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KateeHellen
07-02-2008, 01:56 PM
Chapter 1<short>
Uruga was as usuall full of life, many brave adventures have been moving in all possible directions.
Some of them just walk and take short look at vendoer offering various goods
Weapons, jewelery, many diferent sorts of armours, and some of the vendors purchased high quality materials.
Some of those wanderers accually make purchases or sell thier findings making sometimes really good deals.
City itself was build up at huge mountain and even first glance of this city were magnificent.
Entering city after wandering via dark passage gives upcommer view at almoust whole city.
Left side from the always open City gates have been occuped by huge Uruga's Palace right now closed tight <to save money at cleaning staff according Uruga's City Chief Adrien> but regulary used for annual metting of Isya citys heads.
Exept this masive palace Uruga's architecture was very spartanic because City itself was more as a large camp post as regular city like much bigger Elderine.
But even if city was lack of many "atractions" inside was everything what adventures need in thier way to Ancient Elven Woods or other dangerous places.
Young redhaired fighter girl take sit at egde of masive cliff and starting observed wandering group of Orc Hunters and King Mushrooms.
She known that Uruga was not safe place because sometimes Orcs or Mushrooms have managed to slip into city making guards powerless.
Sudden wind blow cause a single red hair to slip at her eye forcing her to put him back to his place.
When she take look at wandering group again she was stuned... Orcs and Mushrooms lay dead at grass but what was strange she dont saw nearby even single adventurer...
------------------------- To be Continued---------------------------------


Alright thats a short story witch maybe one day will grow at something bigger :).
Please tell me what you think about this and if this is worth continuing .

RyaAria
07-03-2008, 10:31 AM
Hmm...I think you should keep going =D
I wanna know who this mysterious adventurer is o.o

KateeHellen
07-03-2008, 10:55 AM
Hmm...I think you should keep going =D
I wanna know who this mysterious adventurer is o.o

:)Thank you for your response and i assure you that i post more as soon as i will have acknowlegdement to use couple names of my in game friends :)

KateeHellen
07-03-2008, 12:33 PM
Chapter 2<short version>
She looking down but whit all her sharpened suddenly senses she cannot figuredout what was going on down there.
Someone who known Uruga's enviroment might ask what was so strange in this whole sytuation.
Maybe some high skilled mage witch was plenty in Uruga decide to take advantage and kill whole party but girl senses told her something diferent.
She known that there was something wrong in this whole sytuation.
-Jarrion!
She yell in direction of wandering nearby fury Raccoon.
Jarrion imidietly move back to her but when girl sit at him she realise that fur of her mover was standing up and Jarrion's body was shaked up in short nerve spasm.
-Whats wrong boy? -she ask.
Raccoon look at her and respond.
-I sense something evil nearby.
-I known. -she answer. <she mastered long time ago her ability to talk whit animals so she known what he say> -but i need to reach that area.
Jarrion imidietly took off and after couple of minutes they reach area of attack.
She start to egzamined laying at grass dead bodies but soon she realize that all of them have no trace of usage any sort of weapon or spell.
After long time in Isya she have learn to recordnized all sort of wounds and thats why this whole sytuation rised more questions as ansfers.
All dead bodies looks like someone drain thier life forces till one last spark of life.
She frown because she known far too good this technique...
It was Dark side master level Life drain technique.

Time: 200459.7 c.t
Location: Narris - Serrianar System.*

-Master you call me? - her voice was calm but entire inside of her was shaken from fear caused by man who wear black shiny armour and currently stand near huge window watching storm clouds comming in direction of his fortrees but his face was unseen because of deep shadow.
After a while he respond whit deep full of absolute power voice.
-Yes..., your teacher tell me that you have learn your lessons well and you are ready for final test.
However your final exam will be delayed for a some period of time because i want that you go at land of Isya.
Girl look at him suprised.
-But Master they will never agree to let me there.
Dark Lord shake light his head but respond.
-In normal way you are correct, however i reach deal witch will allowed you to land at Isya.
Girl closed her eyes and afer moment of silence she ask quiet.
-My abilites will be blocked?
Dark man look at her but she can see only his eyes and respond.
-Yes..., and before you will yell at me because of that i want to tell you that i realise that train you in way of Dark side was a big mistake from my side because there is lot more good in you as you suspect.
Girl smiled lightly and say.
-No Master, thank of my training i achieve lot more as i expected, beside i havent fall on the Dark Side and you known that we are unable to complet remain on just one side.
-Far too well. - answer Dark Lord whit smile - but do not worry when proper time come you will get back all your abilites.
Suddenly he lower his voice and say.
-When you be there i ask you to be extremaly cautious, if you use your Force power when you will still be on Isya...
-I understand Master... i will be exiled from there.
Dark Lord confirm her words but he add also looking at storm behind window.
-And i am afraid thats its will be only a matter of time when they will find you there and that will be time for you to make final choice.
-I will be cautious Master...
---------------------------To be continued----------------------------------------

*Narris is very high technological advanced planet in Serrianar Star System located about 120k light years from Isya.

KateeHellen
07-03-2008, 12:45 PM
Chapter 3

Suddenly girl noticed that somethig was moved in nearby high grass.
Instinctivity she prepare her sword when she saw a young boy in blue cleric armour.
He walk slow and from the first view was clear that his life forces was almoust empty.
She jump imidietly and manage to catch him in her arms before he fell at the ground.
-What happend here? - she whisper.
Boy's eyes were closed, his breath was sharp and unregular.
Girl almoust imidietly spoted deep wound in his chest and for her was clear that this wound was not afflicted by any sort of swords created at Isya.
But what suprised her most even when she try to give him special healing potion witch she bought recently in Spark Departament Store she have no effect.
-This was a huge guy who wear armour i have never seen here- he whisper.
-Shhhh... its ok, spare your breath, you will told me more after we comeback to Uru.
-I wont survive before we reach city... - after a moment of silence he say - he kill those orcs and shrooms by using some sort of deep blue energy rays witch he spamm from his left hand and this mob just fell at ground after one hit.
Then he spoted me and attack using some sort of crimson red doublebladed ligth sword.
However when he tought that i am dead and start to move away i manage to spot one thing at his armour - girl have whatch whit full of pain glare how boy's breath slowing down but whit last sparks of his remain energy life he say - this was symbol of gold trident at yellow circle whit two single redblade sabers at both sides.
"Virrogan Elite Dark Trooper" - she taught.
Those troopers were special trained in use of Master Level Dark side skills and lightsabers and she known that thier attack were 100% deadly.
Then she noticed that boys breath have stopped.
-Thank you... - she whispered - you helped me greatly by reveal this news and may The Force be whit you.
She move her hand over his eyes and when she saw a group of adventurers she wave at them and asked for help to carry boys body to city.
Couple hours later whole Uruga have known news about this attack and fact that killed boy despite best efforts of Paladin Master Keast from Elderine did not return to life.
Warrior Master Marty and Skill Master Ruby after arriving to Uruga have organized imidietly two group of elite adventurers but they effortless check all sectors near Uruga.
Attacker was gone leaving behind a shadow of fear.
But almoust noone have pay attention to lonely girl figher siting at egde of clife.
Her eyes were wet from tears because she realize that mortal enemys of her Order manage to land at Isya and endagered egsistence of every single been here.

"Remember this my young students, if you will be killed durring confrontation whit virrogans then this will be your last batte and your souls will be lost forever..."

Voice of her teacher Mistress Lian were like propercy of inevitable but she known that thanks of her skills she were able to whitstand fight against Virrogan trooper but thats require something about she was not ready to do, and this was removing her blockade of connection whit The Force.
She take look at her fury companion and say.
-Virrogans always work in 31 person teams whit leading Knights and Knights knowlegde of The Dark Side makes Legel a newbie who just start to learn how to use The Force.
But I am suprised that they manage to land here undetect.
Jarrion first say nothing but then he spoken.
-What you expect... Isya have no techology to prevent such unwelcome visits.
Girl shake her head but in her mind grow major question and she realize that answer at those will determine her entire future at Isya.
"Is She a target looking by the Virrogans or this is begining of full scale invasion at Isya?"
But soon she realize once..., no mater what is correct answer because both of them will required from her to step up and drop her current camouflage...
And she was one thig certain, after this batte she will leave Isya forever.
But she decide to pay this price in order to save land witch she love whit all her heart.
-------------------------- To be Continued -------------------------------

Nimiae
07-03-2008, 02:34 PM
Nice, keep going. Is Narris in the same system as Isya?
Nice work, cheers :D

hazeal
07-03-2008, 02:56 PM
I want to hear more too please Katee ^_^

KateeHellen
07-03-2008, 06:38 PM
Alright now i stop because i must rethink couple plots and perhaps develop some names for characters :)
Anyway i hope that what i write have atleast spark of logic and its able to read :D
Oh... and i am sorry for my <still> rusty english :o

aleckine
07-03-2008, 08:12 PM
wow..nice... I saw the title Prelude to Fiesta's Exile and I was like, ***???
out of curiousity I read the whole masterpiece. And I liked the story. It's cool.





EXILE
guild master

Kitsune020
07-03-2008, 08:55 PM
Yea its really good

KateeHellen
07-04-2008, 03:39 AM
wow..nice... I saw the title Prelude to Fiesta's Exile and I was like, ***???
out of curiousity I read the whole masterpiece. And I liked the story. It's cool.





EXILE
guild master

Oh...:o i am sorry for confusion and thank you for your comment :)
Kitsune020 i try my best and i am glad tha you liked :)

KateeHellen
07-04-2008, 02:46 PM
Chapter 4

Marlone walk nervously over whole cave and no member of his clan be rady to breake dead silence.
Even flying not so long ago nearby Archibooks now silently wait for developing of events.
-You call me brother? - Mara's voice was soft like sharp egde of sword but Marlone look at her and say.
-Alien forces overrun my hill camp and now they turned him in heavyly defended fortress.
Luckyli to have in off time to sneak here by secret entrance in my camp house.
-What you mean aliens? - she ask stunned.
Marlone sit at one of the chest and respond.
-I dont known..., they wear metalic black heavy and unpenetrable for our arrows armours, carry weapons witch kill by one hit and use some sort of stell machines.
Suddenly to chamber where all was gather walks a single heavy bleeding archer.
Two soldiers rush imidietly to help her but she fainted and lost her concusnes
After a while she wake up and she saw that her wound was now a deep scarr but bleed have stopped and when she saw Marlone she say.
-Entire squad was wiped out before we reach main camp gate.
I stay behind because i have problems whit my bow so i observe what happend.
Direct at the gate they placed some sort of turrets whit ray guns and thier fire range is very large and thats why they manage to kill everyone from my team before they realise what is going on and those turrets cover entire area from gate till half road to Sand Hill and thats why any frontal attack is futile.
I try to sneak nearby but i was spoted by walking near by machine and shot but i manage to evade, or atleast i tought that and this ray hit me only partialy othervise i will be dead right now.
When i fell at the ground this machine simply walk away dont pay attention at me anymore.
Then single grave robber appear and hep me to get here using one of the secret entrances.
After a moment of silence she say.
-Boss they killed everyone in Burning Hill, not a single Baby bat was left alive.
She fall asleep and Mara looked at her brother whit glare full of first time in her life real fear.
Marlone closed his eyes and after long inside deliberation he say.
-We must warn people in Roumen, Elderine and other towns.
Seing suprised look in eyes of Mara and his clan warriors he claryfy his stance.
-This is no ordinary event, and if they start to fortyfy our camp thats mean they plan to stay here for very long time.
And i am more as sure that they will not stop at Burning Hill but they bring here more troops and next will be Roumen, after that Elderine and of course Uruga and belive me sister... no forcess at whole Isya will be able to stop them.
One of the soldiers respond.
-Boss they wont belive us...
-They already known about them but they have no idea that this is full scale invasion at Isya.
Everyone have turn around at the chamber entrance but everything what they saw was only shape of a person wearing black cloak and large hood.
-Who are you and how...
Mysterious women break Mara's questions and answer.
-Who i am is no matter, what is now important is save Isya from falling in hands of forcess of darkness.
I known that thanks to Teva's blessing all Isyas creatures can reborn after death and that is something what makes this place unique.
Marlone smile a little and say.
-Havent you forget someone?
-Legel? - mysterious woman chuckle - trust me Marlone if this pitty example of god will even try to destroy Isya there are forcess ready to kick his bottom to remember him where is his place.
-But what about those soldiers in camp?-ask Mara.
-They called Virrogans and they are elite forces of Shaar"Goon"Dar Empire.
The most brutal and deadlyest soldiers as galaxy ever seen, and thats is reason why i give you all serious suggestion to stay away from thier path untill they will be driven out from here.
If you will be killed by thier weapons then you my kiss Teva bless good bye.
Marlone shake his head in confirmation and spoken.
-Dont worry, we will move to our new underground hideout in Goblin Camp and start and form there a resistance.
Woman make no sign but she say.
-Agree, and i will suggest to make contact whit Karasian because his Templars may become great asset in this war.
-What about Helga and others great monsters?-ask Mara.
Woman respond whit sad voice.
-No, they should at all cost stay away because Helga's power lay in direct attacks, same as Mini Dragon or King Phino.
After a moment of silence she say.
-Hovewer there are some elite monsters who may help at this moment.
Marlone look at her and respond.
-Skeleton Knight, Zombie King and Knights, Ghost Knight and Slime...
-Exacly because you cannot twice killed something what is already dead.
She answer but she add.- however i am not sure if people from Citys will find in off inner strenght and trust to work whit them at this same side.
Deep sigh from Marlones chest was all what everyone hear after silence but he sudden ask.
-But do they and we have other choice?
Mysterious woman turn around and when she start walking away she respond.
-Not if they will survive... - and she disapear leaving marlonites busy whit dislocation of thier hideout.
---------------------------To Be Continued--------------------------------

KateeHellen
07-04-2008, 03:47 PM
I decide to change title because i realise that my story start to dwindle in completly diferent direction as i intended at the begining.

KateeHellen
07-08-2008, 04:02 PM
Chapter 5

ONE WEEK LATER.

Great Council Chamber in Uruga's palace was filled whit leaders of the stronges guilds in Isya and of course whit heads people from Uruga, Elderine<exept capitain Shutian who remain as commander of city's deffence> and Roumen.
However there was no single people from Sand Hill because Sand Hill camp was razed from the surface in sudden air attack.
Information about this deliver to Roumen one of the Marlones Megaton.
Almoust everyone have commented latest turn of events when sudden huge dors have been opened and the chamber enter one of the greatest Isya Knights.
At his face were clear traces of blood and his shiny not long ago armour wear now battle scars.
-Elderine have fallen.-he spoken whit emotionless woice.
In entire chamber become deadly silent.
-How big casualties? -ask Ruby.
Knight respond imidietly.
-City Guard lost half of thier forces and sadly we lost also many brave adventurers.
Shutian forbid them to join battle but they dont lisening and pay ultimate price.
After 3 hours of fierce batte Shutian decide to surrender city in order to save those who survive siege.
Marty walk in all directions but after a while he say.
-He should fight untill...
-He will end like Chief Julian in Sand Hill- say angry Ruby -and perhaps they will eradicate Elderine as well because of this.
Master Keast sit in silence but suddenly she spoken.
-This is very bad sytuation for us.
Thier weapons kill not only body but also soul prevent working of great gift of reborn after death granted us by Teva herself.
If they come here i really doubt if we will be able to whitstand them.
Sudden girl voice made everyone's turn in direct of one of the windows.
-You forget about one of the bigest Uruga advantages over Sand Hill, Roumen or Elderine and i mean location of Uru.
Ruby look at her for a moment and say.
-You are correct, Uruga is a mountain city and we can use this as our advantage.
-Ruby - Chief Adrien expressed her concern - we dont have weapons to fight them.
-Nevertheless i will fight agains them using even a wood stick as sit and wait as the come here...

-Yaayks... sudden cold touch at her neck caused that Kaeena jump high in the air and when she land and turn around she saw cute brown fury face whit two big teeth in front.
-Do that again Yakoo and i will make carpet from you.- she say noticed also huge smile at Jarrion's face<Yakoo was Jarrions brother>.
Blue haried girl jump from Yakoo and say.
-I apologize for him Kaeena, he always try to make such jokes.
Kaeena shake her head and answer.
-Its alright Lemnear, i known very well that fury joker.
Suddenly she saw a wound at Lemnear's arm.
-If not Yakoo i will be propably dead by now- she say and after a moment she add.- they overrun Elderine and arrested everyone who survive siege.
Kaeena saw at Lemnear's eyes growing up tears and ask quietly.
-Who?
-Zerrionn, he help me to escape from Eldy but before he was able to cross gate he was shot by soldiers who appears to take over gate guard
Zerrionn was a young and very promising viz mage and Kaeena known that between them were also something more.
Kaeena closed her eyes for the first time over 15 years she use her high skilled senses and soon she reach Elderine.
-He is wounded but alive.-she say stunned Lemnear whit this news.
-Kaeena you realise that using our senses here...
-Is forbiden?, yes but we will deal whit this after we chase off them from Isya.
Lemnear close also her eyes and soon she reach Zerrionn's mind.
"-We will rescue you somehow, i promise."-she spoken using force.
At Elderine's arena Zerrionn who sit at hard sand covered arenas plate smile lightly heard Lemear's voice.
He known atleast that she safe reach Uru so then he turned his head in direction of older cleric girl siting nearby and whisper dont want to drag attention from guards.
-She made it.
Girl shake her head and also smile lightly.

ISYA'S ORBIT.

Captain Missa Genarro have watch main screen at command brigde of her light crusier >>*PHOENIX*<< and was little concern.
After a moment she order.
-Set contact whit >>*QUEEN ASHEE*<<.
Communication officer shake her head nd after 5 minutes at second screen appear Jedi Master Vanessa Foster commanding officer of 7th Imperial Fleet.
-Report.-say Vanessa.
-We located 12 Base ships at orbit and we assume that another base ships are underway.
Main ships have cover consist over 60 capital ships *Tellasir* class and over 200th smaler ships diferent class.
-Surface?
-Recent scann reveal that they destroyed Sand Hill and takeover controll over Elderine and Roumen, however Uruga remain untouch.
Admiral Winter Ashby appear at screen and say.
-Jugding from terrain shape over Uruga they will have tought job to try takeover that city from ground.
And about thier space forces... *Tellasir* battleships are no mach for our >>"ASHEERAN"<< class SuperStarDestroyers so i doubt that we will have problems whit them, Base ships however are diferent stories and i am not sure if we wont need >>*ARDAANAA's*<< support.
Vanessa shake her head but after a short inside deliberation she ask main ship enginer.
-Io is possible to increase firepower of our main hyperphaser without burning whole ship down.
Young Zaatraa's enginer start thinking and after a moment she respond.
-Yes, we just need to activate energy connection from 4 dissarioum core, but so far we wont need this then this was inactive.
-Do it.-ordered Vanessa and she say in direction of Missa.-Continue monitoring and report imidietly any changes.
Missa shake her head and broke connection...
--------------------------To Be Continued---------------------------------