime.
I shall go hide now. ;__;

[Erbian]

ish ok i think i got a bit carried away....rofl
besides im not good with english im from another country so i think i have yet to improve thx for the comment and yes i have receive a lots of PM telling me to reduce a bit of these and a bit of that so ty all for ur suggestions ^^

:D:D

[Lomirei]

Understandable then.
And if anything, you can have someone edit it for you before you post it.
:3

[Erbian]

yay I survived finals week and i shall finish the next chapter i'll try my best on this one

[darkamaya18]

:) nice story I get into it its very interesting :p Keep going i wanna know what happenes LMAO :p :)

[Erbian]

ROFL babe
<.< are u stalking me again??

[Erbian]

Chapter 6 BOTS -There’s a rumor that these things are called bots- said Jandra unsheathing her claymore and getting ready to attack that thing- they are called that way because is a body of a tear soul- -so she’s not a human??- asked Bijou who had been fighting for over an hour. - she was a human once….just she isn’t anymore- said Jandra in a gloomy expression. Bijou felt something inside of him, the same anger as before but it was burning his chest and traveling through his body. He felt a massive amount of energy in his arm and something appear in it. A long pole appeared as tall as he was. Jandra recognized that kinda weapon. Only elite guards on the Guilds could use one of those. Bijou didn’t think of anything else his mind for some reason was else where. He lift up the Axe and jumped in front of the bots which avoided his attack.
However Bijou continued his attack relentlessly against the bots which was caught in surprise by the vicious attack. -first he kills Robo, then he gets a pole axe out of nowhere and now he fights a bots??- Jandra wasthinnking of these when she spotted something approaching nearby. White silhouettes floating coming their way. -BIJOU …RUN!!!!!!!- A massive army of ghosts came to them as a running from something. The bots was hardly keeping the pace of Bijou attacks. There was something in the boy that revived a feeling in that soulless body and that feeling was….FEAR. The headless bots fell to the ground while Bijou got back to his senses. Jandra and Bijou were running as fast as they could. Prox were shooting them from the cracks in that place. -What happened why are we running??-Bijou just reappeared in his body. Jandra looked at him with a shock. The place became as dark as the soul of the tortures… ….and then a light show them one of the most beautiful scenes… …them falling from the top of a mountain…. Jandra as clever as she was looked at every direction, trying to identify where they were and where could they head off. –Vine Tomb- Bijou couldn’t react as fast as Jandra was, he could only see on of the tombs where they were gonna fall and hard. Jandra by some reason was getting bored of this. She was accustomed to get a hold of every situation she was in. She just woke up in a strange coffin, jumping scared there she saw unconscious once more –For Teva you are gonna spend half your life sleep or unconscious- -I wasn’t unconscious- said Bijou- I was just resting and waiting for you to wake up- Bijou heard something and was already up when Jandra heard that too. - Is in that direction- said Bijou and he ran while Jandra followed. A group of people were passing by the main road looking as a caravan. Lots of warriors, clerics, archers and mages were surrounding a carriage and inside of her a young girl was looking outside of it. An arrow pointed in the back of Bijou. -A fighter without a weapon??- Said the scout- that’s strange don’t you think boy??- Bijou didn’t dare to move as he saw another fighter in their way. Jandra didn’t move either as she saw herself trapped by two mages and a cleric. -Lets take them to Tenderly –said diGin- she may know what to do with them- Taken by force both of them advanced to the caravan. diGin looked at Jandra with interest she was kinda familiar. -havent I seen you before??...whats your name he asked-the scout sense something familiar looking at the women. Jandra did remember doing a big havoc when he saw a group od scouts looking something in Burning Hill….she did remember seeing diGin trying to get rid of the marlones captains while Jandra had told them there was a Elderine patrol in the camp. She used the Marlone’s squadrons as a distraction to enter the palace. There she stoled something but before she got out an arrow hit her shoulder. Apoline was there. Never Jandra had such fights as vicious as the ones she had with Zelkova or Apoline. -Her name is Jandra…she’s my sister…we got robbed by the hobs around that cliff over there- said Bijou taking diGin’s attention. As the scout was about to hit him for his intrusion a cleric came by and stopped diGin’s fist and looked at the scout with such a beautiful look that the anger stoped. Even Bijou felt a relaxing sensation looking at that red haired women. -free them please- said the cleric. -But Tenderly they were hiding from us- said the scout- they are kinda suspicious don’t you think and besides we are bodyguarding the Elderine courier- A little girl came quickly to the cleric side, she grabbed the clerics arm and whispered something to her ear then the little mage looked at Bijou. -Is ok Kichiko…we are coming- Tenderly looked at diGin once more and the scout freed the two persons- Bijou sense an overwhelming calm when she was around. Jandra was relieve that diGin didn’t remember what she had done to him. -follow me- Tenderly looked at them and they did as told.

Someone was watching at this very moment the cleric thought it was better to take care of them.

Bijou didnt knew what was happening to his life....only that it was changing...

[Dernier]

nice story i wanna read more ^^ Good Luck and i hope you update more :D

[Erbian]

Chapter 7 Unknown

As they came closer to Elderine an unknown feeling grew in Bijous heart.
Jandra was as quiet as ever and Tenderlly wouldn’t let anyone come closer to them.
The little girl wouldn’t stop staring at Bijou and for some reason the fighter felt a familiar sensation about her.
He suddenly realize that he had no track of the time and was wondering how much time have passed since he was attack and he remembered that mage.
That mage that he tried to help.
-sorry…..- kichiko said those words and ran to Tenderly’s arm and grabbed on her.
For some reason not being treated as prisioners was for that little mage and his act of bravery trying to save her.
- why have you been so quiet??- he asked Bijou that felt so uneasy seeing her as that.
-this people are as dangerous to me as an orc to a rookie mage- said Jandra who covered her face with a cloak that came out of nowhere.
-Bijou is your name isn’t??- Tenderly approached and walked along side him.
The boy just nodded as he direct his sight forward.
- you don’t really know who you are isn’t??- Tenderly walked looking at a ring in her hand- walk with me……DiGin we are gonna scout the road ahead- she shouted and even if the look of the scout was a furious one he didn’t dare to say anything to the woman who was the captain of the 7th squadron of Elderine.
- take the this- Tenderly gave Bijou a strange sword it was way too big for a swordsman so he had to carry it in his back- is a Zweihander-
Bijou grabbed the 2 handed sword and it didn’t feel as heavy as he thought it would be.
When they were safe from eavesdroppers Tenderly stop and so did Bijou.
-first of all I shall say that im so Grateful of you for saving my little sister Kichiko- Tenderly walked a bit more and looked a group of ghosts blocking the road.
-Go and take care of those ghosts- she said in an order.
-what?!- he was uncertain about what Tenderly just say- are you crazy!? is a mob and if you aren’t able to see that group of hobs and those were bears then you…-
Tenderly looked at him.
-don’t you feel that need of killing growing inside of you…- as the cleric was saying those words a little heat began to grow in his body ….something inside of him was asking to call forth that pole axe from before…-WAKE UP!?-
Bijou felt how that feeling of death was sleep now….but still it was inside of him.
-I see that you haven been able to control it yet-
The cleric had seen the change of him in those few seconds.
-Do you know about the gods of Isya?- she asked more calmed than before.
-I don’t think I could…and how do you know so much about me ??- he asked more shocked at how she described what happened inside of him.
Tenderly said she doesn’t have much to time to explain but…-there’s a prophecy written by Teva herself warning us from her brothers….looking for vengeance for the imprisonment of her father and the exile they are suffering…but for somereason they are trying to wake up in the bodys of certain persons….- a darkness never know to her surrounded her eyes.
-as we talked people choosen in the upcoming war is walking their path…I don’t know what is their role and whats gonna happen from this point but I know that you all one day shall meet and from that point all will begin-
-Who really are you??- he asked thinking Tenderly was something more that what meets the eye.
-I was send here to tell you that you were watched since the time you appeared out of nowhere in SandBeach and give you this information….you are Bijou the god of death or creation….thats your choice-


After two or three hours later the caravan arrived to the spot where Tenderly and Bijou were talking. diGin couldn’t hold his expression of horror as he saw Tenderly covered in blood and dirt with her shield a little broken and that boy following her behind with that pole axe being covered of a dark fluid….it was blood too.
-what happen…are you ok ?? ….are you hurt….- the hand of Tenderly stopped the words from the scout and look at him with those eyes that looked more tired now- give him some new clothes and let him rest-
Kichiko ran towards Tenderly and stopped her from falling to the ground.
Jandra came out of the wagon she was stealing food and with her eyes of astonishment she helped Kichiko carry the cleric.
The sunset was as red as the heart of the new God walking the world.
….but that god hasn’t fully awake.



-Sir- a fighter came running from the entrance of the Forest of Mist- news from the captain of the 9th squadron in Uruga- Captain Sean was talking to a group of soldiers and look at the fighter that was taking big breaths.
-what?!.... captain Shutain!??- Captain Sean has never being so harsh with his reaction but half of Elderine saw him for the first time running towards the stair in the guild hall of Bijou in Elderine running towards a surprised Captain Shutain that send his companions away.
-We need to talk- said Sean who looked at Deikki and the Master scout knew what he had to do, sending a pair of his scouts to the city looking for the elders.



-we weren’t sure about it until we gave Apoline that quiver but still that doesn’t mean that he had yet found the pole axe of ….him- said Keist looking very gloomy in this dark place.
-Well….-a voice from the other side of his room came and startled the presents- Apoline knows, Teva is on his way, Bijou is almost awake….and there’s a mage who has caught the mayors attention….i think Epith is the name…..- Grandpa Robin came forth showing his face. Never the leader of the Elderine had seen them like this.
-what did the Ewigkeits said??- Martin asked thinking very interesting on that a report from Uruga had come and yet that the captain of the 9th squadron had sent it.
-the weapon in the crystal is no longer there- said Sean.
Marty was shocked, the highest level security was placed to protect that artifact and still it was stolen.-should we inform Roumenus??-
-no- said Robin- skill master ruby was already here when those news came she was looking for his drunk Boyfriend but she had to deliver that message as fast as she could; Robin was staring at skill Master Marty who did seem preoccupied.
-So what should we do ??- asked Shutain.
-We can only wait- answered Robin.

[ILiKePieLoRDoFKNiVeS]

Good... i like it

[Erbian]

;P thanks im trying to think of a next chapter but i have to remember more IGN rofl :P

[bladetsukasa]

;P thanks im trying to think of a next chapter but i have to remember more IGN rofl :P

LOL!
Use some names of forumers? (the short ones that resemble names, not the one with like 20 characters xD or the NarutoSasuke1049104819 ones =P)

[Erbian]

ROFL


ill try but im going to use only those that doesnt have numbers or the ones that doesnt have im not a cleric thing ....NAMES not words :P for example Blade may appear

[bladetsukasa]

Blades are objects, not names o.o
Though I'd totally name my kid that for kicks :O

[Erbian]

:P guess whats the name i choose for mine ...Erbian... and i was thinking of blade ....anyway i have HW so i dont think ill write today even though i wanted to see Ama story too and yours how is it

[Erbian]

Chapter 8 Fears

-You know this kind of things should be done with the advice of the Majors of the cities- Leona said looking at the young man before him.
-Only us….warriors are the ones that can handle this; you know this much more than I do….is been a pact from generations to us guardians…the warriors of Bijou…we sworn to protect the last of the Soul stones remaining and you saw what happened in Luminous Stone…that boy released a fraction of Bijou soul- the young man took out his pole axe and walked away from Leona.
-what are you going to do Erbian??- the Warrior asked looking at the 9th squadron Captain walking towards the center of Uruga.
-I have orders from my Commander to see if the body of the weapon of Bijou is still under the Torturer King protection- said Erbian covering himself in a grey cloak and walking towards the market.
-So those were Falcomist orders- said a voice from behind.
-you shouldn’t sneak on people like that- said Leona annoyed at how this Scout always appeared out of the nothing always.
-well you should have to be more careful now since your are the new master of the Guild Alliance…I grieve on the dead of Falcomist…-his smile showed different.
Leona couldn’t stand Blade smirk…filthy traitor they called him, most of the people hated his clan…spies, assassins, bounty hunters, allies of the forces of darkness but still…Blade was his best friend…
-show some respect because Falcomist was also my Friend-he said.
-this are dangerous times Leona and we cant go on like this much time…the Ewigkeits had already decided we just need the Guild Alliance and the Henneath Alliance to prepare themselves….as we speak my sister is watching over Bijou and the second in command of the Ewigkeits has already inform him…-
Leona already knew about this but it was so difficult to know what the prophecys in the Trumpy’s remains meant, he looked at the crystal in the middle of the city was as shining as never… he remembered how that red glow began a few weeks ago.
Blade redirected his stare in the castle of the royal family in Uruga.
-How’s Epith doing….-the scout asked, a big commotion came from the top floors of the castle and fire began to spread from the windows within minutes it disspeared.
The people in Uruga had already been familiarizing with this.
-So Jandra will still keep an eye on him-said Leona walking towards the Mayor house.
Blade nodded and disappeared.

After week they were almost reaching Elderine the path in Vine Tomb was reckless and chaotic that they needed to camp several times and the rain didn’t help much.
As for now they were in the middle of Moonlight Tomb region.
-How do you know so much about warriors??-Bijou asked Tenderly who was healing the last wound on his arm.
-Because she’s married with one- answer Jandra nearby.
Tenderly looked at Jandra closely and took a deep breath.
-whats wrong Jandra you haven’t talk much lately it seems as…-Jandra left the words in the mouth of Bijou.
-we are suppose to take care of him- Tenderly said.
-Why do I have to care??....an Ewigkeit is already with him- and she left the place.
Bijou didn’t understand what was going on with her.
-Wake up the caravan- Jandra came back quickly and Tenderly did as told.
Bijoux ran up in the hill and saw an army of zombies heading their way.
Again that feeling of death was consuming him and he felt to the floor struggling with him trying to control himself against the desire of blood.
-Tenderly you need to tell me whats going on?? Is he really the God of death??- Jandra looked as panic as Tenderly was.
-I don’t know yet…but he has desire for blood ever since he had appeared in this place…and If you haven’t noticed every attack that has occurred has been because hes the one attracting the monsters it is as if he calls them somehow-
Jandra ran towards Bijou who was in the ground and looked insides of his clothes for something, a shiny thing she had seen before.
She held the ring in her hand and put in Bijou finger.
A cool aura felt in Bijou body surrounding him and soothing his desires.
He fell asleep.
Those zombies stopped and somehow went in different directions.
Tenderly and Jandra carried him towards the caravan when diGin saw them and went running to help them.
Neither one of them spoke of what had happened.
When they reached Elderine’s gate a crowd of people was waiting for them.
They all shouted glad that the courier was safe from her trips in the north and were welcoming to the city.
Her companions were dismissed as the city guard took care of the courier.
A soldier came and talked to Tenderly giving her orders to report herself in the Guild Hall of Bijou immediately.
Jandra couldn’t help being a little bit somber in here.
After all of his clan has been banned away from the cities.
She couldn’t help to notice some of the Building and edifications in the city.
They were marvelous but still she had only entered during the night so she hadn’t seen any of this as she was doing now.
-come- Tenderly grabbed Jandra arm who was worried about leaving Bijou- he has already been send to my rooms- answered the cleric.
Both women walked across the market.
Jandra was unfamiliar with all those things that were being sold in this place, all those years living outside and alone had disoriented her and she couldn’t identify this sense of safeness that he felt right now.
They reached a large building that looked more like a palace and his entrance with those pillars made of black onyx made it godly like
-This is the guild hall of bijou- Tenderly said.
They ran a few more steps up when Captain Shutain called Tenderly from afar.
-Captain Tenderly how nice to see you- he smiled as he always had to her.
Tenderly as dirty as she was bow before him and smiled.
-there’s a meeting in the grand hall and we need all the captains to be reported immediately-he looked at her face fill with a bit of mud and her companion- clean yourself Tend I don’t think your dad would like to see you like this-
Tenderly blushed and walk away to his rooms-thank you Uncle-
Captain Shutain smiled and walked away.

-mmm...where did I left that??- Kichiko was very hyperactive when she arrived to Elderine with a couple of bags of candy she began to make some potions in her
cauldron, she mixed some chewy meat some spirit fruit, a little bit of sage and something that she found on the floor.
Bijou was still sleeping in one of the beds in there.
He probably might be wondering why is he again sleeping or unconscious.
Tenderly entered the room and looked at Kichiko.
-Is the potion ready??-
-Almost but….ish not too strong for him??- she asked with a rather confuse expression.
Tenderly didn’t answer in fact she want to take a bath and ran off to the chamber where she was being called.
-Jandra you should rest…take a bath and rest- the cleric said before she left.
Jandra couldn’t think when the last time she took a decent bath was.
As she was thinking about it she saw that Kichiko couldn’t stop staring her.
-What!?- she said harshly.
-you look like my big brother- Kichiko answered and walk towards Bijou letting him drink the potion she made.

[Erbian]

Jandra didn’t like that comment even if she was though, fierce and blood tasty she was still a women….30 mins later she was finishing her warm bath.
Bijou was still resting and Kichiko was nowhere to be seen.
Jandra came close to Bijou bed and saw him resting so calm.
-pffft…you?? a God??...-still she couldn’t believe some of the things she had seen.
She remembered that she was in a mission to see if the soul of the pole axe of Bijou was still under the power of the Giant Gobling King, the story was that a great weapon of death that was meant for a god appeared in Isya and the powers of Darkness took it for them but a hero destroy a weapon shattering it.
From that time to now the forces of Darkness had tried to gather those pieces.
But Elderine the one who destroy it put a seal that only a god could brake.
So the pole Axe was separated in two.
The evil minions have gathered the two parts and were planning on joining them.
Except they didn’t thought that the weapon had a mind of their own and make them war between them…and only the fiercest leaders took the body and the soul of the weapon.
The pole axe was divided by two ….
-….what would happened if it was one again- she asked herself and it seems as if Bijou held the answer in himself.

[ILiKePieLoRDoFKNiVeS]

Very good. only a few spelling errors here and there

[Erbian]

Oh i should have said this a long time ago i accept any kinda of suggestions and anykind of "look that word is mispelled" that kinda stuff rofl and thanks :P

[Erbian]

bump cus im writting

[smitske]

might consider using other colors, my eyes hurt >>

[Erbian]

yes i know stupid new color of the forums mmm imma think on orange or red or BLACK

[Erbian]

bump cus i dont want this to die....yet

[krazykris_2000]

Hmmm.... Interesting.

I was told by someone in game to come read this, so here I am...reading this.

[Erbian]

lo thx Wintergreen and may i gues who it was??

Jandra???

[krazykris_2000]

I think so, but I'm not positive ^^

[Erbian]

LOL ok imma think everyone i know and lol i like your IGN so u had to appear in the first chapters :D

[krazykris_2000]

Awwww xD

Thanks ^^

Good luck with the rest of it :P

[Erbian]

thank you i hope everyne can read this and i hope they like it

[Erbian]

=O i finally got an editor for my story =3 this is what you get when your first language isnt english lol x3 so i wont make more mispelling or a bit less grammar mistakes =3

[ILiKePieLoRDoFKNiVeS]

Common,hurry up

[Erbian]

lol i have like 3 9 chapters
but i dont know which one to post

[ILiKePieLoRDoFKNiVeS]

All of them!!!

[Erbian]

mmm multiples last chapters ...nice maybe i dont know but i have the 4th chapter now and i think ill post them in here

[Erbian]

Chapter 9 Bijou

-As far as we know this guy could be some new threat from the Gods- the mage was so hysterical that his face already red that the people around him felt that he was about to burst out.
-Cane!!!...calm down…we trust what death says, besides; he is the only one that really know what’s going on right now……- Meacko was as weak as ever, her endless burst of magic for the last 48 hours have sucked all his energys by now.
-Meacko please….how can you trust someone that came from the Swamp of Dawn speechless and disappeared for 6 months... and after that it gets better …he seems that hes the only one that can talk to spirits….what mage can talk to spirits in this forgotten forest…oh and lucky us he doesn’t reveal his real name and self proclaims himself death silence….yeah I can totally believe in a guy like him…I…- Cane shut her mouth as tall dark haired mage walk through the white hall.
His eyes were so piercing that Cane had to look in a different direction.
MEacko just gave yhe dark haired mage a weak smile and almost felled to the floor if it wasn’t for death to reach to her and grab her.
Meacko could remember when she saw death in the cave to Burning Rock.
His eyes were out of life and he looked as a mere wrecked soul.
Still he recovered somehow…she miss him so much after he disappeared but was happy when he entered the doors of Uruga once more.
Now she had this feeling of safety when he was around.
-you truly ….are a descendent of Jenira the high elf ….dont you Cane?- said death looking at Meacko with a smile only her could see.
-They are here death- said a cleric behind him – they are specting an answer…do we have it ??- she was very concerned... Trumpys reamain’s had been very chaotic since the four avatars had appear.
-Is ok Fura I shall tell them …alone- he glared to the mages and to the clerics- tell all of the Clan that they should go to the resting chambers and take a break….is my brother there too??-
Fura didn’t answer…she didn’t wanted to answer…
-what’s wrong Fura??- she looked to Cane with a glare that made the mage to leave taking the Meacko too….she grabbed the robe but death whisper her to leave -please Meacko..go-
After a awkward silence Fura sighted heavily.
-where’s my brother??...where is Erbian??-
Fura just moved her head sideways.
Death ran towards the meeting room without listening to Fura’s adviced of calming down…he wouldn’t.

Adrien was looking at the black Onyx table before her.
Uklyvian was so distant and he didn’t want to make the major more uncomfortable than she was already.
-Tell me now- she said- You already know how does unnerves me to see this mage eyes…and I still cant believe he’s Erbians Brother…-
The door opened in such a rash way.
-Where is he??- said death in a very demanding way.
-First of all greetings dark elf-Adrien said without any turmoil in his expressions-we don’t have much time and we need to discuss a lot of things -
Death was relentless but he wanted to know what happened so he follow the game.
-Have you clan finished reading the prophecies??- said Uklyvian.
-theres no one in this place or in this world that can read all…only the gods can do It an as far as I know 2 of them are sleeping still and the other two hasn’t been awaken at all..and no all the Ewigkeits are exhausted and thousands of words have been left without translation….-
Both visitors faces changed into a disturb view.
-….nevertheless we have enough to decipher who that boy is…-
Adrien looked for the first time in years at death eyes.
They truly resemble the name he had choosen.
- ….He is not Bijou…but he is something very similar to the god…-
Adrien and the fighter were perplexed by this.
-What do you mean?? – said Uklyvian quickly interumpting Adrien.
The door opened once more and a delicate figure appeared in front on the three persons.
Her pointed ears and her white skin made her immediately recognizable.
Only white elf that could use the magic given by the gods.
-As far as we got to read from the tablets Bijou was destroyed in the time that the gods fighted the High Elfs…he was scathered through the world…and has never been able to revive because of this….-
-Yosei …I don’t think that’s why they came here for…-Adrien looked shocked about what she had just heard.
-ohh yes…you mean you want me to tell them why are the gods appearing as Avatars in this world??- Yosei was the image of kindness but her words were as harsh as ever- well the Henneat Alliance have been battling with the dark forces since it was created…-
- And as a major you should know why it was created…-death continued and saw Adrien expression as she didn’t like how she felt the dumb person in the room.
-It was created to recover the pieces of Bijou that were scathered in the land of Isya- she said as something learned by heart.
-But what if the pieces were gathered by someone else??- said Yosei.
-What if the pieces were gathered by the same gods without knowing what were they doing….-
This time no one had anything to say.
The gods themselves were thinking that with Bijou’s crystal they could create powerful monsters that could for once eradicate the life in Isya.
-don’t ask us how it happened but I think that Bijou the same boy that is now in the Guild Hall of Bijou is just a part of the the God that once that gave us life to us all- death just explained all of this as he was gathering some of his ideas and creating new answers.
-and why would the Gods be gathering that for??- asked Uklyvian.
-jajaja…what am I??...a God?- said Yosei somber.
Adrien didn’t look at her but she stared at death…his silence make her uncomfortable again.
-they are preparing for a new War- said death in those dark words he was used to.


As Tenderly entered to the big chamber there was a tension in the air that changed her mood as she walked to her place.
The somber expressions of everyone in the room made her think that something really bad had happened.
She saw Master Enchanter Wishis in the room.
Her dark skinn and her piercing eyes made her uncomfortable.
She was a dark elf.
Always in her tower doing experiments that only the gods may know what she’s up to…..but her presence in this meeting made Tenderly think about how bad the situation was…
Captain Shutian entered the room and all fell silence.
-We can begin this meeting…as we speak the majors in the other citys are helding a similar reunion- he looked at Captain Sean that came closer.
-As many of you know …because if you didn’t you couldn’t be here… four gods have reborn in our world…we are certain who 3 of them are and the fourth we don’t have a confirmation about it….yet- said Sean

[Erbian]

Tenderly caught the dim silhouette of someone hiding behind of Captain Shutian.
-The master of every guild had been alerted of this and we are hoping that the rumor wont get out to the people of Isya…. At least until we can verify the identity of two of them…but the main reason of this meeting is for another reason…-Captain Shutain looked at Marty as the Warrior Master came closer, his fierce stare looked at everyone.
-from the 40 guards of Isya 38 have disappeared- then he looked at Tenderly- as you should know the guards of Isya are the only ones that can use a pole axe to defend what we call the Bijou’s arm…a weapon that was destroyed a long time ago and separarted into million of pieces…our reports from the scouts of Scout Master Deikid told us that the forces of Darkness have been gathering this pieces and until a year ago they had completed their task but….thanks to the Guild Alliance we could stop them from joining the two parts…40 persons from differents guilds….-
-42- Tenderly said as a whisper.
-….went to the concealed prision to stop them from joining the soul and the body of Bijou’ arm….and as a result of something kept as a secret they could manage to use those pole axes before their 50 test…a war between the Torturer King and the Giant Gobling King was declared and fought letting thousands of prisioners escape-
All of them remembered that the walls of the now called Collapse Prison fell and the frontier with Elderine has been heavily guarded since that time.
The only passage from Elderine to Uruga had been populated with prisioners and traitors that had been the guards of that prision.
Even ranked officials now called themselves Senior Citizens and by some evil the Captain in command of that prision grew into a grotesque form of humanoid….
….self-proclaim himself The Torturer King.
-we received informs from the new Master of the Guild Alliance that the sould of Bijou’s arm is no longer in possession of the GGK…-the person behind Shutian interrupted Marty.
-But what we didn’t know it was that some of the crystals were gathering were the crystals of Bijou- said the figure behind him.
Death silence…the brother of Erbian was here.
-So what does all of this has to do with 38 of us disappearing- said a cloaked man and pointing his thumb to his chest- because I don’t recall the reason that why are we here…and I don’t really have much time…-
-Keep your words Sinto- that voice as strong and with such a sense of authority was one of the high paladins in the Order of Teva….no one new his name but they did his alias and why did he had that for…
They called him The Whitelighter.
The only cleric in all Isya that had fought against a MiniDragon alone.
Tenderly’s dad was as mighty as ever only her knew how that man was truly.
-Sinto you were summon here because yourself and Leona were the only ones that could entered the bondage of darkness, neither a mage, an archer or a cleric could passed that barrier- the Whitelighter pierce Sinto with his stare.
“that’s not true” Tenderly thought.
Marty saw the tension between these two and continued.
-We are sending you… to the Bondage of Darkness again to check if the body of Bijou’s Arm is still under The Torturer King grasp and if possible recovering it-
Sinto made a noises like a pig and began to laugh as a mad person.
-Do you actually mean what you said??- Sinto was horrify with what he just heard- its not like if I can just enter and walk like if it was Sand Beach…there guards of powerfuls Boars and HArkans in there…..not counting the Ogres and Prisioners ….oh yeah and it gets better, there are red crystals imprisoned there that takes your energy as you pass by-
Death couldn’t tolerate that man and he went to the door.
The sound of the two doors opening made everyone looked in that direction.
-I'll go...- said the person who had just entered,,,
It was Bijou.

“ –How can you be sure of what are you saying death- Adrien asked with a little fear in his voice- how can someone say what are the gods up to??-
Deaths took something out of his robes and showed it to everyone.
It was a green crystal that glowed intensively.
-this is a crystal that I got from journey to the south-
They all looked without words at it.
Uklyvian looked and tried to grab that crystal and all the scars of battles disappeared as if never existed and something in his soul healed also.
-did you find it in Roumen??- Yosei asked.
-No- death didn’t want to answer but this wasn’t important- to a land across the ocean much more far than an elf sight in a boat.”

Bijou was standing in front of everyone and most of them coiled looking at him.
Tenderly went to send him outside when a hand grabbed her.
Her dad made her stop so she could listen.
-You cant go- death said.
Bijou felt something inside of him and called that something to go outside of his body.
A shining pole axe was in his hand standing as tall as him.
Everyone gasped out of astonishment.
Death crystal was flying towards Bijou and as soon as it broke the chain that hold it to death’s neck it joined Bijou’s body.
Silence felt upon the room once again.
-who was the last person who had disappeared??- asked Deikid.
Marty looked to the floor and said…- the captain of the 9th squadron of Uruga….Master of The Ewigkeits-
Tenderly was struck down but didn’t flinch even a bit.
Captain Sean looked at Bijou standing as most of the presents in there.
-So be it…-
Something had just happened…
A beginning that would probably wouldn’t end in any nearby future.

[Erbian]

One more chapter and then the Epilogue after that imma write another story i hope u guys like it

[ILiKePieLoRDoFKNiVeS]

i like it a loooooootttttttt. keep writing, your good.

[ILiKePieLoRDoFKNiVeS]

epilogue please

[Wywyman]

EXCELLENT..BRAVO... but uh, how do you find the time to write this, I hardly have enough time to do my homework as it is...

[Erbian]

<.< well when im doing my HW while im solving an equation at the same time im making mobs with tend and when im killing at the same time im writting and when im writting im chatting in the guild chat while im shouting in Uruga thats when


I hope i have answered your question ;D

[ILiKePieLoRDoFKNiVeS]

you are one talented person...

[Erbian]

lol and i didnt include that I spamm the forums because thats like breathing

[Erbian]

chapter 10 comming tonight

[Erbian]

Chapters 10 warriors

Tenderly and Death had offered themselves to guide Bijou and Sinto to the Bondage of Darkness, even though many opposed the idea; the words of Guard Captain Shutian were finals and indisputable.
Either way they couldn’t go right away.
There were some troubles in the border of the region, as the population of King Colls and Harkans had increased four times than it was already.
Prisioners that were lurking in the dark corners of the Collapse Prison area now were wandering freely in the forest and had made severals camps nearby the fallen prison.

The only passage between Uruga and Elderine had been blocked by several walls of Ice created by the vivis “ creatures of the four elements”.

Tortures, in charge of the prison walked freely hitting and inciting prisoners to fight between them…

“ Someone is doing all this” was the common thought among the lines of soldiers in Elderine, an assault that was been taken with a lot of preparations…
From time to time guards in Elderine walls could see troops of Karassians soldiers moving from different points as if making patrols….
Soon after that just a week later they began to see some of the Karrassian Templars in command of the Soldiers and giving lots of instructions….
They disappeared one day….
Three days later the Arch Templars came and the Collapse Prison was now in under their command….

Reports from scouts told them that there were a lot of activity in the Concealed Prison.
Scout Master Deikid decidd not to sent more of his scouts because of the horribles dead they had experienced while searching in that place.

-DAMN!?!- death shout was heard in all the area- How come they just stand there and do nothing as those scouts are already dead and more to be-
-Will you calm down!?!- said Tenderly looking at death with a very preoccupied voice-
-How can you say that when your own husband, my brother is lost and possibly in that mad place-
Tenderly didn’t knew how to answer…” I just…believe in him” she thought and looked at Bijou.
Bijou who hadn’t wasted his time during his stay in Elderine had been under the tutorial of Warrior Master Marty teaching him the way of the sword and axe.
Training his abilitys to the full…
Marty was surprised how the boy was learning the use of the sword but was more surprised at how he was so accomplished at the use of a pole axe.
After a few sessions Marty saw how he was skilled with that axe as if he using a mere one handed sword.
Tenderly’s dad saw all his training and time after time he was surprised about that boy skills with the sword…he truly was a Warrior.
-You do know that this bijou isn’t the avatar of our god?? Don’t you??- asked Death.
-what do you mean??- asked the cleric.
-He means that besides Teva, Epith and Apoline…Bijou isn’t Human…-a Dark came to them and his eyes were as cold as they were the day he was born.
-Goshire?? What are you doing in here??- asked death.
-I was send here to talk to Zelkova…don’t tell me that you didn’t knew about the fight she and Jandra had 5 days ago??....they destroyed half of the hall of Bijou because of that and it took more than half of it to stop them…Never seen a fighter and a cleric to do so much damage in one place fortunally someone came in the right time to stop them, if it weren’t for Apoline they would have destroyed the entire guild hall…-
Bijou walked towards them.
-hahaha, this got to be a joke…is that Bijou??- said Goshire in an almost hysterical laugh- that fighter is Bijou?? No wonder I didn’t like him in the first place…-
Tenderly didn’t like Goshire laugh but didn’t pay attention.
She went and greeted the fighter.
-So where is Zelkova right now??- asked the death.
-She is helping Teva right now in Roumen…there was a rampage of Slimes and they made a chaos in roumen…-Goshire was paralyzed by some force and looked behind him…he saw the green eyed fighter…
-Do you remember me Gosh??- said Bijou.
-How can I forget a the newbie fighter that cause so much trouble in the Forest of Mist??... Machi was dead worried about you…but it seems you are pretty ok …oh god Bijou…- and in a mockery he bowed in front of Bijou.
Bijou saw that dim of sarcasmn in the enchanter smile but didn’t do anything…
-Gosh stand up please- said Tenderly.
-just don’t forget you aren’t a mere Avatar….you maybe are…..the god himself…-
This time the words of Gosh were somber.
-By the way Jandra isn’t in Elderine anymore- said the enchanter and left.

[Erbian]

After another two days of making preparations for the trip Bijou disappeared.
-Aren’t we suppouse to wait for the others??- said Sinto hiding in the shadow of a tree.
-they are taking too much time and besides aren’t we Warriors??- answer Bijou without stopping.
Sinto laughed- I am a Warrior…don’t get to ****y just because you can use one of the most powerful weapons in Isya..there are some others that are more powerful than this pole Axe… and you don’t see anyone bragging about it…-
-Im not bragging about it…-Bijou was interrupted by Sinto stare- then don’t even trust the shadows in the place we are going-
Both Warriors walked towards the Concealled Prison hiding between shadows while the Karrassian Soldiers walked by.
-damn we might need to kill some of them if we want to enter to the first floor…-said Sinto who began to look around him searching for a better approach.
A blast came from behind them.
A Templar had spot them and now had alerted the camps around.
-RUN!?!- Sinto shouted.
Bijou and Sinto ran towards the bridge.
After they passed the doors Bijou stopped and got back trying to lock them.
-damn Boy why don’t we just run while we can and hide until all calms down- Sinto had to go back and helped, while the rest of the troops were after them.
As they closed one of the doors they were already half way to them.
The second one didn’t want to closed because it was too heavy and it was all rusted.
-go-
A firmly but calmed voice came behind them.
StartLeona the new Guild Master of the Guild Alliance was behind them with Wintergreen and Goshire…
-go and find out whats going and don’t go back to Elderine until you really know??-
As the party clashed with the mighty army of Karrassians Bijou couldn’t stop that feeling that was now hunting him “ we should have stayed and helped”
-hahaha…you are crazy to think that we could have help them…- Sinto said.
Bijou scolded at him and at the same moment somehow the image of Jandra came to his mind….what happened??
-we would be only making a harder job for them…they can handle that themselves-
Bijou ran as fast as he could and before he began to realize they were in a dead forest.
-something is wrong in here….-
Sinto had heard reports that inside the prison walls there were thousands of camps….but as he could see now there was only the wind and dead trees.
They both walked towards the bridge and looked at the old bridge.
Beyond that point the entrance to the prison first floor and after that the Bondage of Darkness....

[Erbian]

comming soon chapter 11 and epilogue

[ILiKePieLoRDoFKNiVeS]

it was good, but i get confusseled alot...

[Erbian]

lmao sorry ill try better next time

[ILiKePieLoRDoFKNiVeS]

no.. its just that i thought that bijou was death, then i couldnt find where death came in..

[Erbian]

death appeared from the chapter where they are in Trumpys remains o.O

[ILiKePieLoRDoFKNiVeS]

oh ill go check it out now...

[shazad20074]

awesome =D

[Erbian]

I have been away from my latop for a while so i didnt remember what I had written so far so i think tomorrow and on monday Ill finish this story

[Erbian]

Chapter 11 Bondage of Darkness

After several hours, Bijou and Sinto were running towards one of the cells trying to hide for the battalions of Karasian soldiers that were following them.
-Are you alright??- asked Bijou concerned about Sinto left arm.
-Dont worry about me...- he looked deadly serious about that, but it was because he had learn what a heavy burden this mission had become.
Bijou looked throught the iron bars and he could see the shadows of the soldiers running in every direction it was matter of time before they were found.
-Bijou...- Sinto called- theres something you must know...-
Bijou walked towards Sinto who wasnt looking good at all.
-Dont be an idiot im not dying... im just tired of fighting for 4 hours straight-
Bijou smirked and sat beside Sinto.
-Theres a secret that has been guarded by us the warriors of Isya- Sinto began the story...

" Shortly after the begining, before the GM's were created; Gods fought between them to destroy and corrupt this world... Teva was by far helpless in her fight to defend the people in Isya and when she was about to give up... a God came to her help... that God was named Bijou...

Bijou loved to create and to heal what was injured by the gods and for that he was destroyed... unfortunally....
...But that wasnt bad news at all...because of that Bijou was able to protect all the world through his crystals.
The pieces of Bijou scattered throughout Isya began to transform the world and so Teva wasnt alone
The gods were in rage when they found out about this but another bad thing had to happen...
Markis soldiers found a little piece of Bijou and with the help of the goddes Nik corrupted the fragment and therefor an Army of darkness was born...
Markis then knew that if they found all the pieces of Bijou they could create new monsters made for destruction..."
-So what happened??- said Bijou.
-we are still fighting arent we??- answered Sinto- they havent found all the fragments...- Sinto looked at Bijou - theres is a unknow story that its only known to the council...-

"Apoline found out that there were 3 fragments that were bigger than all...this 3 fragments took the form of spiritual pole axe, the second took the form of a old pole axe...and the third was lost unknown...
Apoline gave way too much greed to her soldiers and so they took the crystals for themselves and with the help of Nik the goddes of greed couldnt take the crystals back...
...But now we found the third crystal in the form of a young boy named.. Bijou"

Bijou now understood why he wanted to go and look for the third crystal.
-so thats why all of the guards of Isya are missing, they are all trying to recover the third crystal for you Bijou... we have the hope we can get the God back from the dead- said Sinto and out of nowhere he brought forth a Golden Viking Axe.

... and so they walked towards the darkness of the Concealed prison... looking for the hidden passage of the Bondage of Darkness

[ILiKePieLoRDoFKNiVeS]

thanks for updating the story!
congrats on MVP!

[drigr_x]

Your an MVP whats with the necro?

[Erbian]

o.O since I was away cus of school I couldnt finish up the story now that I have time I will finish it

[kalone]

Lol.

Nice stuff Erb.

[Erbian]

;D thanks Kalone im preparing chapter 12 now :P for those who thinks this is a nechro then pm a CL and report this thread o.O if they think that this should be closed then its ok :P still Im gonna finish this story

[drigr_x]

I think its necro'd but I think it still has purpose. And since the OP is still posting they are still reading it and therefore doesn't follow the same path as most necro's where people don't think the OP is gonna see it anymore.

[krazykris_2000]

Erb... you slacker... where's chapter 12?

[Erbian]

chapter 12

Erbian was tired and he fell to the cold ground.
The Torturer King wasnt pleased with this. He had hope for his death 4 hours ago but none of his minions had made an deathly injury on him.
Erbian and the rest of the guardians were surrounded but didnt back down.
A archmage came closer to the TK's throne and whispered something.
A group of people had entered his kingdom in different ways.
A cleric and a Mage had entered and killed the King coll.
There was a havoc created by a party in the entrance of the concealed prison and there were 2 more running towards the Bondage of Darkness killing everything in their path.

Rage covered the TK's eyes and ordered to eliminate the 42 warriors before him. A countless battalion of Karassians Soldiers came walking from two different doors and they all halted in front of Erbian and the others.

Tenderly felt a heavy burden in her heart.
-we must hurry death- she said while the mage had to turn a flame in his hand to light the path before them.
-so you have also felt that- he said while he watched some strange carvings in the wall.
Tenderly knew that death could also feel his brothers life in danger.
-RUN!?!- shouted death and an enourmous Stonie began to move.
-what the...- Tenderly began to chant an incantation to protect death but another Ancient stonie hit her and launch her across the room.
-Nova!!- DEath felt the hit and felt unconcious near to Tenderly.
The floor crumbled bellow them and they fell into a darkness that could eat their hopes if they knew what they were falling into.

Bijou choped the harkans head and ran towards Sinto who had managed to get pass 4 archmages and finally they were getting to the passage to the Bondage of Darkness.
-please dont make any sound- said Sinto.
Bijou didnt even move and darkness covered the room.
The archmages came towards launching spells in every single direction.
The sound of moving rock ended the life of them.
Sinto grabbed Bijous arms and made him move slowly.
-What was that??- asked Bijou.
-They were Ancient warriors that were made statues and in time they loosed their form.. now we called them Ancient Stonies... we will have to move now but I have to tell you one thing when we enter the Bondage your heart will feel way more dispair than ever...so becareful..-
Bijou already knew that but he trusted his ring... and the wise words of Tenderly, he now remembered Jandra and aksed himself where she was?

Jandra watched how the 42 men fighted against the hordes of soldiers.
She hadnt found what was she looking for.
Where was that third piece...
slowly as she was taught she moved towards one of the pillars and hid behind the shadows looking from afar...
She saw in that moment how the TK stood up and raised his hand.
A enourmous axe pole shining green appeared out of nowhere and struck hard against the 42 men and his soldiers.
A shining blue blessing appeared out of nowhere protecting the 42 soldiers.
Jandra heard the growl coming from the fat torturer and the rage within.
could it be?? Could the third crystal be inside TK himself??

[Shadowic2]

Moving this to the Fan-Fiction section.

[Erbian]

ok thanks xD I was about to pm u for it lol

[ILiKePieLoRDoFKNiVeS]

yey!! your back
keep going!:)